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Hello dear friends!πŸ€—Hope you all are doing well. 😳
First of all,i am sorry for changing an FF into an OS!πŸ˜²πŸ˜›Guys,i had promised you a story as a sequel of "symbol of love" but i never did know i could make it as short as an os! πŸ˜›πŸ˜†Nowadays i am a bit stuck with both my ff's but i am trying my best to write whatever i could in this os.Hope you like it.😳Dedicated to bhatakti aatma of the forum aka rising environmentalist aka biggest eye aka most helpful member,the one and only natasha jaan.😎😳 Here you go-


LITTLE PRINCESS


AS came running to his father who was busy at his daily practice at the dangalsthal.
AS:Dajiraj,dajiraj!
Maharana pratap(Mp):Kya baat hai amar singhji? Aur aaj itni subah subah uth gaye aap?!
AS:Humme toh uthna hi tha dajiraj. Aakhir humare dajiraj ka janmadin jo hai aaj.Toh humne socha ki hum hi aapko sabse poorva aapka uphaar denge.Boliye,hum hi aaye haina sarvapratham aapke paas?
Mp:Haan haan aaj humare pyaare se putra hi aaye hain sarvapratham humare paas.Vaise,kya uphaar laye hain aap humare liye?
AS:Itni bhi kya shighrata hai dajiraj? Pehle apni ankhein band kijiye.
Mp:Accha accha thik hai.(closing his eyes and extending his hands) Chaliye humne band kar li hai apni ankhein.Ab layiye.
In return AS placed a small box,wrapped up nicely in a piece of cloth in his hands that he was until now hiding in his coat.
Mp(surprised): Isme kya hai amar?
AS:Swayam hi dekh lijiye.
Mp carefully unwrapped the cloth and opened the box,only to find a fully tied pagdi in it which was beautifully embroidered and was studded with gems.
AS:Kyun dajiraj,kaise laga ye aapko?
Mp:Uttam,atiuttam.Bahut hi sundar hai ye.
AS:Toh phir isse pehen lijiye na.
Mp:Ye uphaar aap laye haina? Toh aap hi pehena dijiye.
Saying this,he bent down and AS made him wear the pagdi,after which he lifted him up in his arms and took him inside the mahal.

Back at the palace, everyone wished him whole heartedly and he received loads of expensive gifts .A grand feast was to be organized that evening in the honour of the maharana and even the common citizens had been cordially invited for it. However,for the whole day,ajabde was no where to be seen. She had obviously not forgotten his birthday because she was in charge of the evening bash but she was usually the one who wished him first and he always waited for her unique gifts.But this time no such thing happened and Mp was quite shocked by this.

So,when he spotted her in her room that evening,getting ready for the party,
Mp:Kya baat hai ajabde? Kahin aap humse rusht toh nahi hain? Aaj humare janmadin par aapne humme badhai bhi nahi di?!
Ajab:Nahi nahi ranaji.Bhala hum aapse kaise rusht ho sakte hain? Kintu humne socha ki aapke uphaar ke saath hi hum aapko shubhkamnayein dein.
Mp:Ye aap kya keh rahin hain ajabde? Aap toh har baar humme sabse poorva uphaar bhi deti hain aur badhai bhi.Phir iss baar?
Ajab(smiling): Ranaji,bas thodi si pratiksha aur kar lijiye na.Humme poorna vishwas hai ki iss baar bhi aapko humare uphaar sabse adhik pasand aayega.Aur satya kahein toh pichli har baar se bhi adhik.
Mp:Yadi aisi baat hai toh humme intezaar rahega.

Everyone enjoyed themselves to the fullest at the dawat.But Mp's mind was still lingering around ajabde and her special gift.He was completely puzzled by the hints she gave him.

