TS THE FOUR PART 6A : BEHIND ENEMY LINES BEGINNING PG 35 22/05 - Page 28

This was what I was waiting for!!😆

Arrey Shivam, sorry I can't write more as I really don't know which part to praise and which to leave. totally damakedhar post. btw, I din't knew that they had paper in Tretayug 😕 , all along I wa under the impression they were using silk robe to write but Lakshman eating the paper was the highlight. Thank God that Urmila didn't serve grass to him 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: deejagi

Arrey Shivam, sorry I can't write more as I really don't know which part to praise and which to leave. totally damakedhar post. btw, I din't knew that they had paper in Tretayug 😕 , all along I wa under the impression they were using silk robe to write but Lakshman eating the paper was the highlight. Thank God that Urmila didn't serve grass to him 😆😆😆

Waiting eagerly for the next part

Originally posted by: Bdaygirl

Hai😊

Shivam bhaiyya..👏I am speechless no words only laughs. 😆Awesome. As always. 😃😃

Thanks for u r pm. Update soon.

Ayodhan princes in lankan sthe twins. And mandavi. ...just rofl☢️🤣

Originally posted by: SenRazia

First of all, thanks for the Pm.

Thanks for such a lively story.. MADE MY DAY!!!!

THE COMEDY.. TIMING! AND USING ENGLISH IN THE BEST WAY!!

BTW, this is what happened when I was reading this :

1. I fell from my chair

2. My mom asked me why I was laughing so much

3.tears brimming up of joy

4. Wishing this Ramayan Was shown on TV

Awesome sir!! This is Rishivars Ramayan!

Shivam Bhaiyya, i had laughed so much that my cheeks started to pain 😆

Originally posted by: AadhyaAashutosh

Shivam Bhaiyya, i had laughed so much that my cheeks started to pain 😆

Bharath worshipped Kamdev 😲🤣

Lakshmila were superb 🤣

Akshay & Shatrughan were chaddy-buddies😲 uper se Bharath's comment on that was hilarious 🤣

Devar-Bhabhi trio are so much enthusiastic to visit Lanka 😆

Waiting for more madness at Lanka 😃

Thanks for the pm 🤗

Originally posted by: Anokhisharma

Shivam bhaiya... Awesome story tha... This was a very hilarious story... Especially shatrughan nd langotiyaa yaar waala part...

bhaiya ye story mein tab padh rahi thi jab raat ka 2 o clock baj raha tha... Padhte padhte mujhe itni hansi aayi ki main bed se hi gir gayi.. Even then I was laughing like anything... Toh aap samajh hi gaye hoge kitna dhamaakedaar story likha hai aapne

Vaise bhi itna accha story likhna toh aapke left hand ka khel hai...mere bhai jo hain...

Originally posted by: -purvideshmukh-

🤣Waah kya update hai bhaiyya👏..sita's mehndi waala dialogue was totally unexpected🤣 bechara ram🤣...and the letter🤣oh my god🤣 yeh twins ne in sab ke beech ladki ko kab bhaga diya😕🤣...aur is mandvi ke baar mein main kya kahun 😆 isko abhi bhi lankesh pe crush hai😆 🤪and i can't believe that the trio are excited for lanka trip🤣...bas ek hi problem tha is update ka-thoda chota tha...koi nahi,agli update lambi de deejiyaga bhaiyya😉

PS:-Part 6 ki title dekh ke mujhe baahubali franchise ki yaad aa rahi hai😉

Originally posted by: Shivam...

Thanks Jwala

Left hand se zyada humaari kutil buddhi ka kamaal hai😉

Jwala bolne ka kya zaroorat tha... Nd mere ravan jaise bhai k paas kutil buddhi hona swabhavik si baat hai