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#71

Originally posted by: sireesha76

Totally different concept

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Wow superb SS . Kuch hut ke hai yeh 👏 . Looking forward to your next update.😊


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now what happens next ...
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Such An Emotional Update! Both Zahir Seher love each other but Seher's insecurities are surfacing.. Thanx Fr Pm. Continue Soonz.


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Chapter 4


Zahir's POV

He woke up with a heavy head and looked at the clock.

11 am... he rubbed his eyes as he called out for his male servant, Hamid.

"Hamid!" No response from the other side.

"Hamid!!" I called out for him again.

Again no response... he was getting impatient with every passing second.

"Hamid?!" I literally shouted in an annoyed tone.

A man in his early 30s appeared, "Jee Sahab!"

"Kahan the bhai? Itni der se awaaz laga raha hu!" I said irritated.

"Phone aaya tha..usse sun raha tha!" Hamid replied.

He massaged his thudding temples, "Meri coffee kahan hai?"

"Jee main abhi lata hu!" Hamid said.

"Majaal hai koi kaam samay par ho iss ghar mein... abb mera muh kya dekh rahe ho? Jao jaake coffee lao!" I said infuriated to the core.

"Jee, main bhi lata hoon!" Hamid replied as he re-treated to kitchen while mumbling under his breath.

Sometime after, Hamid entered with a steaming hot cup of coffee. "Saab, aapki coffee!" he said.

Zahir looked at him as he moved his head from the bedrest. "Hmm.. table pe rakh do!" I said as I got out the bed and sat on the my comfortable arm-chair. Hamid did as he was ordered to do so.

"Saab, main aapke office ke liye kapde press kar dun ?" Hamid asked.

Office reminded him of Seher and he wanted to stay away from her as much as possible.

"Nahi, uski koi zaroorat nahi hai !" I replied a bit lost.

"Saab, kya hua aapko? aap pichhle chaar din se office nahi gaye hai.. aapka kitna pada hoga wahan!" Hamid said with creases of worry.

"Tumhe use kya? Mera kaam hai.. mujhe karna hoga main kar lunga.. nahi karna hoga nahi karunga! Tum apne kaam se kaam rakho !" I snapped back.

"Jee!" He replied meekly as he left the room.

Yes it has been 4 days since that night.. and this is what he has turned himself into. He was never a rude person but these days even minute things irritated him to great extent. He just couldn't concentrate on anything. Every time he tried doing some thing his mind somehow gets diverted to her thoughts and a never ending trail of unanswered questions! Whenever he closes his eyes he could picture her almond brown filled with unshed tears, tears which she was trying hard to hide !

Kyu baar baar mera dil uske liye gawahi de raha hai ? Kyu mujhe aisa lag raha hai ki kuch hai jo woh chhupa rahi hai ? Kyu itna sab kuch hone ke bawajood mera dil use galat manne ko tyaar nahi hai ? Kyu ?

He closed his eyes as he regained his compose. He sipped through the coffee as another beautiful memory of theirs came running back to him.

Few weeks back,

Both of them were returning back from the work site. They were working tirelessly on the project for its success. That day was unusually busy for them.. Non-stop meetings with clients and then, site check that they couldn't spare themselves some time to have their lunch. The sun was about to set, painting the sky in hues of orange and red. Seher was admiring the view outside the car window when the car suddenly came to a halt. She looked at Zahir with questioning eyes.

"Chalo kuch khaa lete hai ! Subah se kuch nahi khaya !" I said while taking off my seatbelt.

"Mujhe bhook nahi hai !" She said as I looked at her amazed but much to her embarrassment her stomach growled. She looked down.

"I can hear that ! Par koi nahi mujhe bhook lagi hai.. So chalein ?" He said as he tried to hide his grin.

She quietly stepped out of the car. Soon enough they were seated in the coffee shop. It was small and cozy place. Zahir was looking through the menu while Seher was looking everywhere except him. He glanced at her.

Yeh ladki nahi manegi ! he thought.

"Kaun si coffee logi ?" I asked her.

"Nahi main ice-cream lungi !" She replied finally.

"Okay !" I called out for waiter. "One scoop, ahh flavor?"

"Chocolate"

"One scoop chocolate ice cream for the lady and i would like a cafe latte. Thank you !" He ordered.

A few minutes later, the waiter served them their respective order. Raman teared the sugar sachets as he stirred his coffee.

"So, you don't like coffee ?"

"Not really !"

"Aapko pasand hai?" she was getting comfortable now.

"Bahout !" I said with smile. "In fact meri mom ko bilkul nahi pasand meri yeh aadat... she is always like itni coffee piyega toh toh issi ki tarah kala ho jayega!"

Seher laughed, so did he! "That is so typical of moms.." She said.

"Yes it is ! BTW tumhari family mein kaun kaun hai?"

The smile suddenly disappeared, she looked down at her bowl. He felt as if he asked something wrong.

"It's okay if you don't wanna tell !" He said immediately.

"Arre nahi its not like that! Ammi, abbu aur meri choti behen, Aqira! Woh sab Delhi mein hai.. I have not met them from long that's why.. Aap bataye aapki family mein kaun kaun hai?"

" ahh.. Small family like yours... Mom, dad and my younger sister, Saman."

She smiled but something was amiss.

Tears had clouded his vision. He placed the cup back on the table with sigh !

Nothing is helping!

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Seher's POV

She finalized the document she was typing. After a re read she saved it and switched off her laptop as she gathered her belongings and began packing her things.