Finally when the feast ended and Mp reached his room along with amar,he found her awake and waiting this time.
Ajab:Janmadin ki hardik badhaiyan ranaji.Ishwar kare ki aap sadaiv aise hi prasanna rahein.
Mp:Ye kya ajabde, aapne toh kaha tha ki aap humare liye ek bahut hi vishesh uphaar layi hain.Parantu vo humme nahi dikh raha hai,kahin par.
Ajab:Ranaji,jaisa ki humne aapse kaha tha iss baar ka uphaar keval aapke liye hi nahi parantu amar ke liye bhi vishesh hoga.
Amar:Sach maa? Ab toh humse bhi aur pratiksha nahi hoti.
Ajab(blushing):Humare aor se aapka uphaar hai aapke putra ya phir putri.
Mp:Kya? Kya kaha aapne? Aap satya keh rahi hain ajabde?
Ajab:Ji ranaji,ye bilkul satya hai ki aap phir se dajiraj banne wale hain.
Amar:Maa hum kuch samjhe nahi?
Ajab:Haan haan amar singhji,aapke chote bhai ya behen aane wale hain bahut jald.
Amar:Sach? (jumping up in joy)Yayy! Humari bhai ya behen aane wale hain. Wohoo!!!
Ajab(smiling at his innocence):Arey arey,itne prasanna hain aaj humare kunwarji?
Mp:Ajabde,sachmuch ye humare jeevan bhar mein humare janmadin par milne wala humara sabse priya uphaar hai.Sach.
Saying this he embraced them both in a warm hug,never to let them go.



