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hi ankita!
i m a new reader of ur stry
i actually came across ur stry before 3 days
it took me 3 days 2 read becuz i had my exams
yes! can u believe it i was reading ur ff instead of revising for my exams
bt ur stry jst compelled me 2 read more of it
in fact i chose 2 read it over my favorite book in my free tym
i jst want 2 say dat its not evryday wen i read manan ffs wid amazing tracks n strylyn
ur stry is surely one of dem
it has such a beautiful well crafted concept dat it feels r heart wid contentment aftr reading
starting from d beginning, d meeting of manan is so...weird
i jst felt dats d most diff beginning i came across
aftr reading d stry v can safely say dat nandini is really a shining star for manik
d concept dat richa yamini made is justified by UR stry 2
i jst luvd d cold n indifferent behavior nandini had in d beginning
manik was from dat moment a luv sick puppy!
den d way nandini n manik slowly fell for each other
n not 2 forget d possessiveness manik had for nandini is jst amazing
dis stry not only has manik having a dark past, but also nandini
dis shows dat u hav planned ur stry very well(which i clearly dont!)
d cute moments dat dey shared in trips n functions is truely a delight
i luv d dialogues u write in bold
dey really stand out n make a huge impact on d readers mind
its smthing dat i adore
evn d adorb antics of bod manik n nandu
is smthin worth smiling for
d way u bring twists in d stry is jst vry smooth
not for once do v think dat dis was smthin totally absurd
dat shows hw amazing writer u r
towards d 20th chappy i suddenly started feeling confused n bit cut off as 2 wat happend
i nvr imagined dis huge twist was gonna come
nvr did i think dis wud happen
bt it smhw made sense. it was totally legitimate
one of d bst part bout ur stry is dat ders no physical pull or lust in deir relation
its purely luv n dat makes it more special
d fact dat dey hav only come close thrice shws dat neither of dem is rushing in d relation
in fact manik is d one who is takig it slow on nandini' insistence
another gr8 quality is d bond of luv u hav shown btwn fab 5 n d malhotras
its somthing worth envying
evn lyk d awsum one lyners and teasing sessions fab 5 hav in store for manik
dats so cute wen manik blushes!
lastly i wud jst lyk 2 say dat plz continue ur wrk
i really hope 2 c u soon
i wud pray for u 2 get better n come bak wid a bang
keep smiling
stay blessed
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