Asya SS: Lost somewhere, chap 11, 2-01-2017 - Page 14

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

thank you so much dear
Zoya-Humeira bond is the perfect reflection of Ayaan-Asad bond, and we all have in our life a crazy friend like her or him 😆
Exactly, Zoya couldn't talk about Sufian and she felt bad about her childhood friend betray
Asad is deeper than we think and he is calmer than her, he will help her and in someway, she will help him to believe again in human. You will learn more about him later.
In the next chapter, you will see how she was goign to impress Ayaan with the help of Asad of course. 😉
they will stay together but for the moment, the question was still without an answer 😃

😃 Continue sooonnn...

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Its realy beautiful updt.
Zoya hd a very bad past.
She mk all her emotns captative,thts why she z lk ths.
Humaira,i lk her.a very gd frnd of zoya.
Asad get slap,omg!bt the scene was awsm.asad realize zoya was nt tht strng wht she shw.
His feelhngs strt 2 chnge,he wanna protect her.want 2 live a life with her.
Zoya,who hs commitment phobia,chnging her feelings.
Bt wht will zoya do whn she knw the id exchnge of asyan!hmm.
Cnt soon.thnks 4 pm.
&yes,pl pm me whnever whtever stry u updt.nwdays i visit ths 4um very less,so pm me.

thank you sonu
Yes, Zoya is looking for love but she was scared, that why she maintiened distant with emotions,
this is exactly what Asad love about her, her weakness, she never pretended with him. He came from a fake world and for a change, he liked to face some true person.
Both will heal the other in some way, especially Asad who will be the one who make her believe until she will know the truth about him.
I will pm you for sure, I can understand it's a period of exam. Don't worry dear, i will and thank you for your comment 😃

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

Thanks man 😃
for a change, this chapter was light but you ask me in your previous comment : what push Zoya to do baking when she didn't know? I hope this chapter answer how much she was desperate.
I am happy that you like it.
Humeira's character is the perfect reflection of Ayaan (the real one 😆) and her relation with Zoya is the same as Asad and Ayaan. We all have some crazy friend in our life and this is what I wanted to show.
Don't worry, Sufian is only a cameo in this story and he will be the reason to bring Asad and Zoya together, but you will see it later.
As you just say, Zoya suffered from being alone and didn't have affection from her father. Which make her distant with emotion, but slowly, she will melt for Asad until she will know about his lie.

For the SLAPGATE (I love this title), I didn't see it in this way, but it's really close. However, in my story, Zoya slapped Asad for nothing and Asad slapped Zoya for something he thought she was responsible. I guess in someway, there is a parallele between Asad (in my story) and Zoya (in the serial) reaction. when they stood numb, shock and feeling bad for the other. Everyone can hate Zoya here, but it also showed that in state of anger, we can do some stupid thing, that we regrets once we cooled down. There is no excuse for her, she just reacted fast than her mind.
I love the last part too, but I hope it didn't come too early for the story, I didn't want to rush the story. They learnt to know the other slowly and in someway, both heal the other.
I hope to update soon and the next will be lighter 😃

Hey Again Rada..
Yes Yess...somewhat i can see and realise that from her Convo with Humeria tha how much this deal with Asad matters to Zoya...
Yess A Friend like this is a must in everyones life...
See Zoya will melt for Asad until she will know about his Lie...means their is some serious part awaiting us in coming chapts...your specialist area of writing hahahaha
And SLAPGATE i don't remember perfectly but i heard it at the time of IPL...in a controversy.
Coming to this point...the only thing i wanted to prove was that a Person when in anger or pain doesn't really know what he / she is doing and they do somethings which after cooling down..they will regret it...that was my only point..here also I don't hate Zoya...& their also I never saw Asad at fault...not serious crime like though..
Khair leaving all this behind...actually this slap reminded me of it...
When can we expect a next part for this story anyway Rada..?

