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Posted: 8 years ago
#31
CHAPTER-24
NEW YORK
MORNING
HOME
aliya was lost in her thoughts just when door bell ranged, ayat opened the door only to find zeeshaan
ayat-jiju
aliya went near them
ayat-jiju aap chalo hum sab breakfast karte hai
zeeshaan-no thanks main toh aliya ko aapne saath lekar jaane ke liye aaye hoon
aliya-kahan jaane hai
zeeshaan-mall shopping karne
aliya-kaise shopping
zeeshan-baby honeymoon ke shopping
chalo
MALL
zeeshaan and aliya reached at shopping mall
zeeshaan took aliya to a shop
zeeshaan-sir yeh dress chahiye
the dress was too short and sleeveless ,aliya looked at dress and was feeling uncomfortable
zeeshan-try this
aliya-nahni yeh dress ache nahni hai
zeeshaan-jitne main kehe rahe hoon utna karo tum
zain-zeeshaan yeh dress kaise hai
aliya turned back only to find zain ,he was holding a pink anarkail in his hand ,aliya took a breath of relief
zain-jao yeh try karo
aliya took the dress from his hand and went to trial room
aliya was trying hard to tie the dori
aliya peeped from her door only to find zeeshaan
aliya-yeh zain kahe hai
and she find two hands on her back she looked in mirror only to find zain tieing her dori
aliya- thanks
zain-its okay
he was about to leave but he saw dupatta on floor he took that duppatta and put that on her shoulder and left the trial room
aliya came out and zeeshan roamed his eyes on aliya zain didn't noticed that because he was admiring aliya
zeeshaan-well donno ache hai konsa chahiye tumhe
aliya-yeh wale aur wo bhi meri money se
HOME
aliya and ayat both were sitting on sofa and were folding clothes which they shopped today
aliya took the pink dress in her hand
aliya-yeh dress bahut beautiful hai
ayat-waise appi yeh dress aapko zain ne diye na
aliya-tumhe kaise pata
zain-aliya mujhe tumse kuch baat karne hai
ayat leaves for her room
zain sat beside aliya
zain-aliya aaj raat ko tum mera room main mujhse milne aayi sakte ho
aliya-zain
he kept his finger on her lips
zain-shhh tumhe aane padaga aur wo bhi hamara suhugaraat ke sari pehna kar
aliya-zain main tumse promise nahni kar sakte
zain-dekhte hai aliya
and he leaves, aliya looked at him

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Posted: 8 years ago
#32
it was amazing waiting for more to read
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Posted: 8 years ago
#33
CHAPTER 25
HOME
NIGHT
aliya was ready and was standing in front of mirror she took her phone from side table and walked downstairs and entered in jade and sapphire room and kissed their forehead and smiled at them
aliya-mujhe tum donno ka future toh nahni pata lekin itne zarror pata hai jo bhi tumhare future hai wo hi meri khushi hai aur zindagi hai ,mujhe allah par pura bharso hai aur main toh yeh hi chahte hoon ki hum tenno safe rahein
and she covered them with blanket and closed the door and hired a cab for hotel
HOTEL
aliya entered in hotel to find it quite a man was sitting on sofa and was sipping wine and was seeing aliya
aliya-yeh zain abdullah ka room no kya hai
counter girl-ma'ma room no is 1603 and floor is 16
aliya-thank you
ZAIN'S ROOM
aliya press the door bell with her soft fingers and zain opened the door aliya lost her breath zain was looking hot he was wearing same clothes which he wored on their suhugaraat
zain-aliya andhar aao
aliya entered in room only to find it decorated by flowers and candle
she closed her eyes to feel the moment which was pure zain closed the door and she turned back
zain-aliya thank you
aliya-zain tumhe jo bhi kehna hai jaldi keho mera paas jyade time nahni hai
zain-aliya mujhe todha time chahiye

