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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER-30
ENAGEMENT HALL
zeeshan's hands were about to touch aliya's pinned pallu before he can reach he falls on floor
aliya gets scared and sees zain
aliya-zain
zain holds zeeshan by his collar and beats him blue and black
zain-himmat kaise huaein teri aliya ko chooein ke
zeeshaan-kyu tu kare toh chalte hai aur agar main karo toh galte
zain-tu toh na
zeeshaan-kuch bhi kare le lekin pharso toh nikkah hai mera aur aliya ka phir toh woh aapne jism mujhe de degein
zain was about to hit him but he stops
aliya-zain
zain went towards aliya she was feeling dizzy
he picked her up in his arms and took her to home
HOME
zain placed aliya on bed and ayat entered inside
ayat-kya hua appi ko
zain-kuch nahni todha headache medicine de hai maine
ayat-thik hai main chalte hoon
zain closes the door and covers aliya with a blanket
zain sat beside aliya and he too dozes off
NEXT MORNING
aliya gets up only to find zain sitting beside her she gets up and was about to leave for washroom just when zain stops her by holding her hand
zain-aliya tum thik ho na
aliya-haan zain thank you jo tumne kal raat kiye uske liye
zain-anything for u aliya main chalte hoon
aliya-aaj raat ko aaye rahe ho na
zain-nahni woh kya hai na ki ek important meeting hai bas issliye but u enjoy okay then bye
aliya-bye
and he goes away
a lone tear runs down from aliya's cheek she wipes her tear

WHAT WILL HAPPEN NOW???????


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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER-31
HOME
EVENING
zain and aliya both were wearing this

aliya was sitting in front of mirror she was looking beautiful today ,she glanced at her phone to check whether her phone is ringing ,but it was not and a tear ran down her cheek and she wiped her tear
ayat-appi, allah kitne khobhsuraat lage rahe hai app chaliye

aliya walks down and everyones eyes were on her
ayat makes her to sit and two starts applying mehind on her hand
aliya was getting all the flashes spend with zain,how they meet how zain always resce her
girl-kiske ka naam likho
aliya-zain
and she writes z
girl-hogaye
ayat-appi aapke liye ek dance perfomance bhi hai
and

Woh tassavur ka aalam woh dil-e-aashiqui
Woh diwaana mausam woh teri dillagi
Hamko bada hi kare beqaraar
Woh pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar
aliya gets the memory of their first meet,how zain and
she kissed each other





Woh tassavur ka aalam woh dil-e-aashiqui 2
Woh diwaana mausam woh teri dillagi
Hamko bada hi kare beqaraar
Woh pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar
aliya gets the memory how zain came to her for
the first after three years and how she lied to him
Woh mohabbat ke din woh ghadi woh palchhin
Woh chhalakta mausam baarishon ki rhimjhim
Hamko bada hi kare beqaraar
Woh pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar
aliya gets the memory of how zain saved jade and
and sapphire from fire
Saanson ki woh hulchul woh mahekta aanchal
Baahon ke woh ghere zulf ka woh baadal
Hamko bada hi kare beqaraar
Woh pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar
aliya gets the memory of zain how he saved aliya from zeeshaan
Woh tera sharmaana woh nazar ka jhukna
Jaate jaate tera woh achaanak mudna
Hamko bada hi kare beqaraar
Woh pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar

Woh mere bin bole tera samajh lena
Woh ishaaron se hi baat sab keh dena
Hamko bada hi kare beqaraar
Woh pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar
aliya got the memory of hotel how they spend the night together

Woh ladaayi jagde baad mein pachhtaana
Roothh ke woh jaana laut ke phir aana
Hamko bada hi kare beqaraar
Woh pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar
aliya got the memory of their happy days

Woh tassavur ka aalam woh dil-e-ashiqui 2
Woh diwaana mausam woh teri dillagi
Hamko bada hi kare beqaraar
Woh pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar pyaar 2

aliya ran towards poolside area and stand beside tree and cries
aliya-zain kahan ho tum l am missing u,yeh kya ho rahe hai mujhe allah
mere nikkah zeeshaan se hone wale hai aur mujhe zain ki
yaad kyu aaye rahe hai
and she cries more
and aliya feels someone is grabbing her by waist and he was none
other than zain
aliya turned back and took steps back and zain took steps towards her
and she hit her back to tree
zain neared her face
zain-beautiful
aliya-tum toh aaj nahni aane wale tha na
zain-l love u
aliya was shocked
zain keeps his hand on her waist and crashes his lips on her
aliya catches his hand and both kisses each other
and night too celebrates their love

