Originally posted by: chandanagimsy
Amazing awesome...kaash iss tarah hota serial mei... Amazing if you write any other os plzz post them..will be waiting to read
Originally posted by: chandanagimsy
Amazing awesome...kaash iss tarah hota serial mei... Amazing if you write any other os plzz post them..will be waiting to read
Loved it to the core.
LAl nd hari mirchi, sheetal jal nd shatru, these were too hilarious.
Plz do write more
Originally posted by: abshcool
superbly written shivam...๐ณ๐ณ
shatru๐คฃ
gr8 attempt...๐๐
totally loved it...๐
Originally posted by: LakshMila
Very well written shivam!Please do one more...
That shatru part was so hilarious...could totally imagine shrutkirti!
I was rofling hard!Do continue
This is so nice...Loved it...brought a huge smile to my face...All four of them together ...
So wish we get some light hearted scenes before the inevitable happens.Can I request you for a cutsie Laxmila OS please?...
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