~(2 months later)~
From the past few days,the maharana and maharani of mewar were a bit too occupied with their duties for their subjects and so they could hardly spare any time for their family and their son.But one day,they managed to finish their works early enough to reach their room by evening.When amar came to know of this,his joy knew no bounds.He had been waiting for a long time to enjoy a game or two with them and so he came right away.
AS:Dajiraj,ranima, aaj aap dono jaldi aa gaye haina? Toh aaj kuch der humare saath kheliye na.
Ajab:Kyun nahi,hum awashya khelenge aapke saath.Kyun ranaji?
Mp:Haan bilkul.Toh kahiye,kya khelna chahte hain aaj humare chote kunwar?
AS:Pakdam-pakdayi?
Ajab:Arey vaah,chalo thik hai khelte hain.
Mp:Nahi nahi, ajabde,vaidji ne aapko vishram karne ke liye kaha hai na? Humme nahi lagta ki aapko amar ke saath aisa koi khel khelna chahiye iss samay.
Amar's face fell down at this.
Amar:Arthat aap nahi khelengi maa?
Mp:Nahi amar,ye khel aapki maasa nahi khel payengi. Aap jante haina ki aapke bhai ya behen aane wali hain.Issi karan vaidji ne inhe vaidji ne inhe vishram karne ko kaha hai.
Ajab:Kintu hum na sahi,aapke dajiraj khelenge aapke saath.Haina ranaji? Aur uske paschat koi aur khel khel sakte hain hum teeno saath mein.
Mp:Haan toh taiyar hain aap? Hum aa rahe hain aapko pakadne.
Amar:Nahi dajiraj. (shouting happily and running around) Aap itni saralta se humme nahi pakad payenge.
They chased each other for a long time until at last mp caught amar.
Mp:Dekha? Pakad liya na humne aapko?
Amar:Haan. Chaliye ab humari baari hai aapko pakadne ki.
This time,Mp let himself get caught easily so that amar won the game.
Amar:Yeah! Humne dajiraj ko pakad liya,pakad liya!
Mp(pretending to be sad):Arey nahi hum toh haar gaye.(smiling)Parantu humare putra ne haraya hai aaj humme.
Ajabde who was watching the game uptil now said.
Ajab:Dekha ranaji.Humne kaha tha na aapse,humare amar hi vijayi honge.(extending his hands to him)Chaliye,ab aayiye humare paas, humare shoorvir.
After a short pause and a mother-son hug,amar put forth his idea for the next game.
Amar:Ab hum ek naya khel khelenge maasa. Ye khel humme humare mitra ne sikhaya tha.Hum bas abhi aaye,awashyak samagri lekar.
He went outside to the kitchen and in a moment,was back with a cooking vessel that had a long neck and a narrow opening.
Amar:Ab hum iss patra(vessel) ko ghumayenge.Aur phir jiske aor bhi ye aayega,usse vahi karna hoga jo anya khiladi kahein.(looking questioningly at Mp) Iss khel mein toh maasa bhi sammilit hongi na?
Mp:Haan haan kyun nahi amar?Chaliye prarambh karte hain.
Amar rotated the vessel and after a few seconds,it stopped,its mouth pointing towards Mp!!
Amar:Dajiraj! Dajiraj!
Ajab:Amar,ab sochkar batayiye,aapke dajiraj ko kya karna hoga?
Amar:Ermm...ermm...haan gaana!!
Ajab:Kya?
Amar:Maa,humne aapko aur dadisa ko bahut baar bhajan gaate hue suna hai kintu dajiraj ko kabhi bhi nahi.
Mp:Amar,hum aur gaana? Bhala hum kaise..?
Amar:Nahi dajiraj.Aapko gaana bhi hoga.
Ajab(misceviously):Haan haan ranaji,gaana toh aapko padega hi.
Amar(clapping his hands):Dajiraj,ab jaldi prarambh kijiye.
Mp:Accha accha thik hai.Hum gaa dete hain.
And Mp began to sing a bhajan for kanhaji.And not to be mentioned, AS and ajab had to shut their ears in irritation,so harsh and heavy did he sound.After finishing the song, when Mp questioned them about how he fared,ajab replied sarcastically.
Ajab:Ranaji,ab hum aapko kya bataye,kya bataye ki kitna accha gaate hain aap.Itna accha ki amar dobara kabhi bhi aapse gaana sunne ki hath nahi karenge,kyun amar?(giggling)
Mp:Ajabde,aapne hi humme gaane ke liye kaha aur ab aap hi humari hasi uda rahi hain? Aap chinta na karein,aapki baari bhi awashya aayegi iss khel mein.
Amar:Chaliye,ab dusri baar ghumate hain hum isse.
And in the second round, the vessel ended up on ajabde!
Amar:Toh maa aap...ermm..
Mp(smirking):Hum batate hain aapko amar singhji. Humare nikat toh aayiye.
And Mp whispered something in AS's ears after which his face lit up.
Amar:Maa,humne soch liya hai ki aapko kya karna hai.Aapko dajiraj ko ye batana hoga ki aap unke vishay mein kya sochti hain aur aapke hriday mein kya hai unke liye.Abhi yahin par.
The thought of confessing her love for her husband in front of her son made her go all red like a tomato.
Ajab:Amar hum...vo hum...
Mp(with a naughty smile):Dekhiye na amar singhji ,aapne aur aapki maasa ne humse toh sabko kuch karva liya.Aur ab ve swayam hi isse bachne ka prayas kar rahi hain.Kahiye na unse.
Amar:Maa,aapko karna hi padega.Dajiraj ne bhi toh kiya tha na jo humne unse kaha.Ab jaldi se keh bhi dijiye.
Ajab:Amar..haan vo humme kuch mahatvapoorna karya yaad aa gaya hai.Humme issi kshana jaana hoga.Hum chalte hain.
And as she got up to leave,Mp held her hand,
Mp:Itni bhi kya jaldi hai maharanisa. Ek baar apne ranaji se apne hriday ki baat kehkar toh jayiye.
Ajab(whispering):Ye kya kar rahe hain aap ranaji? Amar bhi hain yahan par. Aur aap amar ke samne hi..? Jane dijiye humme,humne kaha.
Mp:Ahan!Jab tak aap humse nahi kahengi,hum nahi jane dene wale hain aapko,bilkul nahi.
Ajab(closing her eyes tight): Hum bahut adhik prem karte hain ranaji aapse.
Mp:Aur?
Ajab(still with her eyes close):Aur hum aapke bina ek pal bhi nahi reh sakte.
Mp:Aur?
Ajab(opening her eyes):Aur kya? Ab humne keh diya na aapse,ab chodiye humme.
Mp:Rukiye ajabde, ab amar ki baari.Jaldi se batayiye,amar ko kya karna chahiye?
Ajab:Humare mat se,ab amar ko sone jane chahiye.Raat bahut ho chuki haina?
Mp:Haan yahi thik rahega.
Ajab:Chaliye ab amar.
Amar:Haan thik hai,kintu aaj aapko humme kahani bhi sunani padegi.Sunayengi na maa?
Ajab:Aaj kahani hum nahi aapke dajiraj sunayenge aapko.
Mp:Kya hum?
Ajab:Haan aap hi.
Amar:Haan dajiraj,sunayiye na kahani.
Mp:Accha thik hai hum sunayenge aapko kahani.
Amar:Keval humme hi nahi,aapko humare bhai ya behen ko bhi kahani sunani padegi.
Ajab:Haan ye baat toh hai.
Amar laid down on their large double bed while pratap narrated to him the tale of the rabbit and the lion. By the time he finished,AS was already fast asleep. Ajab slowly pecked amar's forehead and was about to lay down beside him when Mp exclaimed.
Mp:Aur humare liye?
Ajab(confused): Kya?
Mp:Jo bhi aapne abhi amar ko diya.Humme bhi chahiye ajabde.Ye bahut galat baat hai.
Ajab(blushing):Ranaji,aap kya keh rahe hain? Aur aaj toh hadd hi kar di apne.Amar ke samne hi?
Mp:Ab hum kya kar sakte hain ajabde? Humari patni se itna pyaar jo karte hain hum.
Ajab:Aap bhi na.
Mp slowly kissed her forehead slowly and then on her belly.
Mp:Chaliye ab aap so jayiye.Aapko vishram ki awashyakta hai.Aapko bhi aur humari santan ko bhi.



