Swaron FF - The Play Of Fate - New Update @ 42 - Page 7

Originally posted by: anjuvrushan

First chap..superb...love niya...what happened in their life...update fast

Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya

Sharon in prison!..they are away for soo long!..I am feeling so bad for her 😭 What has happened that changed their lives to this extent.. Poor Nia..what's stopping Swayam from being a loving father?!.. So many questions!.. And really difficult ones!..please update soon ..can't see them in such miserable state..!..How do you guys come with such different concepts?..Very gripping update!..Thanks for the pm..:)

Love,

Shreya

Originally posted by: aneesha93

This is really interesting. The concept, the story-line. Well penned.

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: existentialism

Alrighty, I don't know what to say coz the half of it was in hindi and I didn't understand a thing!!!. I will get my Indian friend to read and translate this for me & will let you guys know my opinion. I guess it was a nice update because the prologue was really intriguing and different.

Originally posted by: cuppypie121

Awsome update..

Originally posted by: --lavanya--

Omg this is awesome !! 👏

God its a new concept ...and so many questions to be answered !!

Y is swayam behaving this way ? N y is Sharon in prison ? What happened which made them face this situation ? 😔

I'm sad for Niya ..poor girl 😭

COOKIE N MISHTI DI !! Pls jaldi sab theek kardo OK 😭 🤗

Update soon 😊

Waiting 😛

Originally posted by: tinku82

Your writings are awesome

keeps you glued to the concept, I am addicted to it now...😉

how do you manage with too many stories with different concepts.👏

I write as well but it takes time for me to plot thngs...😭

neways...back to ur FF

Fantastic concept cant wait to read further👍🏼

update soon...

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003

Poor niya

felt bad for her

swayam is distancing himself frm his daughter cos he feels that shes d reason for sharon goin to prison😕

and wat s d reason for which sharon is in prison😕

continue soonish😳

Originally posted by: sneharay

Awesome update.. 👏

Originally posted by: SHA_85

swayam got a call and now he is thinking did she was at fault or not

even she has not mentioned anything about the truth

sharon's pov was fabulous 😊

her longing for both them and why did swayam didn't go to meet her its 9yrs and not for once also he gone there 😒

why so much he had made distance with his sharon 😭

sharon's thinks he ll not leave niya but she don't know because of there misunderstandings or whatever there past is little girl is suffering 😔

why sharon is in prison❓

poor niya,she don't have her father nor mother by her side but still being happy and don't show anyone how alone she is at least rey is there for her and her flashback was happy family one

she miss them 😭

what was that behaviour of swayam with niya😲😡 (did he is gone out of his mind MU khud ko hui hogi and kisi aur ko hi saja uski) so much anger towards her for no reason😕

why swayam had made this distance with niya also she is just small kid and so much ignorance towards her ❓poor niya🥺

ok i understand sharon is away from him from last 9yrs but the girl is not at fault 😔

keechu di and nidhi this was really first update like seriously😲

sooo many thing in 1st part i was not expecting 👏

the trio missing eachother specially sharon and niya(don't think so he do miss niya at all from his behaviour, i know am making this judgement so early but his behaviour is not making any sense to me) from 1st passage am 1000% sure swayam had some MU about sharon and all are suffering because of that MU

this part was tooo amazing with lots of emotions LOVED THIS CHAPTER ❤️

plz update this ff fast fast because can't wait to know the reason of her going to prison his anger towards niya and why the little girl has to see so much 😕❓