Hasi Ban Gaye - Diyar-E-Dil Fanfic

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello everyone! Yes, I know I probably shouldn't start another fanfic while writing Tere Bina Nahi Jeena but I was listening to the song 'Hasi Ban Gaye' on Youtube and I got another WaFa idea and this one is set just after Wali and Farah's nikah, after Behroz returned with Ruhi and Farah from haveli. Sorry guys, Moeez is a total bas***d in this.

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1. Haveli's Daughter

It had been a few days after they had returned to the haveli and Farah needed to get some things from college that she had left behind due to the sudden trip. Moeez decided to take her to college and the two were about to head out when Behroz came.

"Farah beta, ja rahi ho?" (Farah, dear are you going?) Behroz asked, touching her head gently.

"Ji Papa, bas thori dehr mein aati hoon," (Yes Papa, I will come back in a little while) Farah said, leaning close to her father.

"Chalo theek hai, jao," (Okay alright go) Behroz said and Moeez and Farah left then.

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Farah gathered some of her stuff before coming back and sitting in the car, next to Moeez. "Chalein Moeez?" (Shall we Moeez?)

Moeez wasn't looking at her, then suddenly began to laugh. "Chalein ge toh zuroor Farah darling, lekhin itni bhi kya jaldi hai?" (We'll go indeed Farah darling, but what's the rush?) He stroked her cheek, causing Farah to whack his hand away.

"Yeh kya batameezi hai?" (What is this rude behaviour?) Farah said, making to get out of the car and sit in the back, but the doors were locked.

Moeez reached over, grabbing Farah's wrist roughly causing her to let out a painful cry. "Zada haushiyar mat karna, Farah." (Don't try to play smart, Farah) He seemed to dial a number.

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Behroz had come over to Ruhi's house to try and talk to her but could barely get a word out when the phone rang. It was Moeez.

"Hello, Moeez?" Behroz said.

"Moeez, kya kar rahe ho, chodo mujhe please chodo mujhe!" (Moeez, what are you doing, let me go please let me go!) Farah's voice could be heard screaming and pleading.

Ruhi's eyes widened. "Farah? Moeez, yeh kya kar rahe ho?" (Farah? Moeez, what are you doing?)

"Moeez, meri beti ke saath kya kiya hai tumne?" (Moeez, what have you done with my daughter?) Behroz said, protectiveness surging through him and his heart felt as if it would come out of his chest.

"Abhi toh kuch nahi kiya, Phuppa Jaan, aap phone speaker pe toh keejiye," (I haven't done anything yet, Uncle, put the phone on speaker) Moeez said.

Behroz looked up, eyes meeting with Ruhi's who looked just as terrified as her husband. All tension between them forgotten, their love for Farah was deep enough for them to stick together now. He put the phone on speaker.

"M-Moeez, Moeez tumhe kya hogaya hai?" (M-Moeez, Moeez what happened to you?) It was Zohra, Moeez's mother who spoke up then.

"Aaap beech mein mat boliye, Mama," (You don't get involved in this, Mama) Moeez snapped. "Phuppa kya samajte hain? Apne ameer bhatije ki shaadi kardein ge Farah se aur main chup rahoon ga? Nikah toh inune kar diya, lekhin mein Farah ka woh haal karoonga keh Wali Suhaib Khan kya, duniya main koi bhi ladka isse shaadi nahi karega," (What does Uncle think? He would marry off his rich nephew to Farah and I'd remain quiet? He did tie a bond between them, but I will leave Farah in such condition that forget Wali Suhaib Khan, no man in this world will ever marry her)

"Baba! Baba, mujhe bachayein!" (Baba! Baba, please save me!) Farah was crying and Behroz's heart clenched, pain ripping at his very heartstrings, hearing his daughter. He got up.