~(Rakshabandhan day)~
Chand and maan were busy preparing their thals when AS came in.
AS:Buasa,aap dono kya kar rahi hain?
Chand:Amar singhji,hum dadabhai ke liye rakhi taiyar kar rahein hain.
AS:Arey vaah! Toh aap humme bhi ek rakhi bandh dijiye na.
Maan:Amar singhji,hum bhala aapko rakhi kaise bandh sakte hain? Hum behenein apne bhai ko bandhengi rakhi.
Chand:Aapki behen hi bandh sakti hai aapko rakhi,hum nahi.(with the motive to trouble him) Kintu aapki toh koi behen nahi haina?
AS:Abhi nahi hai toh kya hua buasa? Agle varshe tak humari bhi behen aa jayegi aur humme bhi rakhi bandhegi.
Chand:Oh accha? Aur yadi aapke bhai hua toh?
AS:Nahi humne kaha na humari behen hi hogi buasa.Dekh lijiyega aap.
Chand:Nahi humme toh lagta hai ki bhabhisa ke putra hi hoga.Aapke bhai hoga,chota bhai.
AS:Nahi behen.
Chand:Bhai.
AS:Behen.
At the same time ajabde came there.
Ajab:Kya baat hai amar,chand? Aap dono iss prakar lad kyun rahein hain?
Maan:Hum batate hain bhabhisa,ye dono iss baat par lad rahe hain ki aapke putra hoga ya putri.
Chand:Dekhiye na bhabhisa,amar toh humara ek shoorvir kam karna chahte hain.
AS:Toh kya hua buasa? Humme toh behen hi chahiye,bas.
Ajab:Accha accha thik hai.Ab ladiye mat.Chahe bhai ho ya behen,aap toh unse utna hi prem karenge na amar?
AS:Haan awashya maa.Hum toh unhe swayam se door hi jane nahi denge.Unke saath khelenge aur unka bahut dhyan rakhenge.
Ajab:Ye hui na ek bade bhai wali baat.Hum jante they ki aap yahi kahenge.Toh phir chaliye ab,aapki buasa ko apni vyavasthayein karne dijiye.
And she took him away with her.




~(On ajabde's godbharai)~
After all the important rituals were completed in a grand manner on her godbharai function,when a tired ajabde returned back to her room,this time another person was waiting for her with a gift.
AS:Dekhiye maa,hum apni behen ya bhai ke liye kya laye hain.Ye khilona humne vishesh roop se unke liye hi mangwaya hai.Unko accha toh lagega na?
Ajab:Awashya kyun nahi? Aap unke liye koi uphaar laye aur unko accha na lage,aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya?(pretending to be sad) Kintu,humare liye? Ye kya amar,aap apne chote bhai/behen ke liye toh uphaar laye hain kintu humare liye nahi? Unke aane par aap humme bhool toh nahi jayenge?
Amar:Ye aap kya keh rahi hain maa? Bhala hum aapko kaise bhool sakte hain? Humme kshama kar dijiye,hum iss baar apni behen ke liye uphaar ki vyavastha karne mein itne magan ho gaye they ki hum aapke liye toh uphaar lana bhool hi gaye.Humme kshama kar dijiye.Aur aap humse rusht toh nahi haina?
And tears rolled down his cheeks.
Ajab(wiping his tears):Nahi nahi amar singhji.Hum toh keval parihas kar rahe they aapke saath bas. Aur hum aapse kabhi rusht nahi ho sakte,kabhi bhi nahi.Aur aap humare liye uphaar laye (touching her belly) ya inke liye,baat toh ek hi haina?
Mp:Ajabde,humare aur amar singhji ki taraf se ye uphaar hai,keval aapke liye.
He opened his fist and inside it was a beautiful peacock-shaped mang-tikka that was made of pure gold.
Ajab:Ranaji,ye toh bahut hi sundar hai,sachme.
Mp:Hum jante they ki aapko awashya hi pasand aayega.Aur ab aap ye samajh lijiye ki ye dono hi uphaar hum dono ki taraf se hain aap dono ke liye.
Ajab:Dhanyawad ranaji,amar.
Mp:Dhanyawad toh humme aapka karna chahiye ajabde.Aapne hi toh humme ye avasar diya haina prasannata ka.



