roothi aliya aur zain ki tayari usko khush karne ki-zaya ff chap 12 up - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
'#mission1000'
CHAPTER-10
NEXT MORNING
zain was wearing this


aliya was wearing this

aliya and zain both reached at airport and were waiting for usmaan and surriya zain was leaning on jeep and was standing and aliya was just standing beside zain and was enjoying the air
zain turned towards aliya and kept his both hands on her waist
aliya-zain kya kare raha ho yeh airport hain hamara room nahni
zain-wo toh mujhe bhi pata hain
zain took off his jacket and kept it on jeep and was about to kiss aliya when
usmaan-zain
zain turned back and saw usmaan he went to his direction aliya too followed him
zain -dad
and hugged him
zain didn't greeted surriya as he was angry on surriya for creating rift between him and
aliya
all sat on jeep
and usmaan started hin conversation
usmaan-aliya dekho tum bhopal aaye aur zain tumhara bina reha nahni sakha aur tum aayi aur wo bhi aaya gaye pata nahni par tum na hamara beta pe kya jadu kar diya jo tumhara bina ek pal nahni reha sakte
zain-dad kya karun apke bhanji itne hot hain ke
and zain winked on aliya
aliya gave a blush smile to him and here surriya was fuming in angry
surriya-usmaan saab hotel chale
usmaan-surriya begum hotel bhi jaakar aayigein leken pehle ghar chalte hain kyun aliya
aliya-mamu agar mami aur apko hotel jaane hai toh aap jaakar aayajayein main aur zain ghar chale jaate hain
surriya-zain kyun tum jaao
zain-shayad aap bula gayein ki aliya meri biwi hain hum doono ek saath rehta hain
aliya-zain ghar
zain-chalo dad
shabhan welcomed usmaan
shabhan-bhaijaan aap aliya ke nikkah ke waqt late aaye tha aur ayat ke bhi
surriya-acha hota nahni zain aate aur nahni hum
aliya ke nikkah main
zain-acha hua main aliya ke nikkah main aaye tha *he kept his hand on aliya's waist*issliye toh aaj mujhe aliya mile
next update after 10 minutes
'#mission1000'
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
'#mission1000'
CHAPTER-11
zain and aliya got

ready for the nikkah by wearing this




soon nikkah started zain kept his hand on aliya's waist both were standing together and were enjoying together
surriya was fuming in angry she went to nafisa
surriya-nafisa maine tum se kya kahan tha
nafisa-arre bhul gaye
surriya-hain bikul bhula gaye tum apne position yaad karne hogaya toh mujhe kahan
nafisa-surriya begum ek baar nikkah hona do phir dekha thi hoon main tumhe
next update after five minutes
#'mission1000'
Edited by steelfan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
'#mission1000'#
CHAPTER-12
after nikkah it was time for ayat and rizwan to leave for mumbai ,ayat took the blessings from all
aliya and zain went to their room and got change in this




nafisa-zain aliya mujhe tumse kuch bata karna hai
aliya-hain bhabhi bola na
nafisa-mom tumhe aur zain ko alag karna ki koshish kare rahi hain aur aliya tum iss ghar ke beti nahni ho
aliya bursted in tears and nafisa left the room
and zain hugged her
zain-aliya shhh pls don't cry
aliya-zain mera koi nahni hai main kiske hoon
zain-meri ho sirf meri aliya hum ghar chodkar jaate hain alag reha ke apne zindagi ke guzar gein
next update tom afternoon
Edited by steelfan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Nailed it! Beautifully penned down!

When I said make new posts for each update, I mean make NEW threads for each update you make. When you update the next chapter please make a new thread and add a link to this thread to inform the people where they can find the next chapter.

Hope you're getting it.


Overall, I loved your FF. Do continue soon. And yes, please use a smaller font. Would become much more easy. Thank you.

And yeah, thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
CHAPTER-12
zain and aliya both came down hand to hand
zain-hum doono yeh ghar aur aap sab ko chodkar jaa rahi hain kyun ki mom khabhi aliya ko apne bahu except nahni kar payegein aur jaahan meri aliya ki respect nahni hai wahan main nahni reha sakte hoon
aliya-ammi abbu main apki beti thi hi nahni lekin apne mujhe bohat pyaar diya lekin jab aaj maine apke drawer main reports dekhiye toh mujhe reazile ho gaya ki aap na sirf mujhe apke property smajha apne beti nahni phir main apke saath kyun koi bhi rishte rakho
surriya-toh phir zain ke saath kyun tum rishte rakh rahi ho
aliya-mami zain mera shauhar hain unko saath rehna hi mera liye sab kuch hain hum jaa rahi hain , agar kis ka maine dil todha hain toh pls forgive me allah hafiz
zain and aliya left bhopal and they went to mumbai
NEXT UPDATE-WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT ZAIN AND ALIYA ALL ALONE HOT ROMANCE ON THE WAY SO STAY TUNED TO IT AND DO SEE MY NEW POST WHERE I POSTED HARSHAD'S NEW LOOK PIC
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
All parts are fantastic...
Awesome !
Very well written :)

Thnxxx for pm !!
Pls keep the font lil small...its really very big :p
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