"Theek hai Moeez," (Alright Moeez) Behroz said coldly. "Phir main bhi tumhare Ma Baap ke aansoon ki parwa kiya beghair tumhare saath bhi wohi karoonga jo ek kidnapper ke saath hona chahiye." (Then I will also without caring about your parents' tears do to you what should be done with a kidnapper)

Moeez scoffed, hanging up.

Behroz began to head out the door but Zohra and Tajamul stopped him.

"Behroz, hum Moeez ko samjhatein hain," (Behroz, we will make Moeez understand) Tajamul said but Behroz shook his head.

"Mujhe maaf kardije ga Tajamul bhai lekhin Farah ki izzat aur hifazat mere liye sabse ahm hai," (Please forgive me Tajamul brother but Farah's honour and protection is most important for me) Behroz said, before touching Ruhi's cheek. "Ruhi..."

Ruhi was crying. "Behroz, meri Farah ko wapis le ayein please." (Behroz, bring my Farah back please)

Behroz pulled her into a hug, kissing her forehead. "Main waada karta hoon." (I promise you) He then left the house.

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The whole family at the haveli was sitting, having lunch and chatting happily amongst themselves when Agha Jaan suddenly clutched at his heart.

"Farah...Behroze...Ruhi..." Agha Jaan gasped.

"Kya hua Agha Jaan?" (What happened Agha Jaan?) Arjumand asked.

"Pata nahi, mujhe lag raha hai woh logue kisi mushkil main hain," (I don't know, I have a feeling they're in some sort of trouble) Agha Jaan said. "Wali, please tum Behroz ka number milao." (Wali, please dial Behroz's number)

"Agha Jaan, khana toh khalein," (Agha Jaan, eat lunch first at least) Zarminay said.

"Mujhe chehn nahi ayega, Zarminay. Wali..." (I won't be able to relax, Zarminay. Wali...) Agha Jaan pleaded.

Wali smiled. "Ji Agha Jaan." (Of course Agha Jaan) He went and got the phone dialling Behroz's number.

The phone was answered by Behroz. "Kya chahte ho ab Moeez? Meri Farah ko kuch bhi hua..." (What do you want now Moeez? If anything happens to my Farah...)

"Bare Baba, kya hua?" (Uncle, what happened?) Wali asked, cutting Behroz off.

"Wali," Behroz's voice broke. "Wali, mujhe maaf kardo." (Wali, forgive me)

"Bare Baba, kya hua? Farah teekh toh hai?" (Uncle, what happened? Farah is okay right?) Wali was beginning to get worried even if he didn't know Farah too well.

"Wali, Moeez ne...Moeez Farah ko kahin legaya hai, main police station ja raha hoon," (Wali, Moeez has...Moeez has taken Farah somewhere, I'm going to the police station now) Behroz managed to get out.

"Oh god, Bare Baba, main aapke paas Lahore aah raha hoon, aur aap aisa keejiye ke Moeez ki tasveer mujhe text kardein," (Oh god Uncle, I'm coming to you to Lahore, and you please text me Moeez's picture) Wali said, putting a hand to his forehead hoping Farah was okay.

"Acha, Wali please tum ajao, woh na jaane meri beti ke saath kya kare," (Alright, Wali please come, I don't want to even think on what he'll do to my daughter) Behroz sounded so terrified and defeated that Wali felt his own heart clench. He could hear the others asking but gestured for them to wait.

"Main araha hoon, Bare Baba," (I'm coming, Uncle) Wali promised, hanging up.

"Kya hua Farah ko Wali? Meri bachi theek toh hai na?" (What happened to Farah, Wali? My girl is okay right?) Agha Jaan sounded extremely worried.

"Aap logue fikhar mat karein," (You all please don't worry) Wali said to them with a small. "Farah iss haveli ki izzat hai, is khandan ka hisa hai, aur meri biwi bhi hain. Main ushe sahi salamat apne aur Bare Baba ke saath le aaonga." (Farah is this haveli's honour, a part of this family and my wife. I will bring her back completely fine along with Uncle.)

"Lala, sambhal ke," (Brother be careful) Zarminay said softly.

