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wow dear such a mind blowing concept.
I really like dark manik so much.
plz pm me when you update.
Hey guys its my birthday today wish me and so I decided to give you first chapter of my favorite story I hope you like it...
CHAP 1:
A 26 yrs. Old man was lying on the hospital bed. He was covered with lots of bandage. His bhai and bhabhi were praying for him because for them he was their first child. Cabir his elder brother not only brother but his best friend his mother his father. He sat on the chair and remembered his last conversation with his mother.
FLASHBACK:
"cabir beta main janti hoon k abhi tum bahot 6ote ho lekin phir bhi main sirf tuj pr bharosa kr skti hoon beta, tu hi hai jo manik ka dhayn rakh skta hai tere alwa koi nhi hai jise wo apna keh ske beta pls hamesha uske sath rehna beta usko apne bacche ki tarah pamper krna beta main to usse utna pyar nhi de payi pr tu zarror dena k wo muje kbhi yaad na kre beta promise me usse kbhi bhi apne mom aur dad ki yaad nhi aani chahiye beta waise bhi tere papa ke pass kbhi bhi tum dono ke liye waqt nhi hoga to tu usse apna pura waqt aur pura pyar dena promise me ...beta" nyonika was crying and kissed on cabir's and manik's head and cabir promised her.
FLASHBACK END:
Cabir was a very understanding son of his mother. He respected her mother's words. He and navya were pampering manik like his first child. Right now his child was sleeping on hospital bed. Doctor came out and cavya ran to them and doctor said "mr and mrs Malhotra muje ap dono se baat krni hai in my cabin come". Cavya nodded and left with doctor.
"dekhiye mr.malhotra main apko sab ku6 clear baat krta hoon, manik got a very severe head injury it's not that much easy to heal. Humne unhe to bacha liya lekin ab unka head matlab unka brain pehli ke tarah work nhi krega jaise ki manik ko main janta hoon he was very fun loving and all right but ab uske nature mein uski feelings mein uske expressing way mein changes aa skte hain jaise k sab ku6 extreme level pr agar wo happy hoga to bhi extreme agar wo sad hoga to bhi extreme agar wo gussa hoga to bhi extreme see kbhi kbhi aisa hota hoke hamare brain ke ku6 parts jo hamare emotions ko control krte hai wohi parts manik ke injured hue hai aap samaj rahe hai na main kya raha hoon?" dr.asked
"haan dr.i understood what are you trying to say but isse manik ko kya problem aa skti hai aur iska koi ilaz" cabir asked
"dekhiye ye main aise nhi bata skta hume manik ko observe krna hoga aur is ke liye aapko regularly check up some tests iske baad shayad hum ku6 kr paye lekin abhi to ku6 nhi bata skte" dr said and cavya left from there.
AFTER 3 MONTHS:
Manik was driving his car and cabir was sitting with him. From last 30 minutes cabir was hearing his lecture "ye kya hai bhai ab main thak chuka hoon seriously after my accident har week ye check up kyun zaroori hai kya?"
"haan jab tak muje taslli nhi hogi tab tak tuje aana hi hoga samjha mein tera bada bhai hoon tu nhi to jo mein bolunga wohi hoga" cabir said strictly and manik frowned and muttered some curses under his breath.
He was driving when suddenly an old lady came in front his car and manik stopped car with jerk. Manik was very angry and he came out and without looking at tem he yelled "bloody hell dikhta nhi hai kya? Are you blind? Meri car mili thi samne aane ke liye pata nhi kaise chalte hai jaise garden mein chal rhe hai aur.." he was about to say something when a girl turn and manik looked at her without even blinking his eyes.
She was wearing patiyala dress and looking so cute in that dress. "listen just stop it okay how dare you? Himmat kaise hui meri amms se aise baat krne ki ek to khud dekh ke chalate nhi hai upar se attitude de rahe hai, janti hoon mein aap jaise logo ko rich spoiled brat samjte hai k sari road aapne kharid rakhi hai" she was shouting on him but he was smiling and just staring at her. Her earrings, Her big doe eyes, her pouty pink lips.
"I will sue you dekh lena tumhe 6odungi nhi main" cabir came to there and said "I am soory mam hamse galti ho gyi pls aap ye paise rakh lijiye" she took the money and throw money on manik's face and said "apne paise ki aakad khi aur dikhana samje aap" cabir held her amms's hand and said "a6a aap cahliye hum inhe hospital leke chalte hai" but she took her hand away and said :koi zaroorat nhi hai aap logo ke help ki chaliye amms aur ye mat sochna k aap bach gaye 6odungi nhi main aapko"
Cabir grabbed manik's hand and dragged him to the car and both left from there. In the journey manik was just smiling like fool.
He came to their house and held navya's hand and start a song and start dancing with her. He kissed on his cheek. cavya's son also came to his chachu. He picked him up and twirl him around. He put him down and he turned but banged with a servant who was holding juice glass. By mistake it fell on manik's blazer everyone thought that now the servant gone but what he did it was shocking. He smiled and patted his cheek and start to singing a song after accident for the first time manik was behaving like a normal person and happy person. Everyone was so happy because manik is a jaan of the house but after accident everything changed but today cavya were so happy that his manik is back his manik is recovering.
Cabir came to him and asked "kya ho gaya hai tuje manik?" manik smiled and hugged his bhai tightly and said "pyar..pyar...pyar ho gaya hai bhai muje"
Kaisa laga??????
Stay tuned...
i have an exam in april so i am busy in my preparation dont worry i will update my story but for pm i am sorry i cant pm any of you guys pls sorry maaf kr dena
love you guys for ur support and love..
tell me through ur comments and give me views and suggestion
this is my sister's idea.
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