TS THE FOUR PART 6A : BEHIND ENEMY LINES BEGINNING PG 35 22/05 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: chandanagimsy

Amazing awesome...kaash iss tarah hota serial mei... Amazing if you write any other os plzz post them..will be waiting to read


Thanks , lets hope for the best that we can see some good scenes b/w all couples.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Thanks Annie , Kanak, Manas , priya , my _angel, eternity_of_luv

Will surely try giving one more shot at the sequel.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
hey superb ...do continue...want dis to happen
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Loved it to the core.
LAl nd hari mirchi, sheetal jal nd shatru, these were too hilarious.

Plz do write more
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Sanavi

Loved it to the core.
LAl nd hari mirchi, sheetal jal nd shatru, these were too hilarious.

Plz do write more


Appreciated sanavi , Thanks !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
superbly written shivam...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
shatru๐Ÿคฃ
gr8 attempt...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
totally loved it...๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: abshcool

superbly written shivam...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
shatru๐Ÿคฃ
gr8 attempt...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
totally loved it...๐Ÿ˜ƒ


Thank You @abshcool
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: LakshMila

Very well written shivam!Please do one more...
That shatru part was so hilarious...could totally imagine shrutkirti!
I was rofling hard!Do continue


Originally posted by: Priya.

This is so nice...Loved it...brought a huge smile to my face...All four of them together ...

So wish we get some light hearted scenes before the inevitable happens.

Can I request you for a cutsie Laxmila OS please?...


Thank you Priya and Milie

Part 2 will be updated shortly , this time more focus on laxmilla
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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Lovely OS ! WOuld Love to see something like this in SHow.
Beautifully written๐Ÿ‘

Love,
Sruthi

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Posted: 8 years ago
#20
This was very funny and lovely :)
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