Arjumand touched Wali's cheek. "Jao beta." (Go, my son)

Wali smiled at his mother and sister before bowing his head to Agha Jaan, who kissed his forehead, giving his blessing before he went out the door. He would protect his Uncle's daughter and stand by Farah no matter what happened to her. Moeez would not get away with this.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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You started another one
Well written
In this they dont know each other much so it change the situation..
Moiz was a bas***d in the other fic too lol..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dude another superb writeup! You are a very good writer, really! This moeez lol idiot bag. Nice track chosen, would definitely look forward to this, update soon! And your another FF too.
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Moeez is always a douchebag, I agree 😆 Anyhoo, yeah Wali and Farah don't know anything about each other yet, I thought it would be interesting to have Farah know Wali after Moeez tries to hurt her and the two slowly get closer...this fic will have a lot of romance in it, a lot more happiness and passion eventually only cause these two are adorable. Thank you for reviewing, guys. I hope to keep the WaFa alive even after Diyar-E-Dil finishes. 😳
I am unable to make a new post for some reason, so here is the new chapter:

Okay, I know I'm alternating between both fics, but they both are pretty exciting and I'm trying to enhance everyone's excitement for the final episode.

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2. An Apt Rescue

Wali managed to meet up with Behroz and the two discussed with the police, before beginning to search.

"Bare baba aap hosla rakhiye," (Uncle please stay strong) Wali tried to assure his Taya as he drove. He hated to see him so upset.

"Farah meri jaan hai, Wali, mere dil ka tukra hai yeh, mujhe toh aisa lag raha hai ke mera dil bannd ho jayega," (Farah is my life, Wali, she's a piece of my heart, I feel like my heart is going to stop beating) Behroz's voice was choking up and he wiped a tear from his eye.

"Farah ko kuch nahi ho ga, Bare Baba, I promise," (Nothing will happen to Farah, Uncle, I promise) Wali said gently. "Aap ne mujhe apni laadli saumpi hai na? Toh thoda sa toh bharosa ki jiye." (You put your most precious treasure in my hands, remember? So please have some faith in me)

Behroz managed a shaky smile, nodding.

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"Moeez, chodo mujhe please!" (Moeez, let me go please!) Farah pleaded as Moeez dragged her into some abandoned building that wasn't really properly made. It seemed as if the place was still being built. "Kyun kar rahe hain aap aisa?" (Why are you doing this?)

Moeez threw Farah to the ground. "Kya samajte ho tum logue? Main tumhe itni asani se Wali ka hone doon ga?" (What did you guys think? I would so easily let you become Wali's.)

Farah's eyes widened and she tried to get to her feet, attempting to run but Moeez grabbed her by the hair, smashing her head against the wall, causing her to let out an ear-splitting scream.

"Maine kahan na, koi khosiyar nahi chalegi," (I told you didn't I? I won't tolerate any cleverness) Moeez threatened. Farah could feel blood seeping from where her head had hit and felt dizziness overcome her. She needed to get out of here.

"M-Moeez, please chod de mujhe," (M-Moeez, please let me go) Farah pleaded, voice weak from the pain she felt in the back of her head but Moeez didn't seem to want to listen to her because he pinned against the wall, practically ripping off her brown jacket, leaving her in her white shirt underneath which was pretty much sleeveless. Not used to wearing these kinds of clothes around Moeez, she felt extremely nervous and without thinking pushed against him, throwing him off and beginning to run.

Baba, Mama, kahan hai sab logue? Mujhe kis chees ki saza mil rahi hai? Kya main kabhi bhi Baba ki chakkal phir dekh paoon gi? Kya Allah tala mujhe mauka nahi dega ke main Mama aur Baba ki dhosti kara sakoon? (Baba, Mama, where is everybody? What am I being punished for? Will I never be able to see Baba's face ever again? Will Allah never give me the opportunity to mend things between Mama and Baba?)

