Originally posted by: enaluvfiction
are wah eye locks shuru ho gye finally but seriously pratap kitna dumb hai ... jaise saubhayawati ne 1 baar kaha tha "kuch bhi nahi samjhate" waise bone ka Mann kar raha hai
Ajab kitne hint degi kuch to catch karo yaar 😉 😕
anyway story k twist n turns interesting hote ja rahe hai bus aur dikhao aur dikhao
Chapter 21
Subhagyawati sat in her cabin overlooking the final arrangement engagement was in 2 days and she would travel to the farmhouse later that afternoon to do a final check on things. She had a lot of work to do on the wedding front as well as on the mission front - Mission to capture Baadshah Khan and Mehmood Shah, mission to expose the groom from ruining another innocent life. She took a deep breath as her past events came to life
A young woman all decked in her bridal attire was stunned as the bank people stood in front of her claiming that all her property, investments and every penny had been withdrawn a couple of hours earlier. They had the paperwork with her signature on it as well
Subho: Baba trust me I don't know how this happened
Baba: Don't know (he roared) Subhagyawati you sold everything just to get back at me for getting you married against your wishes
Subho: No baba I won't ever do that - you know me
Baba: No I don't know you and I don't even want to know you. Get out of here and never return back. You're dead to me just like your mother
She had cried for days trying to understand where she had gone wrong? Yes she didn't want to get married as she wanted to fulfil her dreams but then on her father's insistence she had agreed for the wedding. Trusted the unknown man that had been chosen for her and did everything that was asked of her- including giving him each and every detail of her bank accounts -
Beta her mother-in-law said in her honey dipped voice now everything will be shared between you and him na. Your dream will be his and his dream will be yours.
She shouldn't have given him any details she had beaten herself over this - he had taken away every hard earned single penny which she was saving for her dream. Her dream to become the best wedding planner there was seen in the entire Asian continent but all her dreams had shattered.
Reaching rock bottom hits you hard but it also makes you realise who the most important people are - her fingers traced the photo frame that carried a picture of two girls smiling as they stood in front of her office the day it was inaugurated - the place had seen some major renovations over the last three years. Now considered as one of the sort after wedding planner Subho handled her work via office and made her staff do the rest but when Ajabde had called her and said
Ajabde: I found him and it's time to take him down she hadn't been able to resist herself and did everything for the main event herself. They had tracked down 15 other girls the man and his family had looted - all of them were going to meet and greet the groom once he sets foot on the stage.
Thinking of all the fun things planned she realised that Ajabde's company had rubbed off on her. Ajabde Punwar was a mystery for everyone who met her as none of they knew the real her - who would think that the girl who was pretending to be a witness of a crime was actually a master criminal herself. This fun loving girl who enjoyed all the small moments could transform into a notorious gang leader within seconds and no one would be able to figure out how? - Ajabde was her support during the initial days once she had left home after the fiasco, Ajabde had blamed herself for not being there but she remembered her promise
Ajabde: I promise you Bhago I will find this guy and humiliate him in front of the entire world for hurting you. He will not be killed but I will make his life a personal hell and he will pray for death every single second
And then Ajabde found out about the Khan Brothers and their drug business - a stern expression came on her face when she recalled how young children were being supplied with drugs and how close they had come in losing them to addiction. Ajabde would not spare them and their drugs for sure and Bhgo was just happy that she would be able to help her take them down after all she was BaijiLal's right hand and her only partner-in-crime
A ring made her smile - everything was set for the D-Day. It's time for some party
FARMHOUSE
Pratap was happy to meet his friend Akbar also known as Jalal in their gangster world. Both of them had been trained together and were considered the best of their batch be it academics or physical activity both of them competed only to have everything come to a tie every single time they had a match- Bairam Khan lovingly called as Khan Baba by all the children blessed all the kids and hugged Maan and Chand. Bairam and Sangram went to discuss a few matters in the study while everyone else was put to work even Ajabde who was ordering Pratap on how to decorate and do the task
Ajabde: Pratap chadho ladder and latkao lights theek se
Pratap: uske liye electrician ke bande hain
Ajabde: haan par size dekha hai farmhouse ka bechaare kitne tired hain- thodi help karo. I promise tum kar loge . Chadho ab jaldi jaldi phir tumko seating arrangements bhi dekhni hai
Pratap: Main tumhe kya lagta hoon?
