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Posted: 8 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: libsrocks

Really good update! Thanks for sending me the pm! I had been waiting for the update for sooo longgg!

I really want to know what Seher's secret but something tells me you are going to first grill us with wait! πŸ˜†


Thank you so much.. dear !!

So sorry for late update... was kind of busy!
Hehehe... there's no fun without testing the patience of reader... πŸ˜†
Don't worry will reveal it soon !!

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Posted: 8 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: OptimisticSoul

Awesome update ! very interesting now waiting for the next update


Thank you so much !! 😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: russhmeSS

Finally I managed to read the whole story at a stretch.. And must say its really amazing 😊
Interesting storyline, and you have a unique style of writing..
I can imagine Sid in the character
Curious to know the secret in Seher's past.. Waiting for next update!


Thank you so much !! 😊

I'm so glad you're enjoying the story... thank you for appreciating my style of writing !!

Aww... I'm successful then, if you can imagine Sid.. 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: MIKELA

SUPERB ARTICCOLO πŸ‘

FANTASTICOOO😳


Thank you so much..! 😊

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#95

Originally posted by: fatema22

awsome update ...

con sooonnn .


Thank you so much !!

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#96

Originally posted by: love.sid

CUTE UPDATE 😊BUT LATE UPDATEπŸ˜• NO PROBS πŸ˜‰THIS TIME EXPECTING LITTLE EARLY UPDATEπŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸΌ


Thank you so much..!

So sorry for the late update..! 😳
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#97

Originally posted by: HemaG

OMG...a new sid SS...

Thanks girlie for the sweet cum cute story...
Frm prats to toral...u found another match for sid...haha...superb..
And frm shiv to sid to zahir...awesome..
Ur way of writing is different and fresh...
Looking for more...


PS...Thanks fatema for the pm =D
And appiee New Year Everybody


My pleasure dear !! ❀️

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#98


Chapter 5


Seher's POV


Hina kyu meri pareshaani nahi samajh paa rahi? Main use kaise samjhau mere reasons? Woh toh sab janti hai phir bhi iss tarah behave kar rahi hai. Maine bahout mushkil se apni yeh duniya basai hai... ek aisi duniya jahan meri izzat hai... ek aisi duniya jisme main khush hu...! Ise basane ke liye bahout badi keemat chukai hai maine... bahout badi.. aur main ise zaaya nahi hone dungi..!


Mere andaar aisa bahout kuch hai jo ek aadmi kabhi apni biwi mein nahi chahega.. ek ko aazma chuki hu..aur muh ke bal giri bhi hoon...doosre ko aazmane ke liye himmat nahi hai ! Aur ek baari ke liye maan lete hai, Zahir ko sab sach bata deti hoon aur woh mujhe accept bhi kar lete hai.. magar unki family ka kya?! Woh log kabhi mujhe accept nahi karenge..iski main guarantee de sakti hu..! And sympathy is something which I can never tolerate.. Life jaisi chal rahi hai chalne do ! I thought determined stronger than ever.

With this, she dried her tears and closed the window of her room.

Next Morning,

Today she wasn't feeling like going to office. Too tired by night long battle of heart and mind. So she decided to stay back at home and gift herself some peace. She called Anamika to inform about the same.

"Go Ahead.. no issues! Waise bhi aaj kal sir nahi aa rahe toh.. definitely tera mann bhi nahi lagega office mein!" Anamika said with a naughty glint.

"Nothing like that!" I defended.

"Yeah right.." Anamika said.

"Okay then, inform me agar koi priority notification aae toh!" I said and ended the call.

Hmm.. Yeh toh ho gaya.. What next?! Waise aapko shayad pata nahi hai ki main baking master hu. Khayenge?

Fine.. Main cake bake karti hu aap sab ke liye..! Chocolate cake..

"2 cup milk.. 2 tbl spoon all purpose flour.. Sugar.. Cocoa powder.. And mix mix mix..!" I mumbled to myself while preparing the cake batter.

Honestly.. I love baking.. It's kind of stress buster for me.. And right now, that's what I need the most..!

She poured the batter into a buttered baking tray and carefully placed it in the preheated oven. Timer was set to 15 mins.

Abb kya karein? Ummm.. Koi achhi si book padhte hai..!

She glanced at her book shelf and started looking for something nice to read. She ran her hand through the shelf, touching the covers of books when her hand touched Pride and Prejudice. She took out the book and opened it. She caressed the first page, Regards Zahir.

She closed her eyes with a deep sigh.


Aise kaise chalega Seher.. ?! Zahir ko bhulna bhi chahti ho aur nahi bhi... Unhe yaad bhi karna chahti aur nahi bhi.. Aise toh tum kabhi bhi apne decision pe kayam nahi reh paugi. Agar decide kiya hai, toh tumhe apne faisle pe tikna bhi padega.