"All set for home?" Anamika asked.

"Yeah.!" I replied.

"Waise congratz madam, mujhe arpit ne bataya ki sir ko presentation bahout achhi lagi !" Anamika said.

"Haan, achhi toh lagi.. abb i dont know if it was actually good or he was just motivating me." I said with a smile.

Arpit who was standing near by too joined them. "Motivating?! Oh please.. it was brilliant!" He complimented her.

"Ahh.. flattery !" I said visibly embarrassed.

"Rehne de arpit.. she won't believe us... isse toh sirf Zahir sir ki baat pe vishwas aayega!" Anamika added with a wink.

Zahir !

She looked down with a sad smile. "Khair aisa kuch nahi hai ! I believe you guys.. thank you so much !" I replied.

She stopped a taxi for herself and waved off Arpit and Anamika after settling down.

Zahir aaj bhi office nahi aaye.. pata nahi kaise honge... ?

Aaj chaar din beet chuke uss baat ko.. Zahir ne toh socha bhi nahi hoga ki main unki ummedo iss tarah kuchal dungi...! Kya kya socha hoga unhone.. ek naye safar ke khwab dekhe honge ... aur maine sab sapne todh diye..sab kuch khatam kar diya..!

Meri zindagi mein bahout raaz hai Zahir, main jaisi dekhti hoon.. waisi hoon nahi..! Kaash main aapko yeh samjha pati !

Seher reached her home. She knocked the door. Hina, her housemate opened the door and even before she could say something seher replied, "Zahir nahi ae aaj bhi!"

"Seher tu yeh bahout galat kar rahi hai uske saath bhi aur apne saath bhi!" Hina tried to make her understand.

"Shayd magar mereko isse behtar aur koi option nahi lag raha..!" I said while pouring myself a glass of water.

" options bahout hai... bas thodi himmat chahiye.." Hina replied.

"Aur mere andar himmat khatam ho chuki hai.. aur nahi lad sakti main.." I replied in a weak tone.

"Seher" she said a bit softer this time, " isse koi khush nahi rahega.. na tu aur na he Zahir.. main abb bhi keh rahi hu.. usse sab sach bata de.. he will understand!"

"No he won't, jab sab sach jaanne ke baad mere apne parents mujhe support nahi kiya toh main kyu kisi ajnabi se iski ummeed karun!" I tried to justify my position.

"He is different.. and he will believe you.. have some faith on him." She said leaving Seher speechless.

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Zahir's POV

"Zahir kaisa hai hamid?" A man in black asked.

"Saab ko pata nahi kya ho gaya.. na sone ka koi samay hai..na jaagne ka.. office bhi nahi jate... chhoti chhoti baat pe chid jaate hai ..!" Hamid replied.

"Hai kahan woh?" Man asked.

"Tv room mein hai !" Hamid said.

"Thik hai.. tum ek kaam karo hum dono ke liye coffee banake lao.. usse main dekhta hoon" saying so he left for the tv room.

There he was sitting, although tv was on but his mind was totally somewhere else.

"Hello..!" The man called out. This brought him back from his thoughts. He looked around to find Mihir standing.

"Mihir ? Tu kab aaya ?" I asked, surprised by his sudden arrival.

"Thodi der pehle.. jab tu daily soap dekh raha tha !" Mihir replied. Zahir noticed that all a saas bahu drama was going on. He immediately switched it off.

"Nahi main toh kuch aur dekh raha tha.. phir kuch sochne laga aur pata he nahi chala kab show khatam ho gaya. Khair chhod, tu bata.. aaj yahan kaise ?" I tried to divert the topic.

"Tujh se milne aaya tha... office gaya tha toh pata chala ki tu chhutti pe hai.. issiliye ghar aa gaya. So, kaisa hai tu?"

"Bilkul thik.."

"Really?"

"Of course!"

"Tu kya samjhta hai.. tu bahout intelligent hai aur hum sab bewakoof?" Mihir snorted in anger and Zahir looked down hopelessly.

"Muh niche karke bethne se kuch nahi hoga jawab dena padega.. kya haal bana rakha hai apna ?" Mihir added.

"Tu bata kya karun main? Bahout koshish karli..lekin nahi bhul paa raha main use!"

"Toh bhulana padega.. you have to accept it..anyhow!"

"Kehna bahout aasaan hai..magar karna bahout mushkil.. i love her.. !"

"But she doesn't give a damn abt that..!"

"I dont know.. main nahi accept kar paa raha iss baat ko.. main uski aansu se bhari aakhen nahi bhula paa raha!"

"So what do you think? She loves you but still denying?" Mihir asked confused.

"I feel so!"

"But why would she do that ?" Mihir looked at Zahir.

"I dont know!"

The silence prevailed for a while when mihir finally broke in, "dekh Zahir, iss sab se koi fayada nahi milega.. tereko sirf aur taqleef pahuchegi..!"

"Main jaanta hoon... but I really need answers to my questions.. I need some peace!"

"Well.. uska sirf ek he tareeka hai.. go and ask her why she rejected you? Ask her for a strong reason.. !"

"Yes that is the only way!" Zahir too agreed.

"Achha sun please shave karle.. tujhe dekh kar aisi feeling aa rahi jaise 12th fail student dekh kar aati hai !"

"Very funny!"

"Chal coffee pite hai.."

Zahir smiled as he could see some rays of hope shining his path once again.

Main aa raha hoon Seher!

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