Asya SS: Lost somewhere, chap 11, 2-01-2017 - Page 17

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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update dear
Loved it to the core
Zoya asad and ayaan scene was cute and really funny at the same time
Then the walk and their mud fight just cracked me up and i just could not stop my laugh
Amazing dear
And the end was romantic
Looking forward to know what happens next
Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey RADA..😊
A Very good πŸ‘ , Entertaining πŸ‘πŸΌ and Wonderfully written part⭐️⭐️⭐️
Poor Ayaan the real one , first he was fully drunk and because of his BHABHI TO BE made cake for him he has to eat that too and accept death on bedπŸ˜†...that whole part between ASYA and Ayaan was really funny...🀣
I was thinking before Zoya leaves this place in whatever circumstances , can Humeira be here in Asad's place so we can have some really cute scenes of ASYA & AYRA..😳
I seriously feel like having a cake for myself to now...😊
Well it is clearly evident that ASYA have a strong growing attraction towards eachother and it is good that they are also were comfortable in being vocal about it too...like making babies , being the prince and princess hahahaπŸ˜†
But one thing is clear , when Zoya will know about this farce AAK she will be very angry and will befurious at Asad and may even reject him...and once again Asad's trust on relationship will be broken...
The MUD OF WAR was funny to read too...
All and All I enjoyed reading it...
Continue soonish..
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Posted: 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
Aww!its so beautiful updt.
Asyan r realy funny.
Asya bcm kid.asya's feelings growing stronger for each othr.
Zoya hate lies,dnt knw hw she will react.waiting 4 ths dhamaka.
Thnks 4 pm.cnt soon.
Wish u MERRY CHRISTMAS in adv.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nyc chptr...
Luvd der usual bickerng..
Mud playing was d bst part...
Wen will zoya come out f her insecurities...
Will Luv 2 c dat in d upcmng chptrs...
Hope 2 get an update soon...
Thnx 4 d pm 😊
Edited by aleenaansari - 8 years ago
aleenaansari thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: radadolcevida



Thank you so much
Zoya suffered from lack of affection and you have more details about later
Asad is really good and many will like him in this story.
their relation will take a new step and they will be closer chapter after chapter.
I hope soon πŸ˜ƒ



Hope 2 c dat soon... 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
amazingly written story
totally loved it
update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update rada. .:)
Loved it soo much..;)
I really adore the friendship between asad and zoya..they are so cute together and so comfortable with each other..
Asad's past was hilarious. . He indeed was a notorious kid.. πŸ˜†
Loved the masti asad and zoya had.. all the mud fun.. πŸ˜‰
Lets see now how and when will asad tell zoya about him not being ayaan.. nd how will zoya react to this.. 😲
Or are we getting more of this fun for now..?? πŸ˜‰
Superb.. πŸ‘ πŸ€—
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow...
amazing...wonderful...entertaining...
and... sincerely thoughtful and loving update...
its a beautifully written chapter...
love asad more..he is being so open...
and childish..
he scared the hell out of zoya...
and was enjoying it..
first, his reactions on baking cake..
then.. not able to see zoya sad, he make ayaan eat it..
too hilarious scene...
then... they shared their past...they genuinely respect each other..
but never going to admit it...
asad flirted...loving this flirtatious asad..
then...the garden scene.. omg.. it was damn cute..
just lovely...
they are falling... and falling hard...
awesome chapter rada...
also, like the way asad lost his color when she mentioned about lies...
he note her each and every gesture..
lovely..

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Posted: 8 years ago
Asad is so carefree...I often get confused reading as I mistook him to be ayaan
Nice update
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