New SS: Imperfectly Perfect Chapter 13 updated on pg 27 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41

Thanks a lot Pro...
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Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

good work dear..

keep it up


Thank you so much Yashfeen...! 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: fatema22

hey
thank you for the update. ..it was beautiful. ...
i love zahir...and banner was beautiful. ..loved it ...
full update was awsome ..keep it up .
what will happen next please do update soon ...

and thanks a lot buddy.


Thanks Fatema...!😊

I am glad you liked the update...!
Banner credit goes to Appy Di..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: indian_beauty

Hey sorry for replying late...

Awesome update...I'm really liking the story and the way ur showing both of their POVs
Zahir is and the banner is very beautiful😳


That is completely okay...! Comment when you get time...!

I am glad you liked the update... Zahir is definitely Day Dreaming...
Banner credit goes to Appy Di..!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
awesome story ,
i just loved to read , pleased do continue
actually i am not active in IF but i am come here to read ur story
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Chapter 2

Zahir's POV
"Jee Mohtarma! Dcor toh aapne bahout achha kiya hai... har koi tareef kar raha hai!" I complimented her.

"Thank you sir...I tried my best... I am glad aap sabko pasand aaya... I was very nervous!" Seher replied with a smile.

"Iss baat ki tawakko thi mujhe ki tum as usual nervous hongi... but I guess nervousness brings the best out of you!" I again complimented her.

Seher acknowledged his praise with a smile. She looked into his deep eyes but soon shied away.

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Seher's POV

She could never match the intensity of his gaze. she looked away with a contented smile.

"Chalo main tumhe humare kuch bade investors se milvata hoon!" I heard him say.

"Jee?!" I asked surprised.

"I said come I'll make you meet some of our big investors.." he repeated.

"Pa..a..r kyu? I mean main unse milkar kya karungi?" I asked still unsure.

"Kya karungi, kya matlab? Unhe pata toh chale ki iss success party ke pichhe asliyat mein kiska ka haath hai !" he replied as if he was stating an obvious fact.

"Chalein?!" he asked again.

"Sure!" I said hesitantly.

I hate social gatherings! I just hate them...
Social gatherings mein aapko naye logo se milne ka mauka milta hai.. Zyaadatar log use enjoy karte hai..
lekin main?!
Mere problems he out of the world hai...
main bahout nervous ho jaati hu naye logon se milte waqt...
aur apni nervousness mein main sab kuch gadbad kar deti hoon...
I hope aaj koi gadbad naa ho!
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Zahir's POV

Kabhi kabhi mereko iss ladki ki bilkul samajh nahi aati..
Logon se milte waqt itna conscious kyu ho jaati hai..?
Okay I agree... she has that reserved kind of personality who don't mix up easily...
lekin iska matlab yeh toh nahi ki aap kisi se interact he nahi karoge...
Maine kafi dafa puchhne ke bhi koshish ki hai... par har baar baat tal deti hai?
Pata nahi kya dikat hai ?!

He made her meet everyone present there in the party. She was a bit conscious at first but soon enough, she was comfortable.
Party went down really well!
After the party was over, he asked her for a walk around. She too agreed. They were walking on the wet sand... leaving their footprints behind... the silver moonlight was illuminating their way...everything seemed perfect!
He looked in her direction as he moved his hand through his hairs.

Kaash yeh lamha yahin ruk jaaye... aur issi tarah puri zindagi beet jaye...

Seher's POV

She could feel his gaze on her but...

Is it coming?!
Kya sach mein who lamha aane wala hai?

"You're beautiful !" he said out of blue. She blushed although she didn't wanted to. She looked at him with a brief smile...

"Seher, Maine tum se ek bahout zaroori baat karni hai.." he began.

I was right!!
Today is gonna be that moment...
Mere saath he aisa kyu hota hai... aakhir kyu??

"Jee kahiye!"I replied looking everywhere but him.

"Meri taraf dekho Seher!" he requested.

Aap kyu mere liye mushkile badha rahein hai ?!

"Please!" he again requested.
She looked at him.. he smiled...

"Seher,
main ab jo kehne jaa raha hun use jaanne ke baad main nahi janta tum kaise react karogi lekin abb mere liye iss baat ko tum se yaa kisi se bhi chhupana na mumkin ho gaya hai... Main tumhe pasand karne laga hoon..."

Main jaanti hoon !!

"I don't know yeh sab kaise shuru hua... kab maine tumhe pasand kiya.. kab tumse mohabbat hui.. Kab meri zindagi tumhaare begair adhuri lagne lagi..? lekin haqiqat yehi hai... ki main tumse mohabbat karne laga hoon...bepanaah mohabbat... aur abb mere liye tumhare begair ek pal bhi guzarna na mumkin hai !!"

Mere liye bhi...

Saying so he bent down on his knees as he opened the red velvet box, the diamond studded ring was sparkling in dim moonlight.. she could feel eyes going glassy..

Yaa allah! yeh kaisa imtehaan le raha hai tu...? Kyu... main kaise?
Abb kya karungi main?

"Mujhe aur meri mohabbat ko qubool karlo!" he finished as he forwarded his hand.
She sighed as a lone tear escaped her eyes...
"Nahi!!!" I replied with all my shattered strength...
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This is it !! I hope it was up to expectations...!!
Will be waiting for your reviews...😊
Edited by pcnsb - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#47
Beautiful start and the start is lovely . Loved the way you showed both their thoughts , feelings and their point of views πŸ‘ , and of course Zahir is πŸ‘πŸΌ after all Sid hai yaar 😳 . Please continue soon , waiting eagerly for the next update .
Edited by Anjujag - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Lovely Update Bacche! ❀️ Loved how you showed both their POV's simultaneously. Seher is a sweetheart while Zahir has that charm..😳 His Proposal was sweet. But Seher's reaction was sumwhere expected. Thank fr pm. Continue Soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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hii sorry buddy was not well update was beautiful. ..proposal was awesome. ..
ohhh now what happens next ..thanks for the beautiful update buddy. ...
..thanks so much.


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Waiting for the next update ... Eagerly
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