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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
superb update...rey is so determined to. make taani realise that she still loves him.eagerly waiting for the next chapter ...plz update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
Awesome update
It's emotional
Waiting for reys plan
Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43
First all of wow having a PM from you that too with update is like having water drop in desert ... 😊
Just amazing and mind blowing and lovely update di...
Rey is determined tomake Taani realize that she still loves him thats the greatest part of update...

Gang member's idea are OMG... 🀣

Waiting for Rey's plan ...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Awesome update

Loved it
Poor Taarey😭😭, can't wait to see how they get back together
Can't wait for the other chapters
Please update soon and pm me
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Posted: 8 years ago
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TAAREY SS ~ Kaho Na...Pyaar Hai ~
Chapter 3 ~ Feel the love


Rey reached the rehearsal hall early at 6 a.m. to prepare somethings according to his plan. He was excited , nervous and scared all at the same time thinking how will taani react? Whether she will like all that or not? On the other hand Taani was also nervous and somewhere excited too but she kept all her feelings aside as she wanted to hate him devotionally and not at all give in front of him which was getting more and more difficult for her.But she got late thinking all that. Keeping all her feelings aside, She left the house at 6-45 after informing swayam that she was leaving early for clg because of her gs work. She took an auto to clg but on her way rain started and by chance she forgot her umbrella too at home. She used to love rains before but after her break up, bearing so much pains and heart break she started hating everything related to love. Now love and fairytales are a bullshit for her. but still sometimes she couldnt stop herself from feeling these beautiful feelings of love and get lost in them. Some rain droplets touched her cheek and dont know why but still she felt peace at heart. She forward her hand and let the rain droplets fall on her hand giving her much needed calmess and relief at heart. There was no smile on her lips like it used to but just some peace at heart while watching the lovely shower of rain. But her trance broke when the auto came to a halt after reaching her college. Taani paid money to the autodriver and went inside but in between she got drenched in rain even though she tried to cover herself with her bag and hand but it was pouring heavily so she got drenched. There was no one at college since all the students were supposed to come at 9. Watchman too went away for sometime because of rain.

Taani decided to go and meet rey at rehearsal hall first since she already got late by 15 mins. She wanted to finish off that matter asap. Then she will go and change her clothes she thought. (she used to keep spare dress in her locker.)
[Please imagine her wearing same dress as in Rasia/ tujhko jo paaya sequence which is wet by now and sticking to her body but rey not shirtless.πŸ˜† He is wearing white shirt and pants πŸ˜› ]

Taani reached the rehearsal hall with mixed feelings going on in her heart. She was standing at the entrance of rehearsal hall and was confused and preparing herself to go in. She told herself that she hates rey so many times and she would never let him affect her at all. She would never get weak again in front of him and all.
She peeped in to see whether he was inside or not and seeing there was no one inside, she stepped in,kept her bag at the cube and she went in thinking where he was after calling her there in that early morning.As she went in the middle of the rehearsal hall , she felt soft rose petals falling on her. She looked up and saw rose petals being showered on her . She wanted to hate all this but just couldnt bring herself to hate it. Instead giving up in front of her heart, She stretched out her arms in bliss. As she did that, Tujhko jo paaya song sequence started in the music system as planned by Rey in slow soothing voice. Weather was so beautiful and Soft cool breeze was flowing adding more beauty...

[Sorry i cant add lyrics of the song. But you can play the songs in other tab as background music if you wish :) ]

She was loving this flower shower forgetting everything. Her lips automatically curved into a beautiful smile. She twirled around feeling happy. She closed her eyes feeling this blissful moment. She felt love and happiness touching her with every rose petal. Every rose petal was falling after softly touching and kissing the angel. taani also felt as if blessings of love are touching her in the form of those rose petals.
As Rey came there to see her , he stood rooted at the entrance seeing the eternal breathtaking natural beauty standing in front of him who herself didnt know how pure and beautiful she is. Desires arose in his heart to love her eternally as he saw her. Her hair were wet and still water droplets were falling from them as she twirled around. Her dress sticking to her body giving him a hard time controlling himself and the exploding desires in his heart. For a moment he tore his gaze away from her thinking she might not like it but then again his eyes turned and get fixed on her following the wishes of his heart and breaking his self control.
And now unknown to her, Rey was standing at the entrance of the rehearsal hall watching her every expression. He felt so happy at heart seeing her smiling and twirling in happiness after such a long time. He felt even more happy and proud of himself being the reason of her happiness.

Unconsciously he started moving towards her. This always happens, he always gets so lost in her that he forget everything and his heart just wish to love her endlessly .
[ Now the song changed automatically. They were shuffled. Rey forgot to change the settings. And now dil ibaadat kar raha hai song was playing in slow soothing voice depicting their feelings quite well. But they were too lost in themselves to notice the song change. Taani was still lost in the flower shower and rey in her ;) ]
~ Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanein meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun
Zindagi ki shaakh se lun
Kuch haseen pal main chun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun

Oh seyo leyo sama leyo
Seyo leyo aa...
Oh seyo leyo sama leyo
Seyo leyo aa... ~

He came and stood behind her. He kept his hand on her waist unintentionally touching her bare cold waist in between and pulled her completely to him making her aware of his presence
"Reyy," she whispered feeling him.
~ Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun
Zindagi ki shaakh se lun
Kuch haseen pal main chun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun ~
His touch is enough for her to know that its him. Her outstretched arms automatically came down. She was still in daze with her eyes closed. She gasped as he moved and kept his palm on her cold bare belly and pulled her more to him leaving no space between them. He rubbed his other hand on her wet and somewhat cold arm making her shiver. His touch affected her badly. She can never control herself when he is around. His close proximity always drives her crazy. She forgets everything in his embrace.
Now also she forgot all the promises she made to herself to stay away from him and to hate him.

