Asya SS: Lost somewhere, chap 11, 2-01-2017 - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Interesting start Rada...
Good to see you back...i mean in WRITING form Back...hahaha
Coming to this plot...Zoyaaa was she drugged or what...so much...no sorry tooo much of talking...
Looking forward to this one..
Continue soonish.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Wooow
Dashing
Wonderful
Excellent
Outstanding
Fabulous effort made
What to say
It rocked
Beautiful
Thanks for pm
Do cnt soon
All the best
Bye bye
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
That is totally Asad
YAS
I love this concept
Its genius
When isn't it
πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
Nice update
Like their talks
I feel that it's asad but turn out to be Ayaan. Waiting for next update soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: jas91

res
unres
Rada what do I say this an outstandingly excellent start SweetuπŸ˜ƒ
Mind-blowing Superb Excellent & what not😳
Main kya bolun kuch bhi kahun toh kam lagega
from start till d end I was completely into d storyπŸ˜›

thank you so much, I must confess that I was not convinced to publish it, but at the end, I found it cute and your words confort me in my choice. you always know how to put smile on my face πŸ˜ƒπŸ€—

So Zoe has some business which needs help & she's here 2 meet AAK 4 that
Zoya ki intro as a non stop chatterbox man doesn't she even breath I felt she talks even more than Zoya in QH πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
yes, she is, I am just like her when I am under pressure, i didn't notice that she was talking that much but you are not the first who mention this, I guess her dialogue was too long πŸ˜†. Promise next time she will be "quiet" πŸ˜†
Her prayer 2 Allah Miyan fulfilled when our hero made entry on horse lolπŸ˜† Truly 1 prince wali hi entry thiπŸ˜‰
A true prince is always on his horse πŸ˜‰, to tell you the true, the title of the story was supposed to be : Miss beauty and mister beast, but I found it common that's why I change it at the end
I suppose he is some prince mayb cuz Adhi raat horse ride kon karta haiπŸ˜†πŸ˜† & no civilisation 😲 why he lives in such place obviously prince wala hi koi angle hogaπŸ˜‰
& No points in guessing it is indeed Asad Ahmed Khan himself I m 200% sure I can bet it
! have 2 reasons 1 d world famous Who actuallyπŸ˜† & d other when he told his name & also d attraction both felt clearly gave that awayπŸ˜‰
I have nothing to say about that πŸ˜‰
Loved their banter it is always a treat 2 read these parts πŸ˜›
OMG Zoya's theories he can b serial rapist & psycho killer & than d nonstop nok jhok sachi she can can easily give anybody a headacheπŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Good point, as always, Indeed, i should have mention this also, i totally forget about that, he could have reply this also πŸ˜†
& than d scene when she had 2 climb d horse he came 2 help 😳 & than their nok jhok on d speed of d horse & when she & Asad's baby teamed 2gther & Asad became jealous πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
So Asad haven't told his real name knowing she came 2 meet him
& he felt that pinch when Zoya became sad awe😳
& d last ka part when Asad gave her his jacket when he saw d rain coming awe was just too sweet
& god that last ka punch when he made d horse run fast πŸ˜†

between them, it's going to be like this, a game of I hate you and I like you, it will be mix of many emotion,
PS- btw in last line Asad said He so was d horse male or female cuz earlier he said its a She... Yah it was just his prankπŸ˜†

I forget to write it correctly πŸ˜• but I guess I can use it in the up coming chapter as prank, thanks Jas for this another good point , so proud of you my girl

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Posted: 8 years ago
#26


thanks πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 8 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: suearmaniac

Yayy! Rada bck with new plot
RES



yes again, waht to do, I am addict to Asya and writting πŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Tunailuvsahil

Plz updt your other story took.but thanks for updt new storyyy really awesome starting.if I not wrong its was asad only not ayan hope im nt wrong.

But a big bisnessman why level in forest?Interesting plz cont soon LTS see how zoya concise asad



hi dear,

I am on my way to write an epilogue for TRB and CR,
in the up-coming chapter you will know if your theory is good or not and later you will know why he choose to stay away from city
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Posted: 8 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: aleenaansari

Awsm strt...u r an amazng writer
I'm in luv wid dis story already...
D concept is amazing...
Waiting 4 d nxt chptr...
Plzzz update soon



Thanks you so much dear
your words is really lovely and I am happy that you like the concept also
I will try to update soon in sha Allah
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Posted: 8 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: fatima30

Love it rada!
Amazing and interesting concept
I want Mr Beast to be Asad...
Can't wait to read on
Update soon



thanks a lot fatima
happy that you like the concept also πŸ˜ƒ
you will see soon if Mr Beat is Asad or not πŸ˜‰
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