Heyy,Originally posted by: jasminerahul
samud were lost in d jungle.when her skin was bruised saras took care of her.in the moment of closeness they shared intimate moments.but surely d strange sounds which animals made scared them n if it was a bad omen not sure.later they left the place.but who was watching them?spirit or owl?anyways i'm glad that nothing happened 2 them.but if it was a spirit why was it following samud?what was its intention?did the animal howl at them?if so why?
u shud've turned this into a TS.
thanks 4 writing on samud.ur stories r the only relief on sc forum now.
i've updated my ff.plz have a look when u get time
Originally posted by: Jess2014
Heyy,
Yes, Saras took care of Kumudin the jungle when she was hurt andthey shared some close momentsAnd the question what was watching them andif there was really a spirit watching them, will be left unanswered,I won't be writing a TS as I have got too many pending FFsright now.You don't need to thank me dear πI just read the updated part of your FFand it was really amazing, waiting for you to updatethe next partTake care...π
Thanks dear and wish you too a Happy Halloween(Belated) πOriginally posted by: samudbest
Happy belated Halloween Jess.π And thanks for writing the best suited OS on samud that was filled with bit of fear and beautiful romance of samud. π
Saras's way of calming kumud during the fearful night was really nice. Kumud got injury on the back and saras while bandaging her couldn't control his desires and they physically came close to each other. It also made kumud to forget all the horrorful thoughts going through her mind. Their love scene was so nicely written. The atmosphere during the midnight was really scary as the strange sounds were continuously coming from outside the cottage. Finally saras was able to make contact with his friends and they were rescued and left from that scary place. But the question still remained unanswerable was the place really haunted? Who was the one whose eyes were watching them leaving the jungle?
Overall an amazing OS and I really liked it. Waiting for your updates of previously written FFs.π
Originally posted by: coolhi1988
superb os...
samud lost in jungle... roaming around to find their way...
saras bandaging kumud's wound & they get intimate...
& then they here a cry?π²
& now both r frightened...
but sumhow they manage to contact their frnds & go back..
& suspense continues whether d cry was of sum spirit?
jess u r seriosly d best suspense writer i hv known...
loved d os...
do continue if possible..
thnks 4 d pm..
hey jess u r welcum...π€ np even m late in commenting many times...Originally posted by: Jess2014
Thanks a lot HiyaSamud succeed in getting out of the jungle at last@ bold: Aww..that's so sweet of you and it really means a lot to me π€Unfortunately, I will not be continuing itbut if after I feel like adding some more parts to it, then I will surely do soTake care...πP.s: Sorry for late reply.
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