Feeling him so close, she was just floating in his love, in their eternal love.
Jo bhi jitne pal jeeyun
Unhe tere sang jeeyun
Jo bhi kal ho ab mera
Usse tere sang jeeyun
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon
Unhe tere sang bahroon
Chaahe jo ho raasta
Usse tere sang chaloon

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun ~
He removed some rose petals that sticked in her hair while gazing intensely at her in the same position while her eyes were closed feeling his love. Then he removed her wet hair from one side and nuzzled his face in the crook of her neck inhaling her enchanting fragrance. Her skin was wet and cold some minutes before but his touch was as if it set her whole body on fire. Sparks exploded , desires arose in their hearts when they touched each other.
Mujhko de tu mit jaane
Ab khud se de mil jaane
Kyun hai yeh itna faasla
Lamhe yeh phir na aane
Inko tu na de jaane
Tu mujhpe khud ko de luta

He brushed his lips on her bare cold shoulder while roaming his hand on her little bare cold belly and other hand on her cold arm wiping off all the water droplets giving them no permission to stay close to her as only he got the right to stay close to her and love her. Her heartbeats raced and breathing became fast . He had no control over his heart which craved for her more and more always. He wanted to feel her more and more with every touch and just love her eternally.
~ Tujhe tujhse tod loon
Kahin khud se jod loon
Mere jismojaan pe aa
Teri khushboo odh loon
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon
Unhe tere sang bharoon
Chaahe jo ho raasta
Use tere sang chaloon

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun~

He started showering soft kisses on her shoulder while sucking the little water droplets softly that were still on her shoulder. His fingers reached the strap of her top and were aching to remove it which were being the hindrance in loving her. He nuzzled his face more in the crook of her neck and showered soft kisses there making her shiver and lost in him and his love more and more. They were lost in each other completely. They have forgotten everything in their love as always. Taani was breathing heavily while her heart was racing but still she was feeling an unknown pleasure with his love in her heart which longed for his love always.

~ Baahon mein de bas jaane
Seene mein de chup jaane
Tujh bhin main jaaoon toh kahaan
Tujhse hai mujhko paane
Yaadon ke woh nazraane
Ik jinpe hak ho bas mera ~

She tried to go feeling shy but rey held her wrist and pulled her back to him. Again her back crashed with his chest. He again kept his hand on her little bare belly and started playing with her soft belly driving her more crazy. Her eyes were still closed lost in the moment completely while her breathing and heart never got steady. Longing to feel him and his love arose in her heart more while her breath just wanted to get mix with his.
He looked at her intensely and then went close to her ear and huskily whispered in her ear taking heavy breathes which were fanning over her ear while touching her ear and nuzzling his face in her wet hair.
"kaise kahun kitni khaas ho tum,
In gulab ki pankhudiyon jaisa
mehka ehsaas ho tum,
Chuke mere dil ko tum
Mujh mein samaa gaye,
Aaye kareeb jo mere tum,
Mujhko mujhi se chura gaye..."
He kissed her earlobe after saying that.
~Teri yaadein mein rahoon
Tere khwaabon mein jagoon
Mujhe dhoonde jab koi
Teri aankhon mein miloon
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon
Unhe tere sang bharoon
Chaahe jo ho raasta
Usse tere sang chaloon

Dil ibadat kar raha hai
Dhadkanen meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil
Lagi hai yahi dhun.~
Then he turned her in his arms such that they were facing each other. They were so close to each other and could not only feel each other but also could hear each other's fast heartbeats.Unable to stop himself, Rey kissed her forehead gently giving her a long soothing kiss and then he kissed her closed eyes making her grip his shoulder for support not having enough strength to stand. As always she got weak and melted in his arms in front of his undying love for her. He kissed her nosetip and then he softly kissed her cute cheeks one by one while his hands were roaming on her little bare waist making her shiver in pleasure. He glanced at her to see if there is any kind of displeasure but founding none and only pleasure written all over her face , he moved forward to keep his lips on her rosy lips.
But there was a thunderstorm outside which brought her back to her senses. Out of fear her grip got tighter on his shoulder but he was too lost in her to think anything. She opened her eyes and before he could kiss her, she pushed him making him stumble 2 - 3 steps.
She turned around to control herself . Tears started forming in her eyes as she remembered what happened now along with his fake break up and his cruel words. Her heart break, her pain and those lonely dark nights when she had cried bitterly just because of him again flashed in her mind making her heart ache and cry in pain.
He was also shocked with her reaction and also because this was not supposed to happen at all. It just happened because he couldn't control himself but somewhere he was feeling guilty because he never wanted to impose himself on her.
Taani turned back and slapped him hard while crying shocking him even more. Tears streamed down her face travelling through her beautiful eyes.

~~~ to be continued in next chapter~~
Precap
Ch-4 But i hate to love

I cant live without you...

You dont need to care about me rey ... you dont need ...

Surprise/ shock .. past is back...
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I had ti split it in 2 chapters since it was getting way too long. But i hope u like it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
awesome update yr
taarey romance was sprb
TAANI SLAPPED REY
shocking
update soon dearr
Edited by taareycrazyfan - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
wow thadekedr thapad rey ke cheeks pe awesome
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Awesome
Taareylious update
Lovd it
Egarly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Lovely
Full of taareylicious
But again rey unintentionally hurt taani
Interesting precap
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