MANAN SS Tere Liye (chapter 18 on pg 92) 10.10.16 - Page 55

Awesome update. Manan's pov was mindblowing.both decided to give their relation a chance. Wow manik got prepared to impress nandini. Manik's notes were superb especially priority pqart was amazing. Eagerly waiting to read further. Continue soon

Desperately waiting for next parts update please ASAP
Please update Destined too please

Awsum update loved it soo
I felt bad fr nandu she ws so hurt...
Bt I really likd hw Manik said dat he wud get her trust bck on any cost!!
D way he said dat he wud never cheat on her aww I know he will never bt dat vibha she wud dfntly do sumthng bt dat still hs time till den i'm really xctd fr manan's date 😉 😆
Update soon
N pls update destined also im egrly waiting for it plzz
Thnks fr pm
Take care
Lots of love
Sanaa
😊

U updatd d next also I saw it nw
Lvd dis part too
Both PoV were awsum
Finlly Manik is realising dat he nvr lvd vibha
Waiting fr nxt
N ramdaan mubarak to u
Lots of love
Sanaa
😊

Originally posted by: cutiesanaa

U updatd d next also I saw it nw
Lvd dis part too
Both PoV were awsum
Finlly Manik is realising dat he nvr lvd vibha
Waiting fr nxt
N ramdaan mubarak to u
Lots of love
Sanaa
😊

thankuu soo much dear
ramadna Mubarak to u too

Originally posted by: Vandyandy

Hi Nabilaa

U gave update ??????

I actually forgot about this ff...

Nice one

Manik Nandini both ready to give THIER marriage a second chance

It's nice to see both want it to work...

It does takes time but given full priority one can be happy

Manik taking the efforts to impress Nandini which he did it very romantically..

Nandini finding it curious as how Manik knows what she is thinking

That's what true friends r...

So the date is to begun..

Excited about it

Update the NX soon

thanku soo much

Originally posted by: AsthaVerma92

Ohhhg god such a cute adorable update.../
Manan nd der beautiful journey...
Manik's love for each other will nw start glooming...

Plzzz update new part soon

thankuu soo much dear

chapter 14


Driver: maam yahan se apko straight jana hai

Nandini nods and walk ahead

Nandini went straight ahead as instructed by the driver but she couldn't find manik anywhere she was afraid to be alsone but then she composed herself by stating that manik is here only with her right by her side

Finally letting go all her patience nandini called out for manik

N: manik ??

N: manik ...kahan ho tum ??

Suddenly her mobile beeped she opened her phone to gind a message from manik

Message

Missing me... Aww I didn't knew my SOON TO BE girlfriend is so desperate (nandini rolled her eyes on his comment ) hehe ok jokes apart the thing is that miss soon to be girlfriend you would have to find me are itni mehnat ki mene ab thori tum bhi karo...

Ek choti si help u can go to your right

Come soon ...waiting

Manik

Nandini shook her head and moved towards her right to find a spark of ligh coming she moved forward and went ll aww as she found the floor lit with candles and latern and glowing so beautifully [pic 3]

She was really amazed that manik planned so much for her but what she didn't knew was that this was just start

She keeps aside her thoughts and then keeps her first step on the floor and slowly starts to move ahead when she is showered with rose petals falling on her endlessly ...[pic2]

She was happy to say would be understatement cause she was beyond being happy she had always dreamt of this with manik but alas all doesn't go as we want ...

But whatever it was and however it was ...It was beautiful ,and outstanding for her

Finally she completed the litted part with continuous flower shower on her

By the time she reached the end of the path she was standing and facing a beautiful beach infront of her

This amazed her further and she was going all awww on how much has he did for her

By now she only wanted to see manik and she was looking here and ther for him oonly but als he was no where

She took her phone out and call him when he graced her with his presence


m: flowers for u !! [pic 4]

n: thankuu :)))


M:o did u like it ??

N: I loved it manik !!

M: arey waah itne men hi khush and I had to do soo much huuh... pata hai kitna thak gaya men ...

N: shutup manik now show me whats next ???

M: okay so for that we have to go some where and yes bedfore u ask just let me tell u just walk straight ...

Nandini looks at him confusingly but then she walks staright which leads both of them to the start of the sea where a boat is waiting

N: manik ... A boat ...??

M: ahah... nope a boat house it s !! [pic1]

Nandini was o surprised by this that a gasp left her mouth

But then manik has already stepped on to the boat he held out his hand for nandini who looked at him for some minute trying to absorb all this is real and then she keeps her hand on maniks and with hhis help climb the boat...

Relations are a beautiful gft for all of may it be any ... Its on us that how we mend and mould them ...RIGHT ??

CHAPTER 15


manik and nandini move inside when the first thing that nandini see is a pathway decorated by rose petals and candels

nandini was about to move ahead and take a step when manik stops her and says

m: nandini wait wo ...

n: kia hua manik ...

but instaed of replying manik come ahead of nandini right in her infront and says

m: nandini u remember when ever we used to make promises in childhood we always use to blow a candle after doing so right

nandini nods

m: so today aswell I want to make some promises and to revive some promises again will u help me in blowing the candles as soon as we make promise

nandini mods and smiles happily ...

m: okay so lets start

so my first promise to always trust u and never let u down ...

nandini nods and blows the first candle ...

my second promise is to aleays make u feel specil just like a PRINCESS ... MY PRINCESS ...

nandini smiles happily and blows second candle

my third promise is to always to keep u happy

nandini was amazed and yet she blew the candle

my fourth promise is to never meke u cry and if I do so u can always hit me

nandini again blew the candle

my fifth promise is to stay by your side and be there whenever u need me

nandini smiles with tears in her eyes and blow the candle

my sixth promise is to fulfill all your wishes by hook or crook

nandini was beond happy and blows the camdle

m: miss murthy do u remember now what we have to do ??

n: yes I do

and with that both of them picked up the candle togather and looking in eachother eyes they speak togather

my seventh promise is to fulfill my all six promises made before ...

and with this they smile broadly and blew the candle togather ...

with the promises being done manik leads nandini to the area where their dinner was set

nandini and manik take seat and eat their dinner peacefully with some chit chats and laugh

after the dinner is finished

n: so whats next ??

m: how do u know there is more

n: (smiles ) bus I know

he smiles at her and then takes hher hand an leads her her to another room and bends down on his knees

n: manik

m: shhh... u were right there is still something left and that was this ( pointing his position ) nandini today morning we talked about being boyfriend and girlfriend right (nandini nods ) so to make it official . nandini jese har larki k khawab hote hain wese hum lerkon k bhi kuch sapne hot hain fark sirf itna hai k larkiayan express karti hain jab k larke nahi karpate but today I want to express it ...I wanted a life partner who is a friend more than a creepy and cranky girl I want a life partner jo apne se pehle meri family k abaare men sooche I wanted a person jo meri khushi men khush , dukh men udaaas ho hardships men mere sath and lastly who trust me completely and I see all them in you I want to spend my time with u call u mine officially and with evey single RIGHT will u give me this right ?? will u honour me by being my girlfriend and bear me al life long ???

nandini was overwhelmed , shocked , surprised , happy and what not she couldn't say anything so she just nods happily with tears in her eyes

m: kia ... keh k baatao

n: yes manik I WILL BE YOUR GIRLFRIEND ...

manik stood up and nanini immediately hugs him manik was taken aback but then he also hugs her back

m: so miss girlfriend there is a gift for u to begin with our beginning

n: what ??

m:...




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if u have so much problem then plz don't read it I am not forcing anyone
yes the update is late because of all this I couldn't write
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