Edited by steelfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43


what about happy family dear r u reading and u can also write stories
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: steelfan



what about happy family dear r u reading and u can also write stories

yes dear I am reading happy family also and loving it.and about stories I haven't thought of it yet 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: pree551

yes dear I am reading happy family also and loving it.and about stories I haven't thought of it yet 😆



u can read my story on zaya ,zaya ke beintehaa mobhata
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
CHAPTER-32
MORNING
HOME
BOTH ZAIN AND ALIYA WERE WEARING THIS

aliya was still sleeping just when ayat banged her door to which aliya replied"kaun hai please come inside"
ayat-appi good morning
aliya gets up from bed
aliya-morning
and passes a smile
ayat-appi kal raat ko song ke baad app kahan thi
aliya was shocked what she should reply she can't say her that she and zain both were busy in kissing each other
aliya-woh main thak gaye thi issliye aaram kare rahe thi
ayat-ohh well ab app ready hojaye jalde se
aliya-haan thik hai
AFTER SOME TIME
aliya was feeling dizzy
aliya-yeh itne dizzy kyu feel horahe hai mujhe
ayat-appi kya hua
before aliya can say something she rushed in washroom and vomits
aliya comes back and sits on bed
just when her phone ringed by flashing the name of "zain"
aliya-hello
zain-aliya kya hua tumhare awaza itne low kyu hai
aliya-pata nahni zain bohat dizzy feel horahe hai aur vomiting bhi horahe hai
zain-doctor ko leke aate hoon main
aliya-nahni zain please main thik hoon todha time thik hojaogein
and she cuts the call,she was unaware about the fact that someone was listening to her conversation
ayat-appi zeeshaan jiju ke ammi abbu aaye hai
HALL
aliya walks down stairs
zeeshaan-baby aao
mrs ahmed-mera zeeshaan bohat romantic hai
aliya sits on sofa
mrs ahmed-aaj se thik 3 saal pehle tum donno ka nikkah hote hote rukh gaye tha lekin sab kismat ka good lucky hai aaj phir se nikkah hone jaa rahe hai
a tear rolled down from aliya's cheeks and she wiped that tear
aliya-aunty jo allah chahte hai woh hi hote hai
mrs ahmed gives aliya two bangles
mrs ahmed-yeh tumhe mere zeeshaan aaj raat ko suhgaraat ko pehna ne wale hai
bangles fall down from aliya's hand
ayat picks it up
mrs ahmed-waise woh tumhare bacche kahan hai
aliya-woh aapne room main hai aur app unse kal mile sakte hai aaj nahni
zeeshaan-baby chalo na haldi ke rasam saath main celebrate karte hai main tumhe haldi lagata hoon aur tum mujhe
aliya-no thanks
aliya runs towards washroom and vomits
zeeshaan-yeh kya horahe hai
ayat-woh appi ko subha se vomiting horahe hai
zeeshaan makes a evil face

BLAMES ON ALIYA

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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
CHAPTER-33
SAME DAY
HOME
aliya comes out from washroom and sees a evil smile on everyone's face except ayat
zeeshaan-yeh itne vomiting kyu ho rahe hai tumhe
aliya-pata nahni
zeeshaan's mother-toh tum pregnant ho
aliya-pregnant
zeeshaan's mother-aur nahni toh kya yeh woh suhugaraat banege wajah se hua hai
zeeshaan-sahi kaha aapne ammi woh zain ka hi baccha hai na
aliya-what?
zeeshaan's mother-pharso raat ko mera beta na tumhe choo kya liye toh zain ne usko maare
aliya was crying
zeeshaan-pata nahni aur kitno ke saath
zeeshaan's mother-allah tauba
zain-just shut up
aliya turns back only to find a angry zain
zain -yeh sab kya horahe hai
zeeshaan's mother-yeh pregnant hai aur woh bhi tumhare bacche ke maa bane wale hai
zain-shut up asie kuch nahni hai
zeeshaan-oh really toh usse raat tumne mujhe kyu maare
zain-kyu ki main aliya se pyaar karte hoon bahut pyaar karte hoon aur usko kuch bhi hote hai toh mujhe bahut gussa aate hai
zeeshaan-oh pyaar karte ho toh suhugaraat bhi toh
zain-pyaar ka matlba sirf yeh hi nahni hota issliye aliya ko blame mat karo
zeeshaan's mother-joh galta hai woh galte hai koi proof hai tumhare paas
zain-zain ne aliya se pyaar kiye hai koi ayashi nahni kiye hai
and aliya looks at zain and a tear rolls down her cheeks
zeeshaan's mother-chalo yahan se
and everyone leaves
aliya-thank you zain
zain-l am sorry aliya mera wajah se tumhe itne kuch bardaasht karne pada, par ab nahni main jaa rahe hoon aliya ,tumhare zindagi se hamesha ke liye, tum bas hamesha khush raho par yeh 81% shares hai yeh tumhare liye aur baccho ke liye hai ,nikkah main nahni aane wala hoon main kyu ki 2 ghante main flight hai mere aapne khayal rakhne aur agar ho sake toh mujhe maaf kar dena ,mujhe pata hai ke jo main ne hai, kiye uske liye maaf karne bahut mushkil hai lekin phir bhi koshish karne, main tumhare liye dua karoga, tum aur zeeshaan hamesha khush rehna khudahafiz
and he goes
aliya was shocked and took the support of pillar and slowly slowly he took steps and he fades away
and aliya falls on her knees and cries

