Hey Neet :)Honestly dear i don't have words to say anything about it. You just blew me to such an extent that it is getting difficult to form a single sentence. Very frankly i have read many dark and mature stories although this was something very different may be because i've never expected something like this on SwaRon that too from you. From your first FF i know that you are a bold and mature writer but still i didn't expect this. This was perfection.
Writing such stuffs is very difficult and you completely showed loyalty to that. I must say it is the one of the finest dark/mature update that i ever read, you wrote it so flawlessly that it never gave me a wrong feeling, it was pure. As you said swayam want to make her regret rejecting him, he wanted to make her regret her choice and her actions, and your words literally screamed that.
I loved that part where he wanted revenge though he showed a hidden love to her, he gave her the feeling of a complete woman, the one who made her feel all the ecstatic feeling and she would never forget him. And now she saw him so it is going to be very difficult to forget him.
He did not realize that he took her virginity, now it is going to be something really interesting. Girl i really don't want swayam to regret and i don't know why but this Sharon is really very intriguing that she has something inside her that is making her interesting, i know she did wrong to swayam in the past but there is something about her that forced me to feel sympathy towards her, i sympathize Sharon here, and i fell in love with swayam in the first para of this story.
Really looking forward to more of this, this will become one of the best FF on swaron here, I can bet on it.
I'm really very sorry for not reading it before, was hell busy and girl you just made me your fan, now i admire you and the way you played with word was impeccable.
Really enjoyed it.
Update soon...
This was one of long comment and that is for being so late.
- Keechu
Edited by --Keechu-- - 8 years ago
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