~(8 months from the maharana's birthday)~

A beautiful little girl was crying in her mother's arms as she slowly tried to pacify her.She almost looked like a doll with her myriad dark eyes and reminded so much of her mother.She was fair like her father and looked so cute that amar couldn't wait to take her up in his arms.He went about the palace almost dancing in joy.He didn't miss sharing this happy news with a single playmate of his. He teased his chotibuasa,telling her that he was right and she had lost the bet.He was actually on cloud nine.
Meanwhile when the others left after congratualting the pair,Mp took his little princess in his arms.
Mp:Kitni pyaari hai humari putri.Humari toh ankhein hi nahi hat rahi hain inse.Aur ajabde,aapne amar singhji ko dekha? Kitne prasanna hain aaj vo apni behen ko pakar.
Ajab:Sach kaha aapne ranaji.Aaj hum sabke jeevan mein prasannata lekar aayi hai humari putri.
Amar(coming running in):Maa,maa,humme bhi dijiye na apni behen ko.Humme unke saath khelna hai.
Ajab:Abhi nahi amar singhji ,abhi ve bahut choti hain.Jab ye thodi badi ho jayengi na toh kheliyega aap unke saath.
Mp:Vaise ajabe,aapko yaad haina humne pehle jab amar hone wale they na tab bhi apni putri ke liye naam socha tha.
Ajab:Haan ranaji, jaisa ki aapne kaha tha hum inka naam rama kanwar rakhenge.Mata lakshmi ke saman hi gunwan aur sukh-samridhi ki pratik.
Amar:Arey vaah dajiraj! Ye naam toh bahut hi accha hai.Ab se hum bhi inhe rama hi kahenge.(turning to her)Kaisi hain aap humari behen rama?Dekhiye,aapke dadabhai aaye hain aapke paas.
And he lightly kissed her forehead at which she began crying.Amar paniced and moved away from her,afraid that he might have hurt her unknowingly.
Amar:Maa,kahin humare karan unhe peeda toh nahi ho rahi haina?
Ajab(smiling):Nahi,bilkul nahi amar.Jaisa ki humne kaha ve bahut choti hain amar abhi.Ve aapki baatein nahi samajh payengi.Kintu humme poorna vishwas hai ki ve bhi apne dadabhai se bahut prem karti hain.(turning towards her)Kyun haina,karti haina aap apne dadabhai se bahut prem?
This time,she actually moved her head,though unknowingly as if giving her approval to the love she had for her dadabhai.
Mp:Ajabde,dekhiye toh kaise muskura rahi hain ye. Aaj hum sabke jeevan ko khushiyon se bhar diya hai humari pyaari si rajkumari ne,sachmuch.

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Please please please please please...infinite times please read and review friends. 😳And please come back all my dear readers because the forum seems so lonely without you all.πŸ˜’
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Heyy Ramya... Well I can't express in words about this os... Loved in from my heart.. I was waiting for such os... Miss ajabde very much... But thank u sooo much for this os... Continue ur writings... Well i can only say beautiful, excellent, mashallah and all for this os...
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Awesome os ramya btw u know what happened to garima as to why she is not updating her story
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Originally posted by: Cutipie_esha

Heyy Ramya... Well I can't express in words about this os... Loved in from my heart.. I was waiting for such os... Miss ajabde very much... But thank u sooo much for this os... Continue ur writings... Well i can only say beautiful, excellent, mashallah and all for this os...


Oh my god! 😳 😳 I know i messed it all up this time. πŸ˜› But thank you so much for all your kind words dear. πŸ˜ƒ
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Thank you!! 😊
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Originally posted by: mrpjam

Awesome os ramya btw u know what happened to garima as to why she is not updating her story


Thank you dear. 😳 Well actually garima di has gone home and she was saying that there, she experiences a lot of network problem.And maybe she is busy due to diwali as well.I am also eagerly waiting for her updates.
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absolutely fab... loved the bonding between the three especially Ajab and Amar

Amar is very very cute and adorable
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Originally posted by: pari0706

absolutely fab... loved the bonding between the three especially Ajab and Amar

Amar is very very cute and adorable


Thank you so much pari!😳 Yup amar is soo cute even in the show.
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Your welcome!😊
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wow wonderful os ❀️
AS is too cute as always ...⭐️
loved the bonding 😳
amazing writing πŸ‘πŸ‘ keep coming with more πŸ˜›
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