"Moeez, nahi!" (Moeez, no!) Farah struggled as Moeez caught up to her, grabbing hold of her again, beating her fists against his chest. He may be stronger than her, but she had to fight. She had to get back to her father no matter what. He had already suffered a huge loss with his brother, if Moeez got away with his dirty intentions, her father wouldn't be able to handle it.

"Aye!" Moeez snapped, causing Farah to jump at how loud his voice was. This caused him to smirk and before she could even consider struggling again, he yanked her forward, forcing her into a kiss. Tears began falling down Farah's cheeks, as she began trying to break free in any way she could. She didn't want this! She may not love Wali, but she hadn't wanted her first kiss to be with Moeez either, despite everything, she had never held any feelings towards him but those of friendship.

Someone stop this, someone help me please, oh god get me out of here, Baba, Mama...Wali...Agha Jaan...anyone please! The kiss was cold, brutal, she had never been kissed before but somehow, something told her it wasn't supposed to be like this. Something told her it was meant to be warmer than this. And more than that, Moeez was not the one she wanted to share her first kiss with. The thought sickened her to the stomach, she had always viewed Moeez as a friend and brother. Mama had been right. She should have called Moeez 'Moeez bhai' and not just by his name. If she had, this would have never happened. As Moeez's hand brushed past her breast, out of instinctive reaction, Farah kicked Moeez in the groin.

Moeez let out a painful grunt, letting go of Farah who let out a choked sob before running again and this time stumbled right into Wali so fast that he had to reach out his arms and catch her.

"Farah, thank god..." Wali said, looking relieved as Behroz came as well.

"Farah," Behroz said beginning to cry a little as Wali passed Farah to his arms. As soon as Farah felt the safety of her father's arms around her, she felt the world beginning to spin around her and her world went black.

"Farah!" Behroz cried, catching his daughter as she passed out.

"Bari dheet hai tumhari biwi, hain Wali?" (Your wife is quite stubbornly annoying isn't she Wali?) Moeez rasped out, still in pain slightly.

Wali glowered daggers at Moeez, his hand clenching into a fist as he saw Farah passed out in Behroz's arms and stepped forward, releasing his clenched fist. "Acha toh yeh tumne mujhse badla lene ke liye kiya hai? Halakein main toh tumhe jaanta tak nahi hoon, aur meri jallan mein tumne apni dhost, apni cousin ke saath itna zulm kiya hai. Tars aata hai mujhe tumpe, Moeez Tajjamul." (Okay, so you did this to get revenge against me, did you? Even though, I don't even know you but in your jealousy of me, you've hurt your dear friend, your cousin in such a horrible way. I feel sorry for you Moeez Tajjamul)

Moeez seemed to say something but the police came inside then, an officer was about to put handcuffs on him but he raised a hand, wanting to say something.

"Suniye ek minute, officer, mujhe mujrim karaar dene se pehle aik baar Farah se toh pooch lije ke woh mere khilaaf biyaan de bi ghi ya nahi," (Wait one minute, officer, before labelling me as criminal, why don't you ask if Farah is willing to give a statement against me or not?) Moeez said with a rather triumphant smirk towards Behroz. "Kya Phuppa, beti ki izzat ab aapke haat mein hai." (What, Uncle? Your daughter's honour is in your hands now) He made to reach out for Farah and Behroz but Wali grabbed his arm roughly, stepping in his way to the father and daughter.

"Habar daar jo mere Bare Baba ya meri biwi ko ayenda aankh utaah ke bhi dekha, aankhein nikaaldoon ga," (Don't you ever dare look at my Uncle or my wife in the wrong way or I'll tear out your eyes) Wali said, eyes glinting with menace, the composed look gone from his face and it being replaced with a cold anger. He looked at the police officer. "Le jaye ishe, please officer." (Please take him away officer)

Moeez struggled the whole way as the police officers dragged him away whilst Wali called the ambulance, taking Farah to the hospital. After a quick checkup, Farah's forehead was bandaged and she had regained consciousness.

