TS THE FOUR PART 6A : BEHIND ENEMY LINES BEGINNING PG 35 22/05 - Page 4

Divi.C

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

End me kya hua ...about lakshman n urmila

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Mili

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Why did you update so late!!!!undoubtedly it was awwweeesssoommmeee🤣

Very very vrry well written,seriously!!

I want an update daily!!!😈

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Eshita

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Ha ha so cute. Lakshmila are cute pranksters. Do continue soon and do pm me.

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Shivam...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: LakshMila
Why did you update so late!!!!undoubtedly it was awwweeesssoommmeee🤣
Very very vrry well written,seriously!!
I want an update daily!!!😈

Thanks Millie , glad you liked it

Sorry updated late , actually there were many changes done lately in storyline

And a daily update , Itna Laalach acha nahi hai😆😆

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Sowmya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

super awsum...lovely...liked it so much😊

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Shivam...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: my_angel...
super awsum...lovely...liked it so much😊

Thanks sowmya

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Shivam...

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Divi.C
End me kya hua ...about lakshman n urmila

The wedding proposal was already accepted by Lakshman , its just that he didn't show it. Was too shocked to come to terms with it earlier.

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Roselind

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

SUPERB UPDATE...👏👏

So interesting & nicely written...😊👏

Continue soon...

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mandy001

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

🤣🤣.

Superb update. These cvs are really getting on my nerves 😡. No scenes of laxmila, no impotence to them.

Bt thanks to you nd other writers who give us such a such a cute scenes. This update ws really cute, I really enjoyed reading ds.

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Frosty_Moon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Amazing update shivam .
Love it...

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