Ajabde: Kitni baar ek sawaal poochte ho tum - lagta hai short term memory loss ka problem hai ek dum Ghajini ki tarah
Pratap: Ghajini?
Ajabde: Aamir Khan ki super hit movie jismein wog taklu tha - waise tum lagte bhi ussi ki tarah ho bas takle ho jao toh bilkul Ghajini part 2 ban jaoge
Pratap shook his head and climbed the ladder as he made sure the twinkling lights hung properly from the railing while Shakti handled the upper part from the roof top. It took them nearly 2 hours to get everything straightened and lights hung on the front side while the rest of the guys handled the main area were the party was going to take place. The ladies were busy preparing small thaals which were to be given to all the guests under the careful eyes of GD and PD. No one from the family had seen the main area of the function - Subhagyawati had promised them she would do a reveal later in the evening so as to give them the feel of it and everyone was excited for it.
It was only afternoon when all the kids sat together just doing nothing when Akbar made a mention about Pratap's wedding
Ajabde (curiously): You are telling me ki Pratap ki shadi ki baat chali thi?
Chand: Last full year Dada bhai ki shaadi ki baatein hi toh ho rahi thi
Shakti: Haan and kitna mazaa aaya na hum sab ko
Maan: New clothes, jewellery literally every 3month
Ajabde (confused): Hein? Agar baat chali toh pakki ho gayi kya? (she didn't understand why she felt a pang at the thought of Pratap being with someone else)
Vikram and the others hid their smiles while Pratap looked annoyed
Pratap: Change the topic (gruffly)
Ajabde: Nope - mereko jaana hai- kiske saath pakki hui thi? Kya hua tha?Sab kuch - kholo iski pol bolo mereko kaun hai woh jiske saath hui fix tumhaari shaadi
Akbar: Alright - hum sab divide karte hain story - Chand you begin
Chand: Haan toh ek saal puraani baat hai Badi Daadimaa thi hospital mein admit jab unhone kholi apni akhiri wish -dekhna chahti thi who dada bhai ki shaadi iss wajah se hui yeh kahaani. Aaye rishte khoob saare but short select hui sirf 4 and who charo thi itni mahaan ki kya bataaein
Ajabde: Naam bolo unka pehle
Maan: Champa
Shakti: Solankhini
Vikram: JasoBai
Akbar: Phool Kanwar
Maan: Champa Bai thi Badi Daadimaa ke village head ki beti jo unke saamne hui thi badi par kuch time ke liye who gayi thi padne bahaar jahaan ho gaya unko pyaar. Jab baat chali shaadi ki toh elders ke saamne who chup thi and shuru kar di gayi tayyari - mile new clothes, jewellery and bahut saare gifts and hua engagement ke liye hall bhi fixed. Engagement waale din function ke shuru hone ke kuch ghante pehle hi mili ek CD jismein tha message
Champa: Pratap ji humne aapko itne saare hints diye par aap hi nahi samjhe
Bola tha humne aapko ki pasand hai Chinese Humko
Chahe khaana ho ya toy
Chinese hi hai meri choice
Main nahi kar sakti aap ke saath sagaai
Ho Hi Chan hi hai meri zindagi ka saathi
Umeed karti hoon aapko mile apna pyaar
But I'm sorry ki who main nahi thi mere yaar
Bye Bye everyone
Main shift ho rahi hoon Beijing
Wahan khola hai humne apna Chowmein ka stall
China aao toh zaroor aana
Khilayenge free mein hum khaana
Ajabde eyes were wide open but she controlled her laughter while Pratap just shook his head when Shakti began with the next part
Shakti: Solankhini was very different from Champa
She was brought up in Canada
Aayi thi for holiday jab Dada bhai and hum sab usse first time mile
Pehli mulaakat mein kiya usne Badi Daadi maa ko impress
Phir kya tha shuru ho gayi quest
Bana liya unko future daughter-in-law
Hume kya pata tha ki uska affair chal raha tha with the law
Phir se mile gifts and hui tayyari but this time because Solankhini ki new mom was Punjabi rakhi gayi Roka ki rasm