"Aap khush kismat Miss Farah," (You are very lucky Miss Farah) Dr. Maqbul said to Farah as she sat up on the hospital bed. "Aap ki bleeding rukh gayi hai aur zaada weakness nahi hui hai. Ab aap ko main kuch medicines likh ke de rahi hoon, aap jaa sakti hain." (Your bleeding has stopped and you haven't suffered too much weakness. I am prescribing you some medicines and you're good to go)

Farah took the prescription, feeling a bit lightheaded at everything that had happened, trying to wrap her mind around the concept that she was alive and away. As she exited the doctor's room, she saw Behroz and Wali both sitting there. Wali had come all the way from the haveli to help her, why? Why wasn't he laughing at what a fool she was, trusting someone who had kidnapped and almost killed her? He should be mocking her, they all should mock her.

"Farah," Behroz's choked voice snapped Farah out of her thoughts and Farah looked at her father, who had tears falling down his cheeks. Seeing her father like that, Farah rushed into her father's arms, burying her face in his chest, beginning to cry.

"Baba," Farah sobbed. "Baba, M-Moeez..."

"Shh, bas meri jaan, bas, ab tum mehfooz ho," (Shh, it's ok sweetheart, you're safe now) Behroz assured her, wiping his own eyes. "Wali beta bhi bechara baut parechan raha hai." (Wali son has also remained quite concerned all this time)

"N-Nahi Baba, aap Wali ko wapis behj dein...w-warna...w-warna Moeez usse nuksaan pauncha sakta hai," (N-No Baba, you please send Wali back...o-otherwise...o-otherwise Moeez could harm him) Farah said, voice shaking.

"Nahi Farah..." (No Farah...) Behroz began but Wali spoke up.

"Meri fikhar mat karo Farah, woh mujhe koi nuksaan nahi paunchayega," (Don't worry about me Farah, he won't cause any harm to me) Wali said gently.

Farah looked at him, before looking back at Behroz. "B-baba, baba mujhe baut dhar lag raha hai, please...mujhe Moeez se dhoor le jayein, please Baba." (B-baba, baba I'm very scared, please...take me far away from Moeez, please Baba)

"Farah," Ruhi said coming inside with Zohra and Tajjamul.

"Mama," Farah said weakly as Ruhi pulled her into an embrace.

"Farah, jo tum chaho gi waise hi hoga," (Farah, however you want it, it will happen like that) Ruhi promised her daughter.

"Farah, tum aur Wali haveli chale jao," (Farah, you and Wali go to the haveli) Behroz said causing Ruhi to frown.

"Behroz," Ruhi said disapprovingly. "Hum Farah ka khayaal rakh sakhte hain. Koi zaroorat nahi hai isko un logoon main jane ki." (We are able to take care of Farah. She doesn't need to go with those people.)

Behroz sighed a little. "Bas karo Ruhi. Dekh liya maine tumhare rishte daroon ki asliyat." (That's enough Ruhi. I've seen the reality of your relatives.)

"Mama, please," Farah pleaded before Ruhi could retort and an argument could begin. "Main yahan se dooor chale jana chahiti hoon. Please, Mama. Mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai. Mama, aghar main yahan rahi toh Moeez mujhe maar dale ga. Meri waja se usko arrest kar liya gaya...jabke ismein Moeez ka koi kusoor nahi hai...Mama, sara kusoor mera hai, aap sahi kehti thi Mama, mujhe Moeez ko Moeez bhai kehna chahiye...main bahut buri...bahut paagal hoon..." (I want to go far away from here. Please, Mama. I'm very scared. Mama, if I stay here then Moeez will kill me. He was arrested because of me...when in fact nothing was his fault...Mama, all fault was fine, you were right, Mama, I should have called him Moeez brother...I am very bad...I'm very stupid) She collapsed crying into her mother's chest.