Originally posted by: kaju27

zoya's past is so painful...her best friend betrayed her father now she has to save business...
she slapped asad bt still he took care of her..
now they are back to bickering... nd thinking to annoy each other for rest of their life..

Yes, it is, Zoya was under a strong pressure and she had a few time now.
Asad will be her support in this story and many will be feel for him. Their relation will change now but they will keep fighting 😆
thank a lot for your comment dear

Originally posted by: Missadorable

hey rada sory fr dis delay
read al d parts in 1go nd its so intrestng
lovd al d parts hw asad enctng as ayan nd asya scenes
sufian😡
cntnue soon

don't worry miss
I can understand how life can be consumming and thank you for leaving a comment, it always put smile on my face reading all your comments 😭😃
I hope soon

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hey Again Rada..
Yes Yess...somewhat i can see and realise that from her Convo with Humeria tha how much this deal with Asad matters to Zoya...
Yess A Friend like this is a must in everyones life...
See Zoya will melt for Asad until she will know about his Lie...means their is some serious part awaiting us in coming chapts...your specialist area of writing hahahaha
😆😈 You know me so well
And SLAPGATE i don't remember perfectly but i heard it at the time of IPL...in a controversy.
Coming to this point...the only thing i wanted to prove was that a Person when in anger or pain doesn't really know what he / she is doing and they do somethings which after cooling down..they will regret it...that was my only point..here also I don't hate Zoya...& their also I never saw Asad at fault...not serious crime like though..
you are maybe the rare person who didn't blame Asad for his slap, just like me, his mother was dying and he just did something wrong in moment of pain.

Khair leaving all this behind...actually this slap reminded me of it...
When can we expect a next part for this story anyway Rada..?

I hope by the end of this week, today it's my last day at my work and I will start my next job in january. Which means I am on holiday, not really but in some way, I am in holiday, I hope to update regulary.

Beautiful update
Loved Asad so much...Mr Perfect
Can't wait for Asad to find out about that evil Sufian and become our Zoya's saviour

Loving this story...wonder when Asad will reveal his true identity to Zoya

Originally posted by: radadolcevida

I hope by the end of this week, today it's my last day at my work and I will start my next job in january. Which means I am on holiday, not really but in some way, I am in holiday, I hope to update regulary.

Hahahaha...
I don't know if I know U so well Yaa your style & Preference in writing... 😆
And about that Slap...i know it is rare...but see i would have reacted in a same way...and would have received the flak which AAK extracted at that time..but that is Human nature...
Aacha its your last day at work...I hope Your day goes well...and I seriously Wish Rada...go and enjoy this Holiday...and Update in between...as time permits..but before joining the new job...enjoy yourself..and give yourself sometime dear...
That is what I feel..

Originally posted by: MayurChan

Hahahaha...
I don't know if I know U so well Yaa your style & Preference in writing... 😆
And about that Slap...i know it is rare...but see i would have reacted in a same way...and would have received the flak which AAK extracted at that time..but that is Human nature...
Aacha its your last day at work...I hope Your day goes well...and I seriously Wish Rada...go and enjoy this Holiday...and Update in between...as time permits..but before joining the new job...enjoy yourself..and give yourself sometime dear...
That is what I feel..

I will enjoy my bed and to think that I don't need to wake up early. It will be my biggest pleasure of this holiday. I am not a morning girl 😆
I will enjoy those holidays, because the next one will only come in one year. What you feel is right, enjoying the time that we have, because once it left, you can't have it again. 😃

Originally posted by: fatima30

Beautiful update
Loved Asad so much...Mr Perfect
Can't wait for Asad to find out about that evil Sufian and become our Zoya's saviour

Loving this story...wonder when Asad will reveal his true identity to Zoya

thank you so much Fatima
he is mr perfect, like most of my stories. He will know and as you predicted he will be 😉
Asad idinetity will be revealed by the end of the story and he will have to deal with Zoya
thank a lot for your comment dear