Good to see you back...i mean in WRITING form Back...hahaha
Coming to this plot...Zoyaaa was she drugged or what...so much...no sorry tooo much of talking...
Looking forward to this one..
Continue soonish.
resunresRada what do I say this an outstandingly excellent start SweetuπMind-blowing Superb Excellent & what notπ³Main kya bolun kuch bhi kahun toh kam lagegafrom start till d end I was completely into d storyπ
thank you so much, I must confess that I was not convinced to publish it, but at the end, I found it cute and your words confort me in my choice. you always know how to put smile on my face ππ€So Zoe has some business which needs help & she's here 2 meet AAK 4 thatZoya ki intro as a non stop chatterbox man doesn't she even breath I felt she talks even more than Zoya in QH ππ
yes, she is, I am just like her when I am under pressure, i didn't notice that she was talking that much but you are not the first who mention this, I guess her dialogue was too long π. Promise next time she will be "quiet" πHer prayer 2 Allah Miyan fulfilled when our hero made entry on horse lolπ Truly 1 prince wali hi entry thiπA true prince is always on his horse π, to tell you the true, the title of the story was supposed to be : Miss beauty and mister beast, but I found it common that's why I change it at the endI suppose he is some prince mayb cuz Adhi raat horse ride kon karta haiππ & no civilisation π² why he lives in such place obviously prince wala hi koi angle hogaπ& No points in guessing it is indeed Asad Ahmed Khan himself I m 200% sure I can bet it! have 2 reasons 1 d world famous Who actuallyπ & d other when he told his name & also d attraction both felt clearly gave that awayπI have nothing to say about that πLoved their banter it is always a treat 2 read these parts πOMG Zoya's theories he can b serial rapist & psycho killer & than d nonstop nok jhok sachi she can can easily give anybody a headacheππ
Good point, as always, Indeed, i should have mention this also, i totally forget about that, he could have reply this also π& than d scene when she had 2 climb d horse he came 2 help π³ & than their nok jhok on d speed of d horse & when she & Asad's baby teamed 2gther & Asad became jealous ππSo Asad haven't told his real name knowing she came 2 meet him& he felt that pinch when Zoya became sad aweπ³& d last ka part when Asad gave her his jacket when he saw d rain coming awe was just too sweet& god that last ka punch when he made d horse run fast π
between them, it's going to be like this, a game of I hate you and I like you, it will be mix of many emotion,PS- btw in last line Asad said He so was d horse male or female cuz earlier he said its a She... Yah it was just his prankπ
I forget to write it correctly π but I guess I can use it in the up coming chapter as prank, thanks Jas for this another good point , so proud of you my girl
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Originally posted by: suearmaniac
Yayy! Rada bck with new plot
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Originally posted by: Tunailuvsahil
Plz updt your other story took.but thanks for updt new storyyy really awesome starting.if I not wrong its was asad only not ayan hope im nt wrong.
But a big bisnessman why level in forest?Interesting plz cont soon LTS see how zoya concise asad
Originally posted by: aleenaansari
Awsm strt...u r an amazng writer
I'm in luv wid dis story already...
D concept is amazing...
Waiting 4 d nxt chptr...
Plzzz update soon
Originally posted by: fatima30
Love it rada!
Amazing and interesting concept
I want Mr Beast to be Asad...
Can't wait to read on
Update soon
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