kurbaan hua (part-2) epilogue Updated a zaya ff (completed)

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Posted: 8 years ago

SO I AM BACK HERE TO COMPLETE ZAIN AND ALIYA'S LOVE STORY

SO WHAT YOU THINK ZAIN WILL FIND ALIYA?WILL ALIYA FORGIVE ZAIN FOR HIS DEEDS?OR SOMETHING ELSE WILL HAPPEN
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SO FOR ALL THE ANSWERS YOU HAVE TO READ KURBAN HUA PART 2

COMMENTS ARE MOST WELCOME

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Posted: 8 years ago

CHAPTER-1
AFTER 3 YEARS
BARKAT VILLA
MUMBAI
ZAIN'S BEDROOM

zain was wearing this and was in front aliya's photo
zain-aliya kaha ho tum l really miss you
surriya was passing through his room and heard him
surriya-pata nahni lekin kyun yeh zain smajhte nahni ki aliya kitne galte hai
and she made a face and went away
AUTHOR'S VOICE
tho kya lagta hai aapko kya zain aur aliya kabhi ek dusre se mile payegein

soon chandkhala entered inside his room
chandhala-zain chalo breakfast ready hai
zain-haan chandkhala
zain-dekha aliya tumhara bina kya haal hai mera breakfast tak karne bhula jaate hoon main,allah meri aliya kahan hai

NEXT UPDATE-WHERE IS ALIYA?

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Posted: 8 years ago

CHAPTER-2
NEW YORK
two kids were running around the dinning table
just then a beautiful girl came to them with a tray in her hand ,she placed the tray on table and the girl was none other than aliya
aliya was wearing this (same hairstyle)

aliya-jade sapphire chalo beta school ka time ho raha hai
WRITER-so you all might be thinking that who are jade and sapphire well ,jade is aliya's son and sapphire is her daughter ,well now as you all read in part 1 that aliya was pregnant so aliya gave birth to twins
aliya serve them breakfast and then she found her bestfriend coming down stairs
(in this ff ayat is not aliya's sister she is her best friend)
ayat-aliya good morning
aliya and ayat both hugged each other
aliya-good morning
ayat-kya baat hai appi aaj toh aap bohat hot dekh rahe ho
aliya-ayat tu bhi na
and she playfully hit her on hand
aliya and ayat both are bestfriend but ayat calls her aliya appi as she respect aliya as her elder sister

soon children finish their breakfast and aliya and twins drove to school
SCHOOL
aliya got down from car and twins holded her hand and aliya took them till school entrance
twins before going inside holded aliya by her hand and made her to bend down and both placed a kiss on each cheek together to which aliya smiled and winked at them and wave them a hand

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Posted: 8 years ago

CHAPTER-3
SAME DAY
NEW YORK
OFFICE
aliya entered inside her office and directly went to her cabin just then
peon-ma'ma sir ko pharso ke meeting ke file chahiye
aliya-okay fine
and he goes aliya heads towards her boss cabin
aliya -sir
and the boss was none other than zeeshan
zeeshan-haan aliya aao
aliya gave him the file and he roamed his eyes on aliya from top to bottom,aliya was not aware of this
zeeshan-sab thik hai ,aliya ek kaam karo aaj raat ko mera saath dinner karne chalo
aliya-no mujhe raat ko mujhe meri family ke saath time spend karne hota hai
zeeshan-oh really lekin kyun tum unka khyaal rakhate ho jab ki wo zain ke bacche hai
aliya-mera bhi haq hai meri bhi bacche hai wo
and she walks out before she can open the door she heard a word
zeeshan-bina papa ke bacche
a tear roll down from aliya's eyes and she ran to car
NIGHT TIME
aliya was lost in her thought just then she saw that jade and sapphire were fighting
(pls imagine as three years old child is speaking)
jade-mera hai
sapphire-nahni mera hai
aliya wiped her tear
aliya-jade sapphire yahan aao beta
they both ran in aliya's arm
aliya-kya hua
jade sat on bed by holding aliya's hand and sapphire sat in her lap
jade-mamma wo toy mera hai
aliya-toh kya hua beta sapphire aapke behna hai beta aapko share karne chahiye uske saath sab kuch
jade-okay mamma
and they both placed a kiss on her cheeks
MUMBAI
BARKAT VILLA
ZAIN'S BEDROOM
zain was working for in his laptop just then he got a call
zain-hello
manager-sir pharso aapko newyork jaane hai
zain-okay tum meri tickets book kar dena
manager-yaa

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Nandini

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Posted: 8 years ago

Bravo! It's wonderful!

With BI starting again, I'm more happy than ever.

I'll get to see all those super hot, super cute episodes.

(With, of course, the songs not muted. It really pissed me off.)

Do continue soon.

It's an impeccable story.

Can't wait for more.

Do update longer next time please.

Love,

Tani ❤️

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steelfan

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: xxSomeonesLuvxx
Bravo! It's wonderful!
With BI starting again, I'm more happy than ever.
I'll get to see all those super hot, super cute episodes.

(With, of course, the songs not muted. It really pissed me off.)

Do continue soon.
It's an impeccable story.
Can't wait for more.

