TS THE FOUR PART 6A : BEHIND ENEMY LINES BEGINNING PG 35 22/05 - Page 6

Shivam...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: sugunmanas
nice one conversation is gentle like a flow wish to see something like this on screen
keep writing more frequently😆
Shivam😃

Thanks for liking Manas

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1002384

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Posted: 8 years ago

#52

gr8 one...👏👏👏
loved it fully...😳😳

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Sanavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#53

What an hilarious update.

These twins are so naughty.

Loved each and every part.

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K.Puja Biswas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Awesome Update
Thanks For PM

Pls update soon and PM me

I wished they have shown some light moments in SKR Also

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chandanagimsy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Amazing..enjoyed..hilarious... Plzz update next part na...will be waiting eagerly

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sumana.shesha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Nice one :)

Superb :)

Loved it :)

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Maverick_me

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Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Enjoyed reading the light moments between the brothers and bahu ranis of Ayodhya..

Keep up the good work :)

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zubi_23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#58

hillarious ... amazing... bang on👏👏👏

beautifuly written... waiting for the next part😊

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Riya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#59

aww...that is such a cute post.👏

And it was funny too. I loved LakshMila as usual and you have portrayed each of the characters with utmost care and love.👍🏼

What can I say? You're really great as an author...so keep writing and improving yourself...and also continue giving us such wonderful OS

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diksha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Awesome.

Loved it 😊

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