"Farah," Ruhi hugged her, beginning to cry a little herself, seeing her daughter like this. "Nahi, Farah, Behroz...Behroz kuch keejiye..." (No, Farah, Behroz...Behroz do something...)

"Farah, mujhe maaf kardo," (Farah, forgive me) Behroz said weakly. "Main tumhari hifazat nahi kar...kar..." (I wasn't able to protect...prote...) He clutched his heart, collapsing causing Wali to catch him.

"Bare Baba!" (Uncle!) Wali cried.

"Baba..." Farah said weakly and Ruhi leaned down besides him.

"Behroz, Behroz!" Ruhi said, more tears falling down her cheeks as Wali laid Behroz in Ruhi's arms before hurrying off for the doctor.

Edited by WaliFarah - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update..
I hate that Moeez
Thank god Wali reached on time..
I guess Bheroz wil die..
Let's see what Ruhi does then.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Imane 😆 I was about to put a message to bring this thread to the first page. This chapter was angsty but it'll get happier once Farah goes to the haveli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wohoo! That was clearly superb!
I lovved it, but that cruel moeez! I wanna kick him, but farah did that too lol, story is moving forward with a good pace and i am liking it. Farah is having a real change of heart for wali and now i can't wait for the haveli scenes. Behroz is gonna die? Sad.
Update soon and thankyou so much for the message!
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OMG thank you so much surbi :) Love you so much for the beautiful/stunning review. Haha, Farah acted on pure instinct because she didn't want to die and wanted to see her mom and dad again. Yep, Farah and Wali will get closer, Farah was only 18 when her mother put all the negative crap in her so having this happen before she's completely brainwashed by Ruhi is good, which is why most of this story will take place in the haveli. About Behroz, maybe, maybe not. Thank you SO much for YOUR message. I appreciate your reviews. Imane, thank you as well. You both are beautiful people, god bless you both. 😳😳
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Originally posted by: WaliFarah

OMG thank you so much surbi :) Love you so much for the beautiful/stunning review. Haha, Farah acted on pure instinct because she didn't want to die and wanted to see her mom and dad again. Yep, Farah and Wali will get closer, Farah was only 18 when her mother put all the negative crap in her so having this happen before she's completely brainwashed by Ruhi is good, which is why most of this story will take place in the haveli. About Behroz, maybe, maybe not. Thank you SO much for YOUR message. I appreciate your reviews. Imane, thank you as well. You both are beautiful people, god bless you both.😳😳



Its amazing to call you by "WaliFarah" name, as you know it gives super feels but may i know your any other name? XD
And man you are such a good writer, you deserve really good reviews, and you have penned a very good story here! Honestly speaking we indian television people are so used to reading loads of fanfics on our favourites that after coming to this forum i was thinking why doesn't anyone write? and then i saw your posts and to my good luck you came out to be a superb writer.
Alas i really do wait for your posts so that i can have wali farah apart from tuesdays! And yeah, just a random thought, how do you guys manage to wait for so many days for a new episode? Gosh its so hard for us.
God bless you always ^___^ You're really sweet!
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My name is Amna, sweetie, I live in Australia. I actually wanted the username of WaFa cause of the double meaning but it was already taken so I couldn't. Thank you so much once again for calling me a good writer. It isn't my first time writing fanfiction, but it is my first time writing for Diyar-E-Dil and what I've been trying to do is keep the feel of the show whilst making it a bit more mature (Wali is so hard to get right though 😛). I try to update pretty quick so people can have their dose of WaFa while the next episode isn't out and these updates will become much quicker once the last episode is out because you know, everyone needs to keep the WaFa alive, no matter what. How do we manage to wait? Well, I just watch the old episodes on Youtube, especially the heroic Wali one which is my fave and the Wali/Farah conversation where Farah says sorry to Wali and he forgives her. 😳😳 You're quite sweet yourself, you keep me inspired to keep writing. You, Imane, lasya, Dhani but you're my most loyal supporter so far, so thank you so much!!! 😳
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