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continue soon we are waiting to read 
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I will post character sketch tommorow thanks ðŸ˜Š
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(Guys I am gonna add a little about virman but as a supportive character to make it foursome awesome)
About the story:
Jeevika and manvi are also vaderas like viren and virat
So therefor jeeman are cousins of vv brother. Dadaji is jeeman's real grandfather. After the death of there mom they start living in vadera house,(dad will relieve in story)Viren,jeevika,virat and manvi are best friends. And can do any thing for each other;)

Character sketch
Jeevika
A very bubbly sweet and beautiful girl. Love manvi. Good bound with virat. An indescribable bound with viren. Share all secrets with him. Love teasing him. Love it when he come close to her. Don't like when viren flirt with others girls.
Viren
A very sweet handsome hot guy. Full shatan like manvi;) have a good bound with manvi, love virat. And ofcourse have an indescribable bound with jeevika. Love jeevika as a best friend;) love teasing her. Love flirting with girls.Love flirting with jeevika but just as a friend, as he know she love it when he come close to her;) a little possessive about her. Don't like boys who try to flirt with her.

Manvi (same as show ) have a great bound with viren. Love jeevika
Virat (same as show) great bound with jeevika. Same like jeevika
Other character is same
Swamini: don't like jeeman
Specially when they are near vv brothers.
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nice concept continue soon 
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Chapter 1
It was a beautiful morning but prince of the house was disturbed by sun rays hitting his beautiful face. But he knew that some one is there behind him trying to do something naughty.
Yes it was jeevika. She always woke up early. As she was walking past through his door as she saw him sleeping peace fully she went in and sit beside him. She gave s light peck in his cheeks. But she was still angry on him on not taking her to shopping. So she decided to annoy him;) she took a flower from table and stat tickling him under his ear. But it was just for 1 sec. Because as she could do something else he pulled her towards him sharply.
Now he was on the top and she was trapped.she can't even move a little .
V. So app Kya karne ki kossish Kar rahi thi my princess.
J. Viren plz leave me I don't wanna talk to u. I hate u
V. Aww I love u too baby
Jeevika was now in full anger
J. Viren...
V. Ok ok I am sorry for yesterday
J. I don't wanna talk aur wase bhi tumhe ise Kya lage ho ga apni wo churaloon ka sath flirting karne.
V. Wow Jeevs tum muje kitna acca sa janti ho.
Jeevika was now fuming in anger which didn't go unnoticed by viren. He slightly move close to her now they could feel each other heartbeats he gave a small kiss on her cheeks
V. An to mafh Kar do is innocent bacha ko plzzz while making a puppy face
Jeevika looked at him and gave him a look *u can't change ever*
She pushed him away at stand up in anger
J. Tum ne jeevika vadera ko Naraz kiya ha and u know what I hate uuu.
V. Jeevs jev... Are yar ab ise kase Mano idea manviii;)
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Chapter 2
It was time for break fast every one knew that j is angry from v accept dadaji and swamini bua
Jeevika reaches the dining table
M. Hey di are u ok
J. Morning manvi " not good mood"
And here viren reaches
M. Bhi ya hitler Didi ko kya hoa
V. Hona kya ha yar abi tak naraz ha.
M.really but di to intni dar nahi lagati mana ma.
V. Ha yar
M. Aur specially tab jab koi itna pyar sa kiss kare;)
V. :0 manvi tari to
At dining table
Viren was sitting beside jeevika but she don't care he held her hand under the table so no one can see. She gave him an angry look
V. "I am sorry na" he mumbles so only she could heard him vanshika noticed jeevika not eating
Va. beta kya hoa kaho na.
J. Ji ma
She gave a death glare to viren to which he left her hand.           After the breakfast
V to virman
V. Yar kuch to bato tum dono kya yaha batha fight enjoy Kar raha ho
M. Are bhi ma to app ka sath ho
Virman. So mission start
V. What mission Yar
M. Ok bhi ya lo
She gave a rose to viren and a sorry letter
V. Ab manvi Tum bhi kya yaad rakho gi gao maff kiya:)
M. Bhi ya ma app ko nahi da rahi
V. To
Virat=vi
Vi.bhi ya app di ko do ga
V. Ok ma chalta ho
M. Ok best of luck aur ha bhi first-aid box ma ap ka room ka bahar raqh do hi
V. Haha very funny he gave them a dark look
In jeevika room she came outside from washroom and saw a letter it was viren letter she melted after reading it then she saw two hands giving him a rose from Back she new that who it was
He came close to her like a back hug he whisper so softly and sweetly "I am sorry " she gave a light smile
