SwaRon SS: It's What We Do/Breathe In The Air |COMPLETED| - Page 9

Sneha Ray

@sneharay

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Posted: 8 years ago

#81

Superb update..very well written👏

Waiting for next part..update soon😊

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#82

Reserved Dude :3

^Unreserve^

😳

The kiss wasn't real? How lucky you should consider yourself that you are not standing in front of me? 😡

And you again chose to push My Swayam into the pit of pain? You love to do that, don't you??? 🤢

I feel like pulling my own hairs!!!!!!

And even though I feel so angry I am still happy because I expected worse!

I am liking how you through small scenes carrying the story forward. Skilled! 😳

I am not interested in your interesting stuff after what you did in this update. What I am going to do is to prepare myself for your subtle torture which you have planned for the next update, surely enough! 🤢

Chitra! *humph*

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#83

You know what I did above right?

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

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Posted: 8 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
You know what I did above right?

Something which has made me very happy. ☺️

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Aneesha

@aneesha93

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Posted: 8 years ago

#85

Nice update. Swayam's side cleared. Now waiting for Sharon's. I knew you wouldn't be good to make that kiss real, so nope, no disappointment there. Not one bit.

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Shreya

@Wandering_mind

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Posted: 8 years ago

#86

Hie...I wish you wouldn't have ended it here :(..

Nevertheless it was an interesting update. I feel sorry for Swayam for whatever happened with him.His character attracts me for the reason that he makes himself appear as one cool dude who actually holds so much pain inside him.

Sharon was attracted to him!..I don't know why I find Swayam more charming with every part.So Sharon drooling over him is totally understood. The kiss could have also been completely understood even if Swayam couldn't find an explanation but then you are being a little evil :( :(..

Very much glued now.Please update sooner.

Thanks for the PM.

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mythreyii

@mythreyii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#87

Hello

First of all beautiful banner

Secondly I read it twice hoping that I read wrong but no it was dream and I read it right.

And coming to their idea of letting out the past the whole scene was well described in words especially the way Sharon stares at swayum.

And swayums past indeed painful. But has happened for good.

Now awaiting Sharon's past and what after the revelation.

Superb update

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skywalker.

@skywalker.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#88

See...? I finally joined for you.. 😛

You had talked about this to me and I had told you I liked the idea. thank you for writing this..It's really nice.

Should've known you would never give us readers the kiss..You are so evil Rhapsody..🥺

I want to know what interesting thing you have stored for us, do update soon...😊

I don't even know if I will continue commenting here.. ajeeb jagah hai. 😆

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#89

I still could not believe that kiss was a dream..
How could you do this??
Never mind we will get it soon in coming updates...

So swayam told her the secret...
Waiting for Sharon's secret ...

Thanks for the pm

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

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Posted: 8 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb update..very well written👏
Waiting for next part..update soon😊

Thanks, will update by this weekend. :)

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