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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yes you guyz!!!!!!!!

My 12th Fanfic!!!! Which is titled Chori Chori!!!!

In case u guyz dont know....

I have ended DHER NA HO JAYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And now.. i have started a new one!!!!!!!!


i wont tell u guyz what this one is about........ just read it.........

And slowly everything will come out

As for character wise............

They will just come as i introduce them!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 1

There's a woman walking on the road!!!!

And then

She feels like something isnt right!!

And then

She turns around

But there's no on there

She continues to walk

And then

There are 4 guyz!!!

And they look at her from head to toe

And they are looking at each other!

And they are smiling!!!!

They start following her!!!!!!

And then

She hears something

She turns around

And sees them

So she walks faster!!!!!!

Guys speed up too!!!

And then

They catch up to her

And they grab her

And she's yelling let go!!!!!!!

She's trying to fight them off

But they are strong!

One of them grabs her

And then she bites him

And she runs!!!!!!!!!!

They are running after her

She's running as fast she can!!!!!!

And then

She loses them!!!

And they are looking for her!!!!

She's like phew!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 2

She's hiding behind a bush!!!

And then

Someone taps her

And she screams

And she turns around

And it's a watchman

Saying madam!!……..

Wat are you doing here???

She's saying please help me!

I am in trouble!!!

And he's getting angry

Saying this is private property!!

You cant come here

And he grabs her hand

And when you see it…

It's a house…..

And he brings her inside

He's saying SIR!!!

Sir turns around fully

And its none other than Jai Walia!!!!

Sir is like

She was hiding behind the bushes!!!!!!!

Jai is like who are you?

She's quiet!!!!!!

Jai is like who are you?

When you see her…

Its none other than Bani!!!!

Jai tells the watch man to leave!!!!

He's just watching

Jai is like go!

He leaves!!!!!

Its only her and bani!!

Bani is all shaking and what not!!!!!!

Jai is like
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3

What's ur name?

Bani is like what???

Jai: I said whats ur name?

Bani: Bani…

Jai: Bani… wat are you doing here?? And who are you?

Bani is like

Some guyz were chasing me

So I hid behind ur bushes!!!!!

And then ur sec brought me here!!!

She's like

I promise I wont come here again!!!!!

And she's like

Can I go?

Jai is like she's one strange person!!!!!

Jai is like yes go!

And she goes!!!!

Jai sits down!!!!

And he's like that was strange!!!!

He gets a phone call

And its from his Masi!!!!!!

Jai starts talking to her

And she's asking

Whether he found a girl!

Jai is like how many times

Will we talk about this?

He's like no!!

Masi is like…..

You will never look

So how would u know?

He's like yeah yeah yeah!!!

Jai is like

Forget about me

How are you?

She's like….
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 4

I am okay!!

She said she was admitted to the hospital

And Jai's shocked!

He's like what??

Why???

Masi is like…. Just a little stressed!!!

But she's like don't worry!

I am fine

Jai is having a panic attack!!!!

Masi is like really!!!

I am fine!!!!

Jai's all worried!

Masi tells him not to get worried!!!!!

They both talk

And then they hang up!!

Next night….

Bani is out again!!

Same thing happens

And she runs!!!!

She herself doesn't know where she's going!

And then

She hides behind the bushes

And the guys lose her!!!!

She turns around

And the watchman is right there

She's like aww man

Couldn't I found a better spot?

He's like u again?

Watchman takes her in again

And Jai is like u again?

He tells the watchman to leave!

Watchman is thinking awww man!! I wanna see what he's going to do!!!!

HE leaves!

Jai: Do you like the bushes or something?

Bani is looking at him!!!!

And she's like Yes! I do!! I love them! Acting all sarcastic!!!


The End!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Preview for tomorrow

Bani just straight out hugs him!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Jaanu you are amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏

Amazing energy and simply hilarious!! 😆

Love'em!! Keep them coming hun!

Cheers,
dc
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Posted: 17 years ago
#8
im so exicited you started another ff.love the beginning.cant wait to read more. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#9
Nice fanfic.Good start. Plz continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i like it!!!!!!
can't wait til the next one~~~