J. It's ok
He made her face to him
V. Really thank you
He hugged her
J. But u have to pay for it mr vadera
She saw him still confused
J. U have to take me to shopping tommorow then lunch then movie then beach then dinner...
V. Ok ok done so u are not angry with me any more right?
J. Hmm no
V. Aur muja kase pata chala ga ka are u telling truth so I need some evidence
Jeevika was still confused
Viren point towards his cheeks
V. Aik kiss mil gati to.. He said with a smirk
Jeevika was blushing he came close to her she move close and she was about to kiss him when someone knocked the door
Viren was now irritated
V. Kon ha yar
"Sir dadaji app ko bulla raha ha" Tarun said
V. Acha yar to ga ma ata ho
Viren was now facing jeevika with a naughty smirk
Jeevika understood his intentions
She then kiss him on his cheeks to which he gave his killer smile
But his naughty intentions was not finished
V. Wese Miss vadera app ne to kiss Kar diya but don't u think muja bhi apni galti ka tora jurmana bhar dana chiya
Jeevika new what he was thinking
J. Kasa jurmana wile moving backwards
Viren was now moving forwards
Jeevika was moving backwards but she hits the wall now she had no way to go. He puts his arm around her so she can't move he came close to her more close and now they could hear each other heartbeat his was looking at her juicy pink lips while he move his head to kiss her she close her eyes he was about to kiss her when he was distracted by her voice
J. Don't u think u should go dadaji was calling u.
Her heart was beating so fast. He just smile at her. Her eyes was still closed but she knew that he will never do such thing which effects their friendship.
V. Ya right lets go" he said leaving her with a smile. Jeevika was now in relief she was about to go when she was pulled by two arms
He gave a light peck on her cheeks which were now deep red. He smile and let her.

V. Chale
J. Hmm
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Shall I continue or not plz let me tell 😔
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Chapter 3
In evening
Now foursome was sitting in room
Vi. Bhi it's so boring here
V. Init
M. Guys lets do something interesting
Virman viren . Partyyy
J. No way u know na bua is at home she will never let us go
V. I know but bua ko bata kon raha ha
J. :0 I am not going
V. Jeevs plzzz
Virman. Plzzz
While making a puppy face
J. No way" she went out of room
V. Ab isa kon manaya ga.
Virman was looking at him they knew that only viren can do it
V. What no I am not
Virman. Plzzz
V. Okey let me try
Virman. Thanks
In j room
Jeevika was near window looking outside when viren came in and back hug her( guys it's just obvious not the love hug)
J. Viren I am not going
V. Mane Kya kaha" while kissing her cheeks
J. Mr vadera I know what are u thinking" while getting out from hug
She sat down on bed
V. Jeevs plzz yar mara liye plzzz" while making a cute face ever which can make any girl melt
J. Viren see agar bua ko pata..."
He cut her off in middle
V. Jeevs don't worry I promise nahi pata chala ga"
J.are u sure
V. Yes
J. Ok
V. Really" while getting excited
J. Ya
Viren hug her and kiss her cheeks
V. Thanks
Virman enter the room all excited
Virika new that they where listening to all there convo
M. Yayyy u done it
V. Yes
Virman. Wase kiss bht cute thi jiju
bhabhi
(Note guys virman use to tease virika as jiju and bhabhi which they were really pieced off from)
Virika. U both :0
They chase them all around the room
At night
Jeevika was wearing short black dress she was looking very hot
Viren was wearing black
Virman was wearing blue
Virman was trying to found way how to go out viren was waiting for jeevika. After some time jeevika came out she was looking sooo hot like viren . As viren saw j he was lost in her beauty. He went close to her and smile he went close to her ear. Jeevika closed her eyes
V. U look hot" he whisper in her ear. He slightly move near her lips and gave a very light peck in her lips which made her even more blush. (Guys here in kiss it was nothing big for virika they had this lights kisses it was just attraction. Nothing else)
Now virman and virika was on terrace
M. So guys we gonna climb from here
J. :0 no way I am scared
V. Are jeevs don't worry I am here na
Virman. Ehem ehem
M. Kya bhi line marna to koi ap se sikha" while viren wink at her
J was like :0
Vi. Okay guys now stop teasing my bhabhi ;)
J. Virat... While slapping him lightly in his arm
M. Okay guys first cheap will go then me than bhi then di
Everyone. Ok miss
Terrace was not that long we could easily climb from it.
