HIS LITTLE BRIDE-a manan story part 11 pg 87 - Page 8

pinky

@kimnana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

how he was mesmerized by her beauty ...she is already scared

principal he is afraid too

thanx for pm

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Afiiiieee

@Afiiiieee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

It was awesome start dr ... 👏 👏
Looks like many twist and turns in ur story ... 😉 😉
We are eagerly waiting for it ...
Keep on updating ... .. 🤗 😳 😳
Always stay blessed and happy.. 🤗 [:D/] 🤗

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anglruchi

@anglruchi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Pl long updat this is vry small

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

This manik is looking very scary. Nandni is looking full of life girl. It seems very interesting. ..I am liking it very much. ..try to write little bit more long😛. But you're writing very good. Thanks for pm. Thanks for sharing this with us.⭐️

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SNEHA

@snow_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

okay...this is something different

very much different 😲

dint imagine like this😕...i mean problem is manik ko imagine nahi kar sakte aisa may be thats y🤔

but would definitely like to read more😊

thoda sa scary hai...i know u have already mentioned it that it is grey

but want to read more of your story...because its still in its initial stage

dont want to predict now kya hone wala hai n all...keeping the patience

all the best👍🏼

waiting for the update 😊

Edited by snow_remix - 9 years ago

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Tishyy

@Tishyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Interesting and the best part is u know what u r doing with ur plot
U write bfully
Looking fwd to the next update... Yeh bhi chotu update that ;)))

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rupmanan1

@rupmanan1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

nooo esheee bhi bada wala update hona ... but i like the concept & m looking forward ...

pliz next part ...

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Wow..it was awesome...but ye chotu sa tha update..plz nxt tym lamba update...sach mein manik bht scary hai princi v darr rha hai...lovd it..update soon

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Anushi

@anushi3012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Hey thanks for the chapter one!!!

Really liked it, since we already got an idea of Manik's character.

And dark Manik is justice to his character.

Don't worry about the age difference when it's Manan!!

So, he wants Nandini, and of course, Nandini won't give up easily.

Can't wait for further update, please please make it longer .

Thanks for the pm and THANK YOU for still keeping Manan alive.

Keep it up!!!

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pihu

@epshitatabassum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

I'm loving it

Plz u can update regular

awesome

Fab

rock

Excellent

mind blowing

superb

Fantastic

surprise

nice

Amazing

beautiful

hit

update soonI'm waiting

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