Well his memories just got triggered when he saw Pooja again . And he doesn't love Tarika as much as Pooja. She is not soul mate for him. He likes her as she is good & time goes good with her & his proffession like that. So he loves her but in limit. He mentions it to Daya also in 1st scene . But in Pooja it's like film wala sachha pyar 😆 Thanks 😊
Wow really sweet story thank god abhirika abhija nai hoi :D well done :)
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Well his memories just got triggered when he saw Pooja again . And he doesn't love Tarika as much as Pooja. She is not soul mate for him. He likes her as she is good & time goes good with her & his proffession like that. So he loves her but in limit. He mentions it to Daya also in 1st scene . But in Pooja it's like film wala sachha pyar 😆 Thanks 😊
Originally posted by: aditya_anjaana
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Phir bhi na mane mera dil 🤣Aur haan...samjhane koshish krke faida nahi,..mere dimag mein jo ghus gaya...wo ghus gaya 😆Aur wais bhi ye Pyar-wyar ka chakker always ulti sedhi hi hoti hai 🤣
The story is well written but I can't imagine Abhi confused between T and that old flame Puja. 😔
I don't know... he never seems to be in love with T but I don't think he'll ditch her and go back to an old flame.
I also can't imagine Abhi saying he wants to dump his GF for a career. I think he would have managed both if he hadn't lost his memory.
Anyway, you're the writers and you have the creative liberty to write whatever you want. 😊
It's a nice attempt.
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Thank you so much 😊 Siggies & designs were all done by Abhisheking 👏 About the story part yes I do agree with you in some points. Especially even I already felt after writing the story that Abhi & Pooja love needed to be more developed. But the story idea came very late in my mind . So I couldn't give much time😭 And also I was writing love story first time . So😛 Thanks for your valuable suggestions😊Originally posted by: bluetides
Who made those siggies? ain? they should be punished 😈 😈 😈
siggies are so good, so good and so good that I had to keep one day for looking at those marvelous siggies and next day I read the text part 😆 😆 😆. Awesome job with both siggies and tag 👏 👏 👏
over all idea of the story is good. A guy ignoring his love for sake of career and realizes his mistakes later 👏 👏 👏. It was a nice attempt. I really liked the final convo b/w Pooja and Abhijeet as well as the last bureau scene.
But the plot needed a deeper dive as the story is about Abhijeet and OC. Since OC character is new to reader, it's hard to relate and go with flow with no deeper dive. Tarika part was not even necessary for the plot and also remembering the girl out of no where or remembering only her even though rest of memory is lost is not so practical. Continuous treatments that Abhijeet went through producing the results would have been more practical. Also why Pooja was not married since college was not explained either.
Originally posted by: Abhisheking
@BT Thanks for appreciating the siggies. 😳
Thanks for the reviews, people. There was a pressure on us as this is a contest. Also, neither of us wrote love stories. So,the love story couldn't take a deeper dive. We hope you all understand it. 😛
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