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incredible
superb os
plz keep dis thread alive
i was glad to see dat still u people r active
i will equally try
superb os
plz keep dis thread alive
i was glad to see dat still u people r active
i will equally try
This is probably the first OS of yours I am reading n must say...it is great.
I have read many OSs on Ardi but few that shows Arjun, Subhadra n Draupadi in such an amazing collaboration with one another...No pain..no tragedy...no malice...maybe this is how some women used to live in harmony in a polygamous environment...Beautiful...😊Your writing is not overtly poetic... n yet not too simplistic...Just the right quantity of poetic touch mixed appropriately with simple language...In short...I LOVED it.Keep up the great work...😛
Originally posted by: .Enchantress.
Such A Beautiful OS Choti..!! 👏
You have so beautifully described the events that I can visualize them easily.❤️Thanx For Pm. Keep Writing.
Originally posted by: -Saishree-
Oh so beautifully written pro!! Loved it to the core..the mutual understanding between them was so nice...one again i must say..loved it!!
Originally posted by: enthusiastic
beautiful os proteeti
loved it soo much
thanks for the pm
Originally posted by: sunitikapoor
Beautiful...you always come up with a unique and beautiful concept of stories.
Originally posted by: RisingPhoenix
Very beautiful os pro
Loved it a lotThe dancing lessons were really pretty goodKeep writing moreThanks for pm-Manu
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