IS THIS THE END OF ZAYA LOVE STORY???????????????

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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
CHAPTER-34
HOME
aliya went to her room and closed the door and cried her heart out
aliya-allah aaj zain mera zindagi se chale gaye ,ek din maine usse wada kiye tha ke main uske zindagi se chaliye jaoge aapne sab kuch de kar lekin woh hi chale gaya mera zindagi se aapne sab kuch de kare
aliya hides her face by hugging her legs
aliya's phone beeps
aliya-hello
zain-aliya bye jaane se pehle tumse kuch kehna chahta hoon
aliya-bolu
zain-l love u ,aur hamesha sirf tumse hi pyaar karoga main
aliya-zain please
zain-please what aliya
aliya cuts the call
aliya-allah mujhe yeh toh nahni pata ki main zain se pyaar karte hoon ke nahni lekin ek baat mujhe pata hai ke main aur mera bacche zain ke saath mehfooz hai allah aap usko mehfooz rakhne
ayat enters in room
ayat-appi yeh raha aapka dress jalde se ready hojaye nikkah ka time horahe hai
aliya-okay
aliya was about to change just when someone knocked on door
aliya-kaun
ramu kaka-aapse koi milne aaye hai
aliya-mujhse thik hai unko room main bheja do


WHO CAME TO MEET ALIYA?WILL THIS PERSON WILL BRING A TWIST IN LIFE OF ALIYA????
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
CHAPTER-35
HOME
Ramu kaka went and informed that person,he,can,meet aliya as she has allowed him to meet her,the person walked upstairs and knocked aliya's room
aliya was not wearing her dupatta ,she was so upset that she didn't bothered about her dupatta ,her milky back was been exposed by flying of hairs
aliya-come in
and that person entered inside and his breath stopped by current view in front of his eyes ,aliya without dupatta and her milky back towards him
aliya turned back only to get a shock
aliya-zain
yes the person was none other than zain ,our hero
zain took steps towards aliya
zain-mujhe tumhe kuch dekhne hai
aliya-par tum toh mumbai chale gaye tha na
zain-haan lekin kuch important cheez tumhe dekhne hai
aliya-okay
he played a CD on DVD PLAYER
before pressing the red button on remote he glanced at aliya and seek for her permission through his eyes ,aliya said him yes by her eyes
aliya sat on bed followed by zain
AND RECORDING PLAYS
its was a scene of a party ,actually party was wrapped up but two man were sitting near bar with wine in their hands ,they were sipping wine and were laughing like a mad person
aliya glanced at zain by her eyes she asked him that what nonsense was this,zain replied her through his eyes ,wait and watch everything will be in front of you within seconds
RECORDING
one man got up from bar with wine glass in his hands and walked paced the other man,the light came on that man and the face was revealed he was none other than zeeshaan
aliya was hell shocked to see him
RECORDING
zeeshaan's abbu-yeh aliya se nikkah pyaar toh nahni hogaye tujhe usse
zeeshaan-nahni abbu mujhe aliya se nahni aliye ke jism se pyaar hogaye hai
zain was fuming in angry he closed his fist to control his angry ,he wanted to punch zeeshaan on his face for thinking about aliya and for thinking about touching her body
aliya glanced at zain and closed her eyes ,keeps her hand on his hand
RECORDING
zeeshaan's abbu-lekin uske jism ko chooein ke liye nikkah karne ki kya zarrot hai tumhein woh toh bina nikkah ke bhi hosakte hai
zeeshaan-bikul hosakte hai lekin woh zain hai na, lekin abbu nikkah hone se humare 3 fayaad hai
zeeshaan's abbu-kya 3 fayaad hai
zain was unable to control his anger so aliya paused the recording
zain-recording kyu pause kardiye tumne
aliya-todha time ke liye phir humein cont karte hai recording jab tak main aate hoon tum mera wait karo
and she goes away
KITCHEN
aliya walks near fridge and takes out ice cube and milk and then takes out hand grinder and coffee
she puts everything in jar and grinders it and pours the cold coffee in two glasses and walks upstairs with a tray in her hands
on reaching room she place the tray on table and walks towards zain who was standing near window and was lost in his thoughts aliya placed her hand on his shoulder and whispered
aliya-zain
zain turns back
aliya-zain l know u r angry but yeh toh reality hai ,yeh thinking mujhe leke sirf zeeshaan ki nahni hai ,har koi mard ki hai jo mujhe chooein chahte hai iss 3 saal main ek -ek din mera liye bahut mushkil tha ,meri beauty hi mere liye problem thi,jab main newyork aaye toh maine 3 months se rent pay nahni kiye aur landlord na mujhse kaha ki main uske saath ek raat guzaro toh mujhe pay nahi karne padaga
and she burst in tears
zain hugged her and she hide her face in his chest and today her heart said that she was safe ,in zain's arms she is safe no one can harm her and she hugs him more tightly
aliya whispers in his ears
aliya-zain coffee cold hojayege
zain-woh toh already hai cold hai kyu ki woh cold coffee hai ,lekin woh hot bhi hosakte hai
aliya-woh kaise
zain-kyu ke tum hot ho toh coffee bhi cold se hot ho sakte hai
both burst in fits of laughter
and took the cold coffee in their hand
and smiled at eachother