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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
CHAPTER-26
ZAIN'S ROOM
zain-aliya mujhe todha time chahiye
aliya-zain
and she sits on bed and close her eyes
zain-aliya mujhe yeh baat tumse kehne thi ki aliya tumne zeeshaan ke saath nikkah karne ke liye haan kyu kahe
aliya gets up
aliya-kyun ke woh tumse better hai tumne mujhe yahan kyu bole woh mujhe pata hai tum mujhe chooein chahte ho
zain-aliya tum mera baar main yeh sochte ho
aliya-main asie kabhi nahni soche sakte thi zain lekin tumhare nafrat na mujhe force kiye tum toh mujhe nafrat karge bahut khush tha
zain-nahni aliya main tumse dura rehega kar kabhi khush nahni tha maine tumhe roza miss kiye ek raat asie nahni thi jab maine tumhe miss nahni kiye
aliya-oh really yeh sab tumhari problem thi meri problem kya thi zain main hi koi khush nahni thi pregnant hogaye phir yahan aaye iss naye city main jahaan mera aapna koi nahni tha sab mujhe bad eye deta tha
zain-aliya
aliya-zain maine bada mushkil se baccho ko baad kiye pir majboor hokare zeeshaan kiye company join kiye aur phir tum aayi
zain-aliya tumhe jo kehne tha tumne keh diye
he made aliya to sit on bed
zain-ab tum yahan betha rahoge aur main tumhe dekhta rahoga aur kuch nahni kahogain
and clock strike 1 and zain sat beside aliya and watch her through his eyes
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
loving all your stories continue soon
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CHAPTER-27
HOTEL
zain and aliya both dozed off , zain was about to lie down on bed just when he saw aliya was leing on bed and her curves were perfectly seen he covered her by a blanket and he himself dozed off on sofa
NEXT MORNING
aliya opened her eyes and was shocked to see that zain was sleeping on sofa and she was sleeping on bed
aliya made herself straight and took her purse and was about to leave just when her sari got tuked in sofa the turned back but soon her sari was proper all thanks to zain
she glanced at him and he passed her a smile and aliya left the room
HOME
aliya got fresh and was about to go to make breakfast just when she got a call
aliya-hello
zeeshaan-baby aaj main ghar aaye raha hoon bacho ke saath time spent karne
aliya-lekin
but before she can protest he cuts the call
again she got a call
aliya-hello
zain-aliya main aaj ghar aaye raha hoon kyun ki mujhe bacho ke saath time spend karne hai
aliya -thank you zain
zain-thanks for what
aliya-nothing then see you
and she cuts the call
BREAKFAST TABLE
aliya was looking pretty in pink top and white jeans her hairs were open and were straight and her flicks were disturbing her ,zeeshaan was already present but aliya didn't talked with him
and door bell ranged aliya rushed to open it and tjere she saw zain by wearing black shirt and grey type jeans he was looking handsome he was clean shave as always, aliya indicated him to come inside
kids ran towards him and hugged him aliya smiled at them which didn't went unnotice by zain
aliya-chalo breakfast karte hai
jade-papa
zeeshaan-haan bolu beta
jade-aap mera papa nahni ho
zain-beta kya hua
jade-papa mujhe family tree main full marks mile
zain-thats great
sapphire-papa u only love jade u don't love me
zain-no papa loves u both equally
and kids hugged zain
zeeshaan was fuming in angry and aliya got tears in her eyes
zeeshaan-bohat bhook lage hai kuch khane ke liye hai
ayat-haan jijiu breakfast ready hai main abhi serve karte hoon
zain looked at aliya and eyed her lips which didn't went unnotice by aliya
aliya-main abhi strawberry milkshake leke aate hoon
and she goes to kitchen and cries her heart
aliya-kyu allah sab mera saath hi kyu bacche zain se kitne mobhata karte hai lekin phir bhi do din baat unka baap koi aur hoge kyu
ayat comes from behind and aliya hugs her

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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER-28
HOME
aliya wiped her tears and took the jug in her hand and went towards dinning area
aliya was about to serve jade, just when by mistakely his hand got stuck in chair and in the process of releasing his hand he loss his balance and aliya holds him and the juice falls on zeeshaan
kids and aliya saw zeeshaan and burst in fits of laughter
zeeshaan was fuming in angry
zeeshan-yeh kya kiye tumne aliya
and he raise his hand to slap aliya and she close her eyes
but someone stops him
zain-himmat kaise huaein tumhare
aliya opened her eyes and kids hugged her legs
zeeshaan-iss ne kya kiye
zain-jo bhi kiye woh kiye lekin haath uthane ke koshish kaise kiye tumne
aliya keeps holds zain's arm
aliya-zain chodo jaane do bacche bhi yahan pe hai aur mujhe koi drama create nahni karne
zain-you may leave mr.ahmed
zeeshaan-zain pharso toh aliya mera hojayge phir tum kya karoge
and zain was fuming in angry but aliya catched his arm more tightly
zeeshaan goes away
aliya-zain chalo breakfast karte hai come
zain-mujhe koi breakfast nahni karne sare bhook khatam hogaye meri
and he goes away
aliya-allah yeh kya ho rahe hai
jade-mamma bhook lage hai
aliya-haan chalo beta
kids were having there breakfast
aliya-ayat main abhi aate hoon
and she rushes towards her room and closes the door and cries her heart out
NIGHT
HOME
aliya takes her sari out which she will wear tomorrow
aliya-allah kal meri enagegment hai ab sab kuch aapke haath main hai

