TS THE FOUR PART 6A : BEHIND ENEMY LINES BEGINNING PG 35 22/05 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61
That was really hilarious!These twins are mad boys...
Enjoyed it completely!love it love love it
Like everyone here,I also wished SKR could have portrayed these refreshing moments.As always,You write so good.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
Shivam 🤗 Enjoyed reading it !
Loved the way you portrayed all characters .
So apt and beautiful 👏
Write more . Waiting for the next update .

Love,
Sruthi

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Posted: 8 years ago
#63
awesome. loved the writing. waiting to read more.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
🤣. Superb, ur laxman nd Shatrugan are awesome. Cvs wale to bhut boring h.😡.
Each nd every scene is written vry beautifully. U r an amazing dialogue writer. Chhoti chhoti nok jhok, masti, light moment, I m like
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65
Special Thanks To everyone for appreciating and liking the Story.😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
Very mischievous twins but sweet ones.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
Shivam it's superb..
Love every but of it...
Each character their fun ...
Amazing update dear...
Enjoyed...
Waiting for more ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: eternity_of_luv

Shivam it's superb..
Love every but of it...
Each character their fun ...
Amazing update dear...
Enjoyed...
Waiting for more ...



Thanks Ranjana , I will try to come up with part 4 , currently my mind is completely cross - wired , trying for some new ideas.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69
hey shivam...I always love ur writings... but yeah tho hadh hain yaar...was laughing madly at dat 3rd update... do update more...

pm kariyo
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70

Originally posted by: Messi2

hey shivam...I always love ur writings... but yeah tho hadh hain yaar...was laughing madly at dat 3rd update... do update more...

pm kariyo


hey , thanks a ton
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