New ss ~Idly with chicken~updated part-3,on page 32

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Hey my  lovely readers ,I'm  come up with another story bare with me..it is ss , hope you people like it. I'm looking forward for an amazing response for an even more amazing readers...all the likes and comments, criticism are welcome...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yippee I am first
Tumse bhi first janani
Lovely prologue
Why ishu is angry and who is dude
Update soon
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Hey my lovely buddies...

Not proofread, please over look spellings/grammatical mistakes..

Enjoy reading.     

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Prologue:

 

 

"ishitha, stop, please!" raman shouted as he chased her up the stairs.

 

she ignored him and continued running. Right at this moment, they were at iyer mansion, and they just came back from a party and dinner. The whole entire time, she was ignoring raman and well he'd let it slide, but she guess he couldn't take it anymore.

 

"ishitha, stop!"

 

Once again, she just kept walking, ignoring him.

 

"Ugh -Dammit. What shagun said wasn't true!" raman yelled out, the sound of his footsteps stopping.

 

she turned her head mid-way around. "Yeah, I figured it out like right after she said it."

 

"Well"no, only half of it was a lie!"

 

This time she stopped and turned around to face him. "So you're saying it's not fully a lie?"

 

He nodded to confirm her words.

 

"Okay then...which part was the truth and which was the lie?" ishitha asked, resting both of her hands on her hips.

 

Raman thought for a sec, possibly debating his options in his mind. "Urrrm...never-mind, I change my mind, everything was a lie."

 

She took few steps towards him. "Now you're lying. Spill the truth, I'm tired of being completely clue less." she spat pointing a finger to his chest.

 

Some sparks went through them, and she saw his eyes color seemed to change .she ignored it completely, continuing to stare into his eyes.

 

"I wasn't going to tell you...at all, and I'm sorry too."he turn his face.

 

"why the hell not?! I deserve to know! Well...as long as it involves me!" Ishitha shouted completely frustrated. As soon as those words left her mouth, she started shaking him, like crazy.

 

"BECAUSE, YOU NOT TRUST ME!" he yelled on her

 

"WHY SHOULD I TRUST YOU, "she yelled back..

 

He frozen in the spot, were he stand and asked her "DON'T YOU LOVE ME"

 

"I HATE TO LOVE YOU" she lied him.

 

 

NO..NO..SHE CAN'T LEAVE ME, he cried in his sleep.

 

LOVE, TRUST ,HATE, three words rang in his ears..

 

TRING...TRING...he jerked in his sleep and answer the call.

 

Raman: HELLO!

 

Caller: Hey dude, what's up..

 

Raman: Don't ask me, its terrible to stay away from her,he said with teary eyes..

 

Caller: I think we should plan something to get back her.

 

Raman: Even I felt same, but how? He asked hopingly.

 

Caller: how about today night, what you say?

 

Raman: Shall we go to pub, my mind is not working. I want to refresh my mind dude..

 

Caller: I'm ready to come with you, but my wife?

 

Raman: Don't worry about her, I will manage her.

 

Caller: okay done!

 
 
 
TO BE CONTINUED...
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Edited by janani_divan - 8 years ago
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INDEX:
Part-1

part-2
part-3Edited by janani_divan - 8 years ago
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interesting prologue update soon di
pls pm meEdited by kimty1230 - 8 years ago
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updated prologue have a look friends..
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Intresting diii 
Continue soon ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Interesting. Nice combination too ๐Ÿ˜‰ .pls continue
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Interesting start..
Yahan bhi Shagun๐Ÿ˜•
Who is the caller?
Cont Janani...
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Interesting
Soo all dat was a dream hmmm
Hu is da caller
How is he gonna win back ishu
Luv to read pm fr sure update vl be waiting