Reserved.
Unreserved.Well. I'm just so happy to have found this story. The concept is definitely an appealing one. And I have to applaud your command over the language.The first chapter that started off, itself with a blow of Sharon and Swayam getting married, it was definitely compulsive reading.Then when the plot that moved forward, with all the happenings between Swayam and Sharon, was damn exciting, funny, nice, endearing etc to read. I said etc cause believe me, if I had the capability to list down all the words that could praise this story I would've.I loved how Sharon's character is given importance here. I love her in this story. But I love swayam more, cause he looks quite a bit of still an enigma to me. What is shown is not even one percent of the shock that we will get, when I'm sure more about his past will be revealed. His relation with rey, his hatred for him. Why has he changed. All of this will be one hell of an emotional ride I know.Your writing, is definitely going to be so amazing to read and is going to make the whole revealing thing an awesome experience.And omg, this recent two updates. When SwaRon shared those moments. Ah! Trust me, more of such romance, as in where they shyly romance, or rather romance indirectly. If it's going to continue, I bet I'll be mantling more than SwaRon. (I don't mind it well :P)The way he smiled at her after the dance. Actually take two minutes and imagine Shantanu like this swayam. The one who plays along. Man! His expressions. One to die for. And you have expressed such expressions so well with your writing.One more thing, I shared this story with my best friend. She isn't a SwaRon fan. She knowns nothing about them. But I loved it so much, I felt it was worth a share. And she asked me to applaud you for this amazing work from her side too. She loved your story.And I loved too, you obviously know by now :)Well I'm just so impressed by your writing. I'm definitely going to take some inspiration from your writing style to mine. You're worth that.Keep writing. You will genuinely do well in that field I'm sure.And update soon. I can't wait.Love Ana âĪïļ
Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya
Reserved
*Unreserve*Noo..why did you stop!?? ...I wanted to read more! :(This update kept me hooked throughout, only thing going on in my mind was that I wasn't nearing the end! You really have to give the next update soon coz I can't wait to see how this story is going to proceed.Coming to this part, I loved the beginning itself where Sharon is lost in Swayam's thoughts thinking about the previous night. He's having that effect on her already! ðģShe was supposed to be planning for a party and all she had done the past few weeks was learn how to pronounce the name of all the colors.This part was lol! ðĪĢI can totally understand Sharon's condition here due to a similar personal experience!..Every part makes me love Sharon more. Everytime I feel I know her,you highlight an undiscovered trait of her which leaves me pleasantly surprised! Poor girl was working so hard for this party that she didn't even notice Swayam sleeping on the bed after making space for himself ð, but then did SWAYAM really notice her????? I'm still not out of that, but to top it on,he actually helped her!.Wow this guy is turning unbelievable!The party scene was beautifully penned!..I just loved Sharon's comeback on Mr.Ghai's statement there. So Swayam's impressed!..And I'm so impressed with the way you've written Swayam here!..The dance ! Finally one magical moment between the non-typical couple. I loved how Sharon's plan of making Swayam feel uncomfortable backfired ð...So he's an amazing dancer too and he knows how to smile? Wow! No wonder Sharon was blushing! ðģ And I can totally understand that coz I'm surprised myself with the drastic change of my feelings for Swayam in this update!Its just amazing how you do that!I had least expected Taani to be the one bridging gaps between ShaRey...Finally some good change happening in Sharon's life.:)Amazing work yet again!.I'm loving the changing equation between Swayam and Sharon but what makes it even more beautiful is the way you're bringing about that change!Please please update sooner!.Can't wait!Love,Shreya
Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj
Yup tani is right..
Swayam is softening.. nice
Tani is a great person..
She made rey realize his mistake..
Loved it
Thanks
Originally posted by: Lovestory55
Done! That was so beautiful <3 I am really loving this story and i love the build up. My only wish please write longer chapters. You are so engaging as an author that i don't want that chapter to end. Wishing you update soon.
Neet <3
Originally posted by: swaronaaliya
Amazing update.
do continue soon. ð
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