Par hua aisa function jisne rok di sab ki breath
Solankhini ka ex aa dhamkaa wahan and bola
Mere bina jee nahi paogi yahan
Hua full fledged Romeo and Juliet
But end nikle who bhaag thanks to Dada bhai ki brand new car
Ajabde was hodling her stomach as she rolled in laughter while Pratap looked in annoyance and shuru hua teesra kissa jab Vikram bola
Vikram: 3rd girl thi Jaso Bai who was usually quiet
Kuch na boli kuch na kaha usne
Chupakar rakha raaz apne seene mein
Unko pasand kiya tha Badi Daadimaa ne dekhkar online
Photo dekhkar hi GD ne Karli decide ki banegi woh Dada bhai ki wife
Plan ki gayi first meeting with a twist
Gaye milne dada bhai unko akele and wahan par padh gaye lene ke dene
Fake profile thi online par uski
DP mein lagi deepika
Par nikli Rakhi Sawant
Dada bhai ko laga jhatka aur woh wahan se satka
Kisi tarah jaan bachaai and uske sar par waiter ki tray giraayi
And nikle wahan se aise jaise na gaye ho uss jagah par pehle
Jabde had tears streaming down her eyes as she laughed at Pratap's plight when she looked at Akbar who looked serious
Akbar: ab hai baari uski jisne dali thi daraar par thank God mein tha yahan and bachaa liya maine apna yaar
Phool Kanwar Rathore
Ajabde: The super-model?
Akbar: Haan wohi Phool Kanwar Rathore (t the mention of her full name everyone ducked their faces as their bodies were shaking and even Pratap was trying hard not to laugh) Ajabde was excited to know her story
Akbar: First time Phool ever met GD and the rest of the family was at a charity event wahan par GD was so impressed that she sang her praises non-stop
Doodh si safed
Itni patli
Model hai toh rahegi sundar sundar yeh sundari
And phir GD started talking of marriages and unhone toh Pratap and Phool ke bacchon ke name bhi sochne shuru kar diye but Pratap ki kismet mein na likhi shaadi ya koi Jeevan saathi
Ajabde: Kyun?
Maan: Phool ko pasand the phool (flowers)
Chnd: Saath mein grass bhi
Vikram: Isiliye toh uski nazarein takraayein and ho gaya pehli nzar ky pyaar
Shakti: With the new gardener mere yaar
Ajabde: Usko maali se pyaar ho gaya!!!!!
At this everybody rolled with laughter including Pratap who shook his head with a smile on his face
Akbar: Ajabde he was a landscape artist apparently jo Indian gardening style ko apne portfolio mein add karna chahta tha
Ajabde: Landscape artist my foot- he toh is a maali. Kya Pratap maali se haar gaye tum
Chand: Arey accha hua warna Dada bhai ko khaane mein ghaas phoos hi milta
Ajabde: So let me get this straight - Pratap ke liye choose ki gayi 4 girls and Charon mein se ek ke sathbhi na fix hua tumhara kaanta - no worries Sagaai mein aane waali girls mein se ek choose kar lenge tumhaare liye
Pratap: Koi zaroorat nahi hai. Maaf karo mujhe
Ajabde jumps in front of him: Kyun??? Koi pasand aa gayi kya??
Pratap (turns red): Nahi toh...aisa kuch nahi hai...
Ajabde: Toh kaisa hai??? Bolo bolo
Pratap!!!
The call saved Pratap as he rushed towards the person calling him while Akbar made a realisation with regards to his friend and knew that it was up to him to get Pratap talking
Originally posted by: enaluvfiction
what an interesting narration about the girls 👏 pratap laal ho gya sharam se
ajab k karam se
kyuki tanka to ussi she bhidega
ajab k bina pratap ko koi aur nahi chalega
bus yahi samjhana hai pratap ko jalal ki help se
I know bad it is... phir bhi try karne me kya jata hai
amazing work as always 🤗
Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Nice chapter Garima
I feel bad for Shubhgawati😭So Ajabde is a gangster😲Loved four Girl's stories🤣
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