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Thnx for the PM!
Character sketch is interesting n I love the name Zahir 😳
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Originally posted by: russhmeSS

Thanks for the PM. Looking forward 😊
And special thanks for the picture!! 😳

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wowww beautiful waiting for the first update. ...
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Intresting CS Nandu. Love Sanam Jung. ❤️ Thanx fr pm.

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Originally posted by: libsrocks

The character sketch looks very interesting. Btw i even liked the actress you choose for main lead! She is one of my favourite Pakistani actress 😳

Please do continue updating as i'm eagerly looking forward to read your fanfic! ⭐️


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Thanks for pm...
Characters' Names are really nice...
Waiting for this beautiful story dear please update soon. .


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Originally posted by: Amreen...

wonderful names of the characters...
I always love to read muslim love stories...
Continue soon...


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Originally posted by: indian_beauty

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Character sketch is interesting n I love the name Zahir 😳


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Chapter one

Seher's POV


Lighting ho gayi...

Tables?! Yaa Allah... abhi tak saari tables pe covers nahi chade..

"Ashim! Ashim!" I called out.

"Yes, ma'am!" Ashim replied as he appeared from somewhere behind.

"Yeh kya? Abhi tak sare tables pe cover nahi chade...mehmaan aate honge! Jaldi kare..." I said.

Ashim looked around, "I am sorry... main abhi karva deta hu... paanch min lagenge bas! Achha aap please ek baar caterers' se baat kar lein." Ashim said as he moved towards his team.

Ashim, yeh janaab manager hai uss event organizing team ke jinhe humne hire kiya hai, khair hire karne ka koi fyaada nahi hua... balki mera he kaam ulta badd gaya...

Kasam hai, agli dafa kuch bhi ho jaye.. main event management katai nahi karungi...

Chalo abb caterers' ko bhi dekh lete hai..

"Haan jee! Kya pareshaani hai?" I asked as I reached the spot where the manager of caterers' was standing along with few of the chefs. Apparently he was scolding the chefs there.

"Kuch nahi ma'am bas chef ne dessert ke liye choco-vanilla cake bana diya hai, jabki maine inhe saaf saaf bataya tha ki choco-chip brownie banegi!" manager replied as he glared his team of chefs.

"Yeh toh problem ho gayi... aapne pehle dekhna chahiye tha na? Abb kya karenge?" I said with creases of worry.

"Kuch nahi ma'am aap chinta mat kariye...choco-chip brownie he serve hogi...yeh log bana denge!" he replied.

"Aur jo ban gaya hai uska kya? Rehne dein... Choco-vanilla cake he serve kar dijiyega... khamakha waste hoga warna!" I replied.

The manager nodded as mumbled a sorry and directed his chefs' to be more careful in future.

I looked around, sab thik lag raha!

Ya Allah bas aaj ka function thik se karva de...uske baad kuch nahi chahiye...

Aap log soch rahe honge ki main yeh kis party in tyaarion mein busy hu.. hai na?!

Main batati hu...meri company, yaani jis company mein main kaam karti hu, ussne ek bahout badi deal crack kari hai... yeh celebration issi khushi mein ho raha hai...

Humari company ke saare sponsors, high profile clients, management sab aayenge aaj... issiliye main nahi chahti ki koi bhi kami reh jaye..

Aur Zahir sir ne itne trust ke saath mujhe yeh responsibility di hai... I don't want to let him down!

Then suddenly my eyes fell on a girl standing near the candles, Yeh yahan kya kar rahi hai?

"Anamika?!" I called her out!

"Seher! Tum kitni pyaari lag rahi ho" she complimented me.

"Khair abb main itni bhi achhi nahi lag rahi tum batao, tum abhi tak tyaar kyu nahi hui?" I asked.

"Arre yaar.. yeh candles!" She said as she showed her the unlighted candles around.

"Chhodo isse yeh main karti hu... tum change kar aao!" I replied.

"You sure?" she looked uncertain.

"Haan yaar... come on go!"

Edited by pcnsb - 8 years ago
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Zahir's POV


Sab thik ho jayega... Don't worry Zahir!

Everything will turn out well...

Oh hello! Aagey aap log... kaise hai aap sab.?!

Main bilkul thik hu...

Kya kaha? Thik nahi lag raha?! Kyu bhai...?

Main thik hu...

Pareshaan lag raha hu...?

Nahi toh...!

O..kka...y fine... thik nahi hu! Pareshaan nahi hu... nervous hoon!

Nahi, party ke liye nahi... mujhe pura aitbaar hai Seher par... she will handle everything perfectly...

Nervousness kisi aur baat ki hai!

Kis baat ki...?! Ummm... kaise batau?

Baat Seher se related hai...! Nahi samjhe...

Achha! Iss baat ke baad humari zindagi badal jayegi... abb kuch samjh mein aaya? Abb bhi nahi...!

Ohho..! achcha wait..

He opened the drawer, and took out a red velvet box. Wanna see it?

He carefully opens it, and there lies a beautiful diamond ring...

Abb toh samajh he gaye honge? Yess..!! Main Seher ko aaj propose karne wala hoon... Isiliye hawayiyaan udi hui hai...

Ring kaisi lagi? ... Thank you! Bahout mehnat lagi select karne mein... pura din mall mein ghumne baad finally yeh select ki...

Pata nahi kaise react karegi? I hope mind na kare...

Aap log mere liye pray karna... karenge na? Thank you yaar... aap logo se he ummeed hai mujhe...

He re-checked himself for the 1000th time in mirror, carefully placed the box in his blazer's pocket, put on his cologne and took in a breath as he left his house!

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He could see the guests pouring in but he had to wait outside as CEO of the company was on his way...about to get to the venue.

Uff... aur kitni der lagegi inhe...

Yeh sabse fizool kaam lagta hai mujhe... pagalo ki tarah bahir khade raho.. aur apne boss ka intezaar karo... jaise humare pass aur koi masroofiyat he nahi hai...

Aapko pata hai, maine subah se Seher ko nahi dekha... mere ko milna hai usse...

He heard the honking of a lavish BMW...

Ahh... finally!

"Welcome sir!" I said while faking a smile as I held the door open for him.

"Thank you! Congratulations Zahir on the achievement..." he said.

"Thank you so much sir... but it was a team effort!" I replied as politely as possible.

"Come on lets go inside!" he replied.

"Yes sir for sure!" I said and we started to move inside the venue. As soon as we reached inside, the crowd gathered them from all the sides to congratulate them.

"Ya Allah...!" I murmured.

As everyone was congratulating him, his eyes were just looking for her...

And there she was!

He looked at her and his heart skipped a beat... She was looking divine in deep blue floor length anarkali...she was laughing on something...her smile was to die for!

His trail of thoughts was broken by one of the guests standing along with him. He shifted his gaze away.

Edited by pcnsb - 9 years ago
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