SwaRon FF - Desire - A/N Pg 73 - Page 45 | Channel V Dil Dosti Dance

Applef

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Posted: 6 years ago

#441

Yet again a brilliantly written piece..

Loved the whole Sharon's pov..

The way she missed him..

And want him back..

Even it was her who asked for space and time..

The ever so clear Sharon is confused now..

Sharon and her dad's relationship is a very strangled one I think..

A girl will need her dad at this kinda moments more..

But he is more close to kria than his own daughter, make me so sad for her..

Sharon signed the divorce paper.. But did swayum send that to her?

I highly doubt that..

That's maybe his mother..

They again meet after 6 months..

Love how you keep up the flow of the story without dragging it unnecessarily..

New beginning 1- is about Sharon..

Hope that new beginning 2 will be about swaron..

Do update soon..

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Phantasm

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Posted: 6 years ago

#442

I loved Sharon's POV and the fact that she misses him, gave me hopes. But when she signed the divorce papers and blamed Swayam for not getting in touch with her made me wonder didn't she herself told to him to doso? And did Swayam already sign on it or he actually thinks giving her a divorce is the best and right thing he can do?

Too many questions and I have to wait for a month to read next part. *Sigh*

So they are getting separated afterall *Double Sigh*

Too much sadness and your title has made me more sad.

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srinidhi94

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Posted: 6 years ago

#443

I am happy that Sharon is being strong and working on her career. It's good... but at the same time she is running away from swayam and her happiness...

And Swayam how can he give up on Sharon like that... I understand he is guilty but... I still want to see him fighting for her

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 6 years ago

#444

The chapter had all the components of pain separation and longing between two lovers.

I could see Sharon's pining and pain in the chapter throughout but I wish to read more of Swayam's his thoughts too. That scene where she feels the guy to be Swayam and he turns out to be someone else was so so painful to read and heart touching.

You write beautifully, just please update fast. Can't wait to read ahead.

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mythreyii

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Posted: 6 years ago

#445

Cheyyum

Jus read the chapters from where I missed

You write so beautifully that it's impossible to get lost in it

The chapter and the progress in story is hearts

The pain and agony of swaron is always beautiful

Pls pls end their break and pain

And get them together soon

Awaiting further update on this amazing story

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 6 years ago

#446

When do you update the next part?

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 6 years ago

#447

When do yuy update the next chapter??

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aashumehta1

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Posted: 6 years ago

#448

Hey please please please update please!!

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Shreya

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Posted: 6 years ago

#449

It's been two months since the last update. Is the ff on hold again? If not then requesting you to please update now and if it is please tell so that I won't keep waiting for the next part .

I really love the story but waiting so long for every part is really difficult. So just requesting to let us know when will the next part be up.

-Shreya:)

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Phantasm

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Posted: 6 years ago

#450

Man, you take too long to update. One update in a month and last update was 2 months back. We completely understand if you are occupied with other important stuff. But let us know if you have decided to not to continue, atleast we won't be hopelessly waiting that you will update someday 🤔

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