Originally posted by: aneesha93
Oh, this is so sad. Swayam's behavior to his daughter is not justifiable. Poor girl. Loved Taarey and Niya's bond. Nice update.
Thanks for the pm.A very happy New year to you guys too😃
Originally posted by: existentialism
Okay, am slightly or may be highly confused.
"Maa" a girl around age of 3 years called out for her mom."Haan aa rahi hun" her mother replied from the kitchen.
"Mujhe park jana hain" she cried out.
"Jab pap aayenge na tab jana" her mother said while coming out of the kitchen.
"Nahi...!!!mujhe aap dono ke saath jana hain!!"she said.
"Aapka hokum sar aankhon par" a manly voice disturbed the mother-daughter duo.
"Papa" the little clapped her hands when she saw her dad and spread her arms indicating that she wants a hug from her daddy.
"So chale?" he said and picked up her in his arms.
"Yeshhh" the little one said in an excited voice.
"Meine change kar ke aati hun" her mother said.
"Koi zarurath nahi...late hojayega hume esi hi chal...achi lag rahi hain" he said making her angry.
"Huh!!" she said and walked towards the car while both father and daughter giggled.
"Aaj bohout mazza aya na mumma papa" the little one who was sitting on the lap of her mother asked.
"Bohout zyada" her mother said kissing her cheek.
Now that I have got the english translation of this, was this a flashback Niya had about her childhood and her time with her parents? If yes, then the current scenario is a lot more than confusing to me.
Wanna know what happened between SwaRon. Enjoyed the update. Am not gonna ''thank you'' Keechu 😛 (but you gotta know that am grateful) for makin' the most of it in English.
Love,
Linda🤗
Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya
That was a nice update and surely a long one. Although I am really confused here, and can't guess what must have happened, but it seems like Swayam is hurt beyond limits and the reason is Sharon :( ,but then the previous update where Niya's flashback is written tells a different story altogether!..Too much confusion to be cleared,hoping u would update this regularly:)
Loved the way how Rey gives Swayam a reality check.I feel so bad for Niya,hoping that she would get all the love she deserves from her father soon.With this part I'm getting a feeling that probably Rey is going to send Niya to Swayam's place soon.I'm missing Sharon now,hoping she'll be seen soon:)
I am loving rey in this a lot 😊his words are damn good and prefectly suited to "MR-I-DON'T-BUT-I-DO-CARE-FOR-MY-DAUGHTER"TaaRey are best as ma and pa🤗Rey's character is the most IMP and the way you are showing him is fabulous 👍🏼Niya's character my god no words to them 😲her reacted and saying those words to rey 😔and obviously swayam ki beti hai haar nahi manegi she keep trying till he'll not accept her 😆her convo with there pic😭swayam ,am still confused with him at a point he do care & love his daughter but just because of he and his wife's past he is pushing her and because shar has given birth to her🥺 ...so selfish😡I really loved rey convo or to say the reality check he was giving to swayam 😃hoping he'll think on it even rey to have his wife ,he loves niya and care for swaron but he must be having dream too of having own kidsMISSED SHARON POV in this partand yes yours note even i didn't think too much on the flashback after reading the note i thought arre niya toh 9yrs ki hai and from last 9yrs shar is in prison family time kaha se hogait was amazing beautiful fabulous update
Originally posted by: --Ecstasy--
HeyNice storyAwesome startThe flashback was very well written.Update soon.
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