Originally posted by: -Saishree-
Nycco update! Loved it!
So both PPs plotting some games...arjun ki planning kuch samaj me nhi ayi... π confuse hu... But whatever this shanipradosh is the biggest haddi in my ardi's life
Update soon...
Read before ur pm... π benefits of being a pH.d stalker π€£
Originally posted by: PanchaliKaArjun
Hello Aanvi ! So yeah today I thought I would never come back to IF . That thing keeps coming to me π I was going to log out when message popped and among 10 new messages your one was the most interesting . Obviously ! Akhir ArDi wala jo tha . πNow reading this update which was sadly very short I realised that you improved in your writing . You went from good to excellent re . Uttam ati uttam ! π Ab uttam rehna sarva shrest nahi π god I was trying to copy Arjun ka dialogue and I suck at ."Shresta banne ki echa nahi hai Rajkumari "Hayee that wala scene . Wait wait wait . No Sam, no beating around the bush. Straight to the comment. As I said very well written .Love how Arjun is trying to fight his own destiny . Yet he believes that he has some connection with Draupadi . And he loved her ! Oh ! Jab pyaar kiya toh darna Kya ?Draupadi is fighting her own dilemma . Trying to find who Pritha is π€£ oh god this olden times people na ! Have so many names . Don even realise how difficult it is for others πArjun is running away from the Swayambar . Seriously ?Anyways update soon and next time a romantic one pyaar bhara and long one too .LoveSam
Originally posted by: ltelidevara
Great update Anvi loved it. But don't take much time now. Eager to read next and next...
Interesting update dear
Res
**a big sorry
tomorrow pakka .Unressorry for bein that i should not beπ€’ I mean late.πso coming to the story it was very beautiful update reπ³ and must say its getting more interresting with each and every passing update. πArjun fifgting with his destinyπ arya don't waste timeπ‘. i can't wait to see you with drauπ³ and let Anu give us a romantic update, π³ π³loved that guru maata.β€οΈ she reminds me of my grandmaπ³i love your drau she is very intelligent like meπupdate soon, π Mou is waitingπ
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