HIS LITTLE BRIDE-a manan story part 11 pg 87 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
nice update dr!!!
did nandini's presence affect manik?
wtng 4r d cont ...
cont soon yar...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
i lyk it
but u update so chotu sa

make it long nxt tym

keep writing

update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Awesome
yeah u r right!
Their age difference is perfect
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#44
THE CONCEPT WAS AMAZING...DEAR...
THERE FIRST MEETING...AMAZING...AND GIRLS SCENE WAS ALSO NICE...
AND I DON'T HAVE PROBLEM WITH AGE DIFFERENCE...😊
CONT SOON
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Nyc cncpt... cntinue sooon plz..like it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Nice start...
Don't change anything in this ...write story in ur own way n with dat storyline only..
We will definitely gonna love it...
So for this waiting for next update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
That's great for starters! :)
Of course I trust u with the age thing... I'm sure its for the best!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Awesome n nyc update...lovd it
update nxt part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
I loved the concept. Awesome!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
update longer...much longer next time!
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