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Posted: 8 years ago
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CHAPTER-28
ENAGAMENT HALL
ALIYA'S ROOM
ayat was helping aliya to get ready ,aliya was looking beautiful
ayat-appi main abhi aate hoon
aliya-okay fine
aliya gets a call
aliya-hello ,hello yeh sound clear kyu nahni hai lagate hai network problem hai bahar jaakar dekhte hoon
aliya walks in corridor only to find suriaya
aliya-mami yahan kya kare rahe hai
and she follows suriaya
suriaya enters a room ,aliya hides behind the pillar to see what she is doing their
suriya-zain yeh ladke kabhi tumhare thi hi nahni
zain-mom please
suriya-please what zain?
zain-mom jo bhi hua woh sab meri wajah se hua aur aaj jo bhi ho rahe hai woh main deserve karte hoon mom
suriya-zain tumhe kitne baar kahan maine ki nikkah kar lo lekin tumne meri nahni sune
zain-mom mujhe nikkah nahni karne
suriya-zain thik hai nikkah mat karo lekin mera ek sawaal ka jaab do jise ladke ne hamare khushi humse cheen liye uske liye tum aapne life spoil kyu kare rahe ho
zain-jo bhi hua woh aliya ne nahni kiye tha woh sab nafisa ne kiye tha
suriya-oh really yeh sab nafisa kyu karege usko kya milte iss sab se
zain-bahut kuch mom
suriya-zain aur aliya kabhi ek nahni hosakte
zain-jitne aap mujhe usse dura karegein main utne hi uske paas jaogein
suriaya-zain chup chap se meri saath mumbai chalo
zain-nahni mom main aliya ko chodkar nahni jaogein
suriaya-aliya aliya aliya magic kar diye hai ,arre woh jo bachche hai woh bhi tumhare nahni hai
zain-mom aliya bohat pakka hai so please zuban sambhal kar baat kijiye aap
suriaya slaps him ,zain kept his hand on his cheek
suriaya-iss tarah baat karte ho tum mujhe se mom hoon main tumhare tum se zyaadya tumhara sahi yaa galat smajhte hoon main
zain-oh really itne hi smart hai aap toh mujhe tab kyu nahni roka jab main aliya ko itne hurt kare rahe tha kaash mom aapne yeh thapad 3 saal pehle maare hote toh shaayad aaj aliya meri hote
suriya-zain mujhe kuch nahni sunne tum mujhe bolu ke tumhe nikkah karoge yaa nahni
zain-nahni
suriaya-mom hoon main tumhare lekin phir bhi tum
zain-mera aap se aur abdullah family se koi rishte nahni mom kyu ke jo lok meri aliya ko galte smajhte hai woh, mere unse koi relation anhni hai
suriaya-u will regret zain u will regret
and she goes away
a tear rolled down from aliya's cheeks
suriaya was fuming in angry she sat in her car and drove back to airport
zain comes out from door and aliya hides

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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
loving it. will aliya forgive zain this soon

Edited by pree551 - 8 years ago
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CHAPTER-29
ENAGAMENT HALL
zain and aliya both were wearing this

aliya walked with ayat till stage , all the eyes were upon aliya and zeeshaan
zeeshaan made aliya to wear ring and aliya too made zeeshaan to wear the ring everyone clapped for them ,zain was having his gaze fixed on aliya
a tear rolled down from aliya's cheek she wiped that tear
aliya was feeling dizzy , and zain words were echoing ears"jitne aap mujhe usse dura kargein main utne hi uske paas jaunga" this words were hitting her memory again and again
aliya somehow got some courage to walk towards food area ,she grabbed a glass of water and drink it in one gulp but the water didn't provide her any courage
she walked near poolside area with heavy steps and took a support of a pillar to stand still just when she find someone near her he was none other than zeeshaan
zeeshan holds aliya's hands
zeeshaan-aliya chalo photos click karte hai
aliya-mera mann nahni hai zeeshaan tum jao please
zeeshaan-kyu
aliya-bas asie hi
zeeshaan-thik hai agar photos click nahni kare sakte toh kuch aur toh kare sakte hai hum
aliya-matlba
zeeshaan-matlba yeh baby
and holds her hand tightly
zeeshaan-suhugaraat toh bane sakte ho na meri saath
aliya-nahni zeeshaan please don't touch me
zeeshaan-kyu nahni hone wale shahaur hoon main tumhare
aliya-zeeshaan nahni please
and his hands neared her pinned pallu so that he can take off her sari and fulfill his wish and aliya was pleading him

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