Do update longer next time please.

Love,
Tani ❤️

so read my os my first karwa chauth

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Nandini

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: steelfan

so read my os my first karwa chauth

I've read it. Wonderful work. 👏

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Posted: 8 years ago

CHAPTER-4

NEXT MORNING
BARKAT VILLA
MUMBAI

zain was packing his stuffs when surriya entered in his room,
surriya-zain lo main kar dete hoon
zain-no thanks
surriya-zain karne do mujhe kyun ki jo main karte hoon wo thik karte hoon
zain-oh really ,mujhe lagta hai ki jo aap karte hai wo galte hota hai
surriya-kya kiye maine
zain-kyun jab bhi main aliya ko yaad karte hoon toh aap mujhe kehte hai ki aliya galte thi
surriya-haan thi
zain-mom enough
surriya-pata nahni kyun zain lekin mujhe lagta hai ki tumhe kabhi aliya nahni milege
zain-mom pls
and surriya makes a face and leaves the room
NEW YORK
MORNING
(aliya was wearing this)

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aliya was serving the kids just then she got a call
aliya-hello
zeeshan-aliya abhi tak tum kyu nahni aaye office
aliya-shyaad watch nahni hai tumhara paas issliye yeh sawaal kar rahe ho
and she cuts the call ,soon a message beeped in her cell
and the message was
PARENTS TEACHER MEETING,KINDLY MARK YOUR PRESENCE

SCHOOL
jade and sapphire were at home as they had a holiday today ,aliya was waiting for her number just then the peon called her
peon-aliya kaun hai
aliya-main hoon aliya
peon-okay aapko bula hai
aliya entered inside the classroom
aliya-good morning
teacher-good morning ma'ma pls have a seat
aliya-jade aur sapphire kaise hai
teacher-bohat cute hai lekin mujhe ek tension hai
aliya-kaise tension
teacher-wo kal maine saare bacho ko kaha ki unke papa ka naam bolu sab ne mujhe, unke papa ka naam bola lekin, jade sapphire ne hi kuch answer nahni diye aur jab maine unko question kiye ki aapko aapke papa ka naam nahni pata hai kya? toh wo mujhe keh raha tha ki unko pata nahni ki unke papa kaha hai, kya aapke husband aapke saath nahni rehta ?
tears rolled down from aliya's cheeks
aliya-wo kya hai na ki jade sapphire ko nahni pata hai unka naam
teacher-okay nice to meet you
aliya just passed her a smile and she left the room and she ran to her car

NEW YORK
HOME
aliya directly went to her room and she closed the door and she finally fell on bed and cried her heart out
aliya-allah kyu sab kuch mera aur mera bacho ke saath ki kyu hote hai main sab ko kya jaab doon
and she cried her heart out

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CHAPTER-5
NEW YORK
MORNING
AIR PORT
zain checked out from airport and was about to hire the taxi just then a strong and a positive feeling came to his mind ,his mind was telling him that he will get his everything
and he hired a taxi and drove to hotel
NEW YORK
HOME
aliya was preparing her stuffs for meeting
ayat-appi ab tension mat lo sab kuch best hojayege
aliya-yes
and they both hugged each other
NEW YORK
HOTEL
zain got fresh and was now standing in balcony just then he got a call
zain-hello
arfan-hi sir wo actually aaj aap mujhe khan company main mile sakte hai kya ,wo na aaj main free hoon
zain-yes

NEXTUPDATE-ALIYA'S MEETING...

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CHAPTER-6
NEW YORK
KHAN COMPANY
aliya was wearing this

aliya entered the office and everyone has his eyes on aliya because she was looking extremely hot and breath taking
zeeshan looked at aliya from down to top
aliya was about to enter the conference room just then a word stop her
zeeshan-kya baat hai ,waise aliya tum ek raat ka kitne charge karte ho
a tear roll down from aliya's eyes and without saying a word she entered in conference hall
aliya was conducting the meeting just then zain passed from conference room and he saw aliya and he was shock
zain-nahni yeh aliya nahni hosakte yeh mera imagination hai
and he went back to his work
soon meeting got over
everyone was praising aliya
aliya-thank you every one
aliya drove back to her home
HOME
aliya step inside the house and kids came running to her and hugged her legs
aliya lean down and came to their heights
aliya-mamma ko miss kiye
jade and sapphire-yes
and placed a kiss on her cheeks and aliya closed her eyes
jade-mamma tummy main dance ho raha hai
aliya burst in laughter
aliya-do minute wait karo main abhi aap ke liye kuch lekar aate hoon
aliya went to kitchen and prepared maggie for them aliya brought the maggie in three bowls
and kept them on dinning table
aliya-chalo beta
jade and sapphire ran towars table and took their seat
jade ,sapphire and aliya had their maggie
aliya-toh kaise tha aapka school
jade-superb
sapphire-haan mamma
jade-hum ko ek project dena hai school main next week
aliya-kaise project
jade and sapphire-family tree
and a tear rolled down from aliya's cheek

NEXT UPDATE-SO WHAT YOU THINK WILL ALIYA AND ZAIN WILL MEET ...GUSSES ARE ALWAYS WELCOME

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