Her trail of thoughts were broken by the door bell.

*Ting tong*

*Ting tong*

"Iss samay kaun aaya hoga?" I wondered as I unlocked the door carefully.

She was taken aback by the person standing at her door step.

"Aap? Yahan? Woh bhi iss waqt?" Was all I could murmur.

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Zahir's POV


Aaj ka din bahout important hai.. Mere liye.. Seher ke liye.. Aur humare rishte ke liye.. Aaj kuch bhi ho jaye main saari sachhai janke rahunga..! Main apne har sawal ka jawab lunga... Inn chaar dino mein maine ek baat realize karli hai ki Seher ke bina meri zindagi adhuri hai...and main use convince kar lunga.

Don't worry.. Mera use pressurise karne ka koi iraada nahi hai.. Na he koi zor zabardasti ka.. Maine simply usse ek strong reason maang na hai..aur kuch bhi nahi ! Valid reason milta hai toh chapter wahin close aur agar nahi..toh use Mrs Zahir banne se koi nahi rok sakta..! He smiled at his own thoughts.. Mrs Zahir!


He drove through the streets of Mumbai with his fingers tapping the steering in the anticipation of the upcoming important moment of his life. He parked his car outside the Seher's apartment and stepped out. He checked himself in the rear view mirror and adjusted his BurBerry watch.

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He stood in front of her door. He rubbed his sweating palms and with a deep breath he pressed the door bell. After two bells, she opened the door and as expected she was shocked to see him. She was looking amazing as always. Fresh and gorgeous, in plain white kurta and blue denims with a scarf wrapped around her neck. Her long black hair tied in a bun.

I just don't understand her love for scarfs..I mean ghar mein bhi? But her collection is amazing for sure.

"Aap? Yahan? Iss waqt?" She managed utter.

"Haan kyu? Main nahi aa sakta?" I asked.

"Nahi..!" She blabbered.

"Nahi?!"

"Mera matlab of course aap aa sakte hai.. Bas I'm surprised!" She covered up.

"Andar aa jau ? Yaa yahin khada rakhogi ?" I said, enjoying her state was nervousness.

"Yes please..!" She said as she opened the door wide for me.

I was about to say something but suddenly there was a beep like a timer went off.

"Ahh.. My cake..! Aap please baithiye main abhi aai" she said, but before she could leave.

"Main baithne nahi aaya hoon.. Whatever you're doing finish it fast and get ready. Hume site pe jana hai.. Tum chutti pe thi isliye ghar aana pada.. " I said, rather coldly. She stood there, surprised by my behavior.

Good.. Very good Zahir! I mentally applauded myself.

"I guess tumne sahi se suna nahi! We need to hurry.. !" I said.

"I'm sorry...! Aap chalo..main bas abhi aayi.." She replied.

"Better! I'm waiting for you downstairs!" I said and left, not letting her speak anything else.

He stood near his black beauty with his Ray Ban's on! He was checking mails on his BlackBerry. Suited in light blue shirt and beige trousers, he was surely attracting quite a lot female attention.

Two young girls passing by were fan girling. "Haaye.. Kitna handsome banda hai yaar!" One of them squealed.

"Handsome?! Please.. He's qaatil !" The other one exclaimed with a sigh.

He heard their convo and smiled looking up from his BlackBerry.

"Look..look..he smiled! Tauba..!" The girls said excitedly.

Seher who had arrived by now, looked on irritated or rather jealous. She waited to be noticed but gave up soon. She cleared her throat in utter irritation. "Chalein?!" She asked.

He was doing that intentionally and you know why!

Kya baat.. Madam jealous hai?! Not a bad start..! I celebrated my first win with a mischievous grin.

"Sir?! Abb der nahi ho rahi?" She snapped me out of my thoughts.

"Hmm.." I said as I unlocked the car. She secured her seat. Before settling down in the car, I waved them good bye, ignited the engine and drove away.

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Seher's POV

Qaatil...?! Kitni besharam ladkiyaan hai aaj kal..? Kisi bhi mard ko hot, handsome, qaatil bolne lagti hai... Aur Zahir? Kaise smile kar rahe the unhe dekhke..! Aur toh aur good bye bhi kiya..? Matlab.. Hadd hai yaar! I fumed in anger as he drove to the destination.

She glanced at him. He was looking qaatil, true! Blue color was looked heavenly on him with his muscles peeping out.

He noticed her watching him intently. "Aise ghurogi toh nazar lag jaayegi mujhe.. I know main kaafi handsome hu!" He said in a flirting tone.

Her cheeks turned crimson red. She looked away embarrassed.

Uff.. Seher! Control yourself... Abb kaun besharam hai ? I mentally scolded myself.

Waise iss adami ki samajh nahi aa rahi mujhe..! Ghar par itna rude tha.. Aur abb? Abb dekhein janab ko, flirt kar rahe hai !