A TRUTH???????????????
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
CHAPTER-36
HOME
Aliya resumed the recording
RECORDING
zeeshaan was moving from here to there just when his father spoke in between
zeeshaan's father-yeh toh bolu ki kya 2 fayaad hai humein iss nikkah se
zeeshaan-abbu pehle fayaad toh yeh hai ki ek raat suhugaraat aap bane lena aur phir main ,2 fayaad hai ki dubai main ek sheikh hai joh aliya ke jism ke liye mujhe 200 crore dena wale hai toh maine aliya ko uske paas becha diye ,l selled her aur jade sapphire ko do main bheeka maangana par lage dunga(l will make jade and sapphire to beg on street)
zeeshaan's father-aur zain
zeeshaan-woh toh mumbai jaa rahe hai
zeeshaan-zain aur aliya ka pyaar the end
and he laughs
RECORDING OVER
the room was silent ,aliya lost her courage ,she was not in a position to speak a word ,she glanced at zain ,but zain was nowhere to find ,she rushed downstairs
aliya-ayat zain kahan hai
ayat-appi woh toh bohat gussa main tha woh bahar chaliye gaye
aliya-ya allah zain ke paas mujhe jaane hoga
and she runs out of house
ayat-appi ko kya hua
ZEESHAAN'S HOUSE
zain was beating zeeshaan black and blue,aliya entered in his house only to see that zain was beating him and his family was shouting
zeeshaan's ammi sees aliya and smiles
zeeshaan's ammi-dekho aaye gaye meri zeeshaan ki
aliya-stop it main koi zeeshaan ki chee ,main ko zeeshaan ko bachne nahni aaye hoon main toh zain ke liye aaye hoon,zain stop it ,tumhe jail hojayege
zain stops beating him
zain-tune asie socho bhi kaise ke tu aliya ko choo sakte hai,tune asie bhi kaise soche liye ki tu aliya ko dubai ke sheikh ke paas sell kare dega aur kya bol rahe tha tu ,tu zain abdullah ke baccho ko bheekha par lagega tu
he pushes him down on floor
zain-lekar jao inko
police-chalo
zeeshaan-kyu zain tu aliya ko chooein toh thik hai agar main soche bhi toh galte
zain-haan galte hai kyu ke aliya meri hai sirf meri aur usko chooein ka haq sirf mera hai ,now go
police takes zeeshaan and his family with them
aliya keeps her hand on zain's shoulder,zain turns back only to see aliya in tears,he hugs her
NIGHT
aliya-zain kal nikkah tha mera,kal guest bhi aane wale hai main sabko kya jaab doon
zain-aliya kal nikkah hai
aliya-kiska nikkah hai zain
zain-zain aur aliya ka nikkah hai
aliya-zain itne kuch ho jaane ke baad bhi tum mujhse pyaar karte ho
zain-l love u aur bahut problems tumne face kar le aap nahni aap se main tumhare saath hoon ,l know aliya ki tumne mujhe maaf nahni kiye hai,maaf kiye bhi hogaye lekin tumhe shayad mujhse pyaar nahni hai lekin l will not force u ,hum donno nikkah as friends toh kare sakte hai na
zain forwards his hands in front of aliya and she takes his hand and both shakes their hands
zain-friends
aliya-friends mujhe aapne dost ke saath nikkah qubool hai


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Edited by steelfan - 8 years ago
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