Asya SS: Lost somewhere, chap 11, 2-01-2017 - Page 18

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update dear
Like it from start to end
Ayaan has to eat the cake & praise her in both cases otherwise he has to face his brother. Asya talks was full of fun. They were comfortable with each other & attracted as well. Zoya hate lies & asad was worried how she will react. Waiting for next update soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
That was suchhh a cute update
This stry makes me feel the update should never end
Jus love the bickering between asad n zoya
Ayaan part was hilarious he was drunk
Nd being controlled by asad
Asya goin fr a walk
Their fun tym they laughed
Uh oh zoya hates lies
Continue soonish
Thanks fr pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing and funny update!! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey rada...
Finished reading all the parts and it is an amazing story..
After long I have. Read this type of light story full of Asya nok jhok but etched with a wonderful story around it...

Loved the last part...
Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow rada awesome and funny update😆
Ayaan and asad part is so much fun🤣
So the sexy cake tasted good also😆
Love asya moments totally girl
Their garden scene is so lovely
Continue soon🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
Huggies Rada🤗
aajkal busy ho? packing shuru kar di kya? upar se Christmas too coming Celebrations must have started there na??
I miss u 😛
coming 2 updt
It was Outstandingly fantastic👏👏
OMG what a laughing ride it was really😆
Oh man Asya r d cutest & devils at same time🤣
d start wid d cake inspection 🤣 4 d 1st time ever Zoya cooked something edible & decent looking at d same time😆 why not Asad ne help jo ki thi😉 ingredients collect or steps read karke🤣
poor Zoya was getting impatient 4 a word or praise from Asad & Ayaan both 😆
Becara Asad wanted 2 have a bite & Zoe refused cuz she baked it 4 Asad 🤣
& than came Ayaan all drunk & my god from his entry & his banter wid Asad till d time he went 2 his room was d most hilarious part I have read in a long time. 🤣 Rada my baby 2day I want 2 give u tyt hugs🤗 not d claps that happy I m.😃😆 U just outdone that part I was in fits really🤣
& than when Zoya entered 2 showcase her master piece😆 Ayaan almost spilled d truth but thankfully Asad refrained him
but when he made Ayaan eat d whole piece of cake OMG that poor soul must b rolling in his bed due 2 over eating🤣
I so wish he takes his revenge next morning from Asad😈😉
than Asad asked 4 his turn 4 d cake hehe😆
that point where he said lets do it 2gather I was imported back in our Kabhi days how they used 2 feed cakes 2 each other 2gather sigh
Zoya couldn't stop talking about Humi her soul sis but I m happy she has 1 real relation 2 cherish who loved her unconditionally & even Asad was moved hearing her history😃
their cute yet naughty banter was super fun 2 read😆
d part in d garden OMG don't get me started "Go see there is something behind d bush" & d banter 2 push each other wid there own hilarious reasons 🤣 Just killed me wid rib-crackling laughter🤣
& than Asad intentionally scaring her lol she almost started crying 😆
but he got a good beating wid d stick 🤣 & than fell in wet mud🤣 styling himself wid L'Oreal ki perfect radiance cream or was it body lotion🤣
but Zoya was feeling so lonely 2 b left alone so she jumped in too 🤣 & boo same pinch😆
& than in this suhana mausam, thandi hawa, Do jawan log wid racing hearts coated in d mud of luv🤣 started playing in mud like kids 🤣lol; If Ayaan would have saw them he would 4ever tease them 😆
D updt finally ended wid both of them realising in there hearts that d other person is very nice. They have this strong attraction & a unrecognised wish 2 b 2gather😳
Asad & Zoya's monologues in d end were interesting I liked 2 know what's going in their brains😆
but I m scared about Zoya's reactions as she said she hates lies I think that time more than Humi Ayaan must play a role 2 convince & make her see it.😊
Khair this was super long updt but was absolutely worth it😆...Damn interesting Rada & I had a hilarious time reading something Fantastic after long time...
Love u lots🤗
PS- I wanted 2 quotes few hilarious dialogues I loved but than saw I already wrote a super long comnt so stopped myself🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
Let me straighten myself lol

I'm grinning like idiot

It's always treat to read update of this ss yar

Its one of the best

Update was really awesome like always

Hihi their fight in mud was like tom and Jerry

Lol princess and frog ?

I am waiting eagerly for next update
Edited by asyakabhidreamy - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Love the update
This Asad so reminds me of the gift
They r too much
The tease the attraction
But at the end it got a little serious but she tries to ignore
Love him calling her princess
Ayaan was too funny especially drunk
Continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
hey rada
beutifull part loced it...

too much of funnn yed alot reading it😳

vrey well written part...

continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey rada.. can you pretty please update this.. 😳
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