Soon enough they reached the site. He parked the car and they stepped out. He put on his Ray Bans.

"Design mein thodi confusion hai.. Tum ek kaam karo, engineers ko jaake thik se samjha do! I'll join you in a while." He said.

"Okay sir!" I replied and went ahead to the engineers.

She was checking through the building designs and work progress in this week, when an engineer came up to her.

"Ma'am, yeh cement contract renew karna hai, toh aap ek baari contract papers thik se padh lijiye aur boss ke sign karva lijiye!" The engineer said.

"Thik hai, Sharma Ji main dekh leti hu!" I said while taking the papers from him.

She walked to the Zahir's office and knocked.

"Come in!" He called out from inside.

She pushed the door open and along with her entered a boy with a steaming cup of coffee. Zahir was too engrossed in his file. The boy handed him the mug but it slipped and all the hot content of cup spilled on Zahir's hand.

"Ouch!!" He sumwat screamed as he began moving his hand to and fro to lessen the burning sensation.

"Zahir..!!" I freaked out as I rushed by his side. "Aap thik toh hai?" I asked worried and grabbed his hand to have a look at the burns. His hand was all red, while the boy who brought the coffee stood there with his hands folded begging forgiveness.

"Kya kar rahein ho yaar?! Haath jal gaya inka.. dhyan kahan rehta hai? Aise kaam karte hai..?" I began scolding the boy unstop.

"It is fine, Seher!" Zahir tried to calm me.

"What fine? Haath dekhein apna.. kitna laal ho gaya hai.. Murgan!" I was nearly in tears seeing his hand. "Abb yahan kyu khade ho.. thanda paani lekar aao!" I scolded the boy again.

The boy nodded and left in a hurry. She tried touching the burns but backed off as he winced in pain.

"So..or.r...y!" I fumbled with my words but didn't left his hand.

They boy soon appeared with a bowl of ice water and left. Seher dipped his hand in the ice water gently and carefully. "Abhi thik ho jayega !" Assuring him but it looked like she was assuring herself. Zahir smiled at her gesture as she applied the ointment. A wisp of hair was disturbing her again and again. He gently tucked the strand behind her ear and she froze. She finally realized their position. They were close.. really close.

"Kya abb bhi tum yeh he kahogi that you don't love me?" he whispered in her ear huskily.

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Zahir's POV

Kuch clear ho yaa na ho.. Ek baat toh saaf hai.. That she loves me. Shayad jitna main usse pyaar karta hu usse kayi jyada...Magar kuch hai jo use rok raha hai.. Aur mujhe woh he Janna hai.

He couldn't help but smile at her innocence. She stopped and looked at him.

"Kya hua? Ruk kyu gayi.? Dawai lagao!" I said with a mischievous glint.

Like an obedient child, she resumed applying ointment on his burns.

"Haan.. Toh main kya keh raha tha? Yes.. Abb toh tumhe shayad apni statement badal ni padegi..!"

"Aisa kuch nahi hai..! Main aapke liye concern hu kyunki aap mere boss hai.. Usse jyada aur kuch nahi..!" She replied, firm in her point.

Ahhaa.. I like it.. Itni stubbornness... Woh bhi tab when you have lost it completely.. Good going Mrs Zahir... Takkar ki hai boss!

"Main concern ki baat nahi kar raha.. Main toh inn aansuo ki baat kar raha hu.." I replied as I wiped the corner of her eye.

"Main iss dard ki baat kar raha hu jo tumhari aakhon mein dekh raha hai...mujhe taqleef mein dekh ke!" I said as she pretended as if she is least concerned.

"Jee nahi !" she replied still adamant.

"Jee haan! Kab tak khud se jhoot bologi ?" I probed her further.

"Main jhoot nahi bolti!" she replied firm.

"Aaj tak main bhi yeh he samajhta tha..! Par main galat tha.." I said.

"Sir.. please !" She said as she backed off. "Yeh cement contract renew karne ke liye papers hai... aap please check karke sign kar dijiyega !" She added and began to leave.

"Seher, jhoot bolna asaan hai... magar chhupa na bahout mushkil...I know you love me and I will make you confess... I promise!"

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That's it !!

Truth in next part ! πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome Update Nandu!! πŸ€—
Seher's Concern's For Zahir!! 😳😳 And then she says she doesn't loves him.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Yeah Right! πŸ˜‰ Loved How she got all jumpy when Zahir burned his hand..!! Good Going Zahir! She'll come out of her insecurities soon! ⭐️⭐️

Thanx Fr Pm. Update Soon.😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
Wow! Such awesome update!! πŸ‘ Emotional ups and downs of Zahir and Seher.. Liking it.

Good going Zahir ⭐️

Waiting for the past.. I am sure it will be equally entertaining..
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