Virat climb first now it was manvi turn
M. Cheap catch me ok
Manvi climb and land in virat they hade an eye lock
Now it was viren's turn
J. Viren plzz sambhal ka" she was very concerned
V. Aye haye itni care not bad"
He wink at her and climb now it was jeevika's turn she was really scared
V. Jeevs come on yaar
J. Viren don't u dare lets fall
V. I will never let u fall baby" viren said in husky tone
M. Nice on bhi
They both had h5
Jeevika and virat was annoyed by this
J. Ok u know what u both carry on I am going
Manvir. Ok ok sorry
Jeevika closed her eyes and climbed she landed in viren's arm but because lot of force they fall and now viren was on top of Jeevika. They had a cute eye lock. Viren was about to kiss her when they heard virman fighting
M. See because of u I got a scratch.
Vi. Oh hello! It's because of u and ur heavy weight.
M. :0 tum
Virika. U both shut up
J. Kitni larai karti ha to manvi
us bachre se while going to virat
V. Ohh hello! Tum Kya kahna chahti ho ka only manvi larti ha
J. Yes
V. Wase tum kha to ase rahi ho jase khod to larti hi nahi ho. Huh!
J. :0 so u wanna say I am annoying.
V. Yes
J. Tum...
Virman. Stop it u both
M. Kya yaar ap dono to hum sa bhi zyada larta ho
J. Whatever
They all went in car

Chapter 4
Priya(have a crush on viren. Jeevika and priya don't like each other)
They all reach club
Jeevika was still not talking to viren. Virman went to bar. Viren saw priya and decide to tease jeevika.
V. Hey priya baby;)
P. Hey hotti
They hug each other
J was think to herself
J. :0 how viren could do this he know I don't like her and he call her baby. Ahh any way jeevika why do u care.
Priya was trying to come near viren. Jeevika was felling awkward, which didn't goes unnoticed by viren but he decided to tease her more. Suddenly a boy came up to jeevika.
B. Hey sweetie like to dance with me.
Jeevika thought it is the best way to take revenge on viren. Viren saw this but he thought jeevika will not agree but for his surprise she agreed. Priya also took viren with her. The boy's intentions were not good but jeevika didn't noticed it but it didn't goes unnoticed by viren. He was a bit concerned. They boy approach near her and put his hand on her wrist. Jeevika didn't like it. Viren saw this and went near them he new that If he did something it will ruin all party so he calmly went net them
V. Hey can I have her now
B. Ok ( he knew about virika as Priya told him so he didn't do any thing)
Viren saw jeevika who was not in any mood to talk to him so she just went from there. These all things didn't goes unnoticed by virman. But they decided to not inter fair now. Viren knew that j is angry on him so he decided to go behind her. She was sitting in sofas in the corner. Viren went there and sat next to him she didn't look at him
V. Angry at me?
J. U should be with ur chicks
V. Hey why u don't like her
J. Coz I don't and tell me one thing when that boy came closer to me why did u came, why do u even care.
V. Jeevs are u really asking me this. U are my responsibility. And I know u also didn't like him but u just went with him to tease me.
J. I can also say u this when u went with that chural Priya. It was clearly looking j don't like v go near Priya. He was now controlling his laughs
V. Ya point to ha ok I am sorry plzzz
Jeevika just gave him a fake smile and turn around to go when he pull her towards him. He gave a kiss near her lips.
V. Ab to maff Kar do na
Jeevika kiss him on his cheeks. He was quite surprised by that coz she never do these things specially in public
J. Kar diya" they both smile at each other
Now viren was again lost. J was in bar. Her meter was again getting high. When she heard a familiar voice. It was manvi she was in full anger
M. Pata nahi ye boys apne app ko Kya samgte hain. Pahle sorry phir dobara vohi kam
J. To bilkul thik kha rahi ha
But after sometime they heard some voices they saw back and was surprised...
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Guys plz tell me shall I continue the story or not ppzzz