HIS LITTLE BRIDE-a manan story part 11 pg 87 - Page 27

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Posted: 9 years ago
1stly im vry sry was late in replyin dear as i was out of statn...just came today mornin...
Till now its going awesome...really lovin it...no worries dear tk ur time...we r alwys thr for u :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
she is still in hospital...plz pray for her. she have written it sitting in the hospital itself...plz be kind enough to like n comment...I m her sister n only will take credit for typing n posting the part...

Guilty pleasures...

Manik's pov...

It has been a month i've been back from manali, away from my little bride. These days have been nothing but pure tortures for me. I'm missing her terribly. Turning n tossing on my bed its only her thoughts that are invading my space tonight. Suddenly a knock at my door broke my thoughts...

Bhai???

M : abhi...what happened?

Ab : woh bhai gupta project k liye kal immediately manali jana parega...toh main subha wali flight le lunga...

M : manali??? Kal?

Ab : haan bhai

M: err...abhi u don't need to go... i'll look after it...main chala jata hoon

Ab : bhai main bhi aap k saath chaloo? I could just learn from u...

M: ok toh tomorrow early morning

Ab: ok bhai[so my dear gf ...get ready for my surprise...] excited he runs out of manik's room

M : i wonder isse kya hua hai...y is he so excited...anyways...so miss murthy get ready to meet me once again...

Next morning...space academy..

A sulking Mukti was sitting in the first bench of her class. The other 3 were standing open mouth shocked by the scene. Muku in 1st bench...like seriously...?

N : hey muku...

Mu: hii[dryly]

An anxious navya pulls nandini n alya to the side...

Na: what happened to her?

N: how will i know..?

Al ; she is sitting in the first bench...omg..

Na: kuch toh gadbar hai...

N: oye acp pradyuman...dialouge mat mar...ja aur use pooch..

Na: muku gussa hai...y me?? Nandu tu ja...

N: main kyu??? Mujhe toh kuch nahi pata...

Al: lets go together guys...

Na: sometimes u make sense..

To mukti...

Na: muku??/

M: yea guys...

N: what happened...aise kyu baithi hai?

M: im upset...dont talk to me..

Al: kya hua? Usse fight?

M: don't talk about him...thik se baat nahi karta...once in a blue moon ph karta hai...it has been 3 months au eek bar mujhse milne bhi nahi aya...

Al: umm but woh toh...she abruptly stops as nandini n navya shows eyes...

M: woh kya...

N: kuch nahi muku...maybe he is busy u know.

M: accha so busy that he cant call his gf...

Na to N [i think use bata dete hai...he has planned something special n he is here by now]

[N: no ...when she will meet him n see the surprise, that happiness will be worth this frustration..]

Na: mukti aise udas mat ho...chal lunch pe jate hai...

Al: yea mukti chalo...

Na: nandu sab ready toh hai na...

N: oh no...main woh box room main bhool ayi...u ppl go ill bring it...

Al: ok..

Manik at Space ...

As i walked in this building this morning, I was strangely at peace. Well its true ..she is my sanity. Abhi came with me..but went somewhere from the airport, stating about some imp work...i wonder what he is upto. As i was trying to formulate a plan to get my little bride close i saw her going towards her hostel. I rushed in the same direction.

Nandini's thoughts...

As i was walking towards the dorm in hurry i suddenly started feeling uneasy. Something similar to what i felt that dreaded morning, when i met the monster. I turned back to see if anyone was following me, i saw none. I was seeing behind n walking when i bumped into someone. Looking up i could see my most dreaded nightmare standing infront of me. The monster is here. For a moment fear gripped my heart, i just wanted to disappear, but then i just couldn't fall weak in front of him.

M: hi beautiful...[smirks] its so good to see u after so long...i missed u.

N: glares at him...for me its equally bad to see u[smirks evilly]

M: hmm...trying to be funny my darling..

N: not funny but mean..but it seems u r too thick skinned to get that.

M: mean??/ well my sweetheart can be anything but mean...

N: listen...dont give me those names...i hate them...im no sweetheart.

M: [holds her hands tightly behind her back n pulls her close]u r MY sweetheart...i can call u anything u cant object...he blows air on her lips.

N: leave...kya kar rahe ho...[she is struggling in his hold]

M: kyu tum samajh nahi rahi ho ki man kya kar raha hoon[smirks]

Manik suddenly pulls her into a room, well to be precise her room.

N: kya kar rahe ho...get out of my room.

M: hmm...nice room...which one is your bed?

N: what?

M: hmm this...[the bedside had nandini's pic of childhood] u still look equally innocent[ lost in her pic]

N: kya...

M: huh...nothing..btw nice room

N: dekh liya room...chalo niklo ab..

M:[Coming close to her]...hamesha mujhe kudse push kyu karte rahiti ho tum...?

They are standing so close that as Manik bends their noses touch. Looking into his eyes nandini is lost coming closerhe brushes his lips with hers.

She closes her eyes as a different sensation passes through her...she is lost in this different world. He presses his lips on her , she too lost in this world responds by pressing her lips a bit more. A gentle, soft meeting of lips follows. Their tongues meet , they wrestle for dominance. Tasting each other they explore this new feeling. Her hands reach for his hairs, his finds their way to her waist. What started as a gentle kiss, turns passionate with each passing moment. His hands goes into her shirt, he touches her skin for the first time. As he strokes her waist she suddenly comes back to her senses. She is shocked with their position. She pushes him away. From his world of passion he comes back. He again feels rejected. She rejects him again. His eyes red, he is angry.

N; what the hell?? Kyu kar rahe ho aisa...just get lost...[she is shouting as tears makes way out of her eyes]

M: main...? wll let me tell u ...u were equally a part as much a me n u enjoyed equally[smirks]

N: no it was a mistake...u just destroyed my first kiss...do u realise that[saying she runs out of the room]

She is more angry on herself than on him...she knows that hers was equal participation as his...she is guilty of this pleasure...of her momentary passion for someone she don't love...a tale of her guilty pleasure...

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Posted: 9 years ago
I love how Nandini stands strong in front of Manik.. But she slipped big time here
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsm update.
get well soon dr.
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's a surprise ... he visited back.
Manik missed her badly. ..😊.
Now nandni to equally partner in crime. .😳.
Manik is in love from ages.. so he behaved like this.
But nandni is also right. ..because she thinks
He is a mere stalker. She doesn't know what
relationship he shares with her. ..
This is one amazingπŸ˜›. Story I enjoyed a lot.
Awesome plot wonderful story line. ...
I just loved it each and every details
of this chapter. .
I was always waiting for your updates.

Get well soon dear..πŸ˜›.

May God bless you with health and happiness. πŸ˜›.πŸ˜›.

Take a good care of your self.

And come back with full energy ..

I will be waiting. .πŸ˜›.

Thanks for sharing this beautiful update.

And special thanks to your sisterπŸ˜›.
who gives her writing skills and
We be able to read this awesome update. πŸ‘.⭐️.❀️.

P.s. Thanks for p.m.











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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
Manik aur abhi manali mein
Mukti ka bf abhi hai interstng
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aditi di...
Get well soon ...
Amazing part .. manan kissed !!
And thankx caz u r thinking of us in dis cndition also ..
And di ke sis 😳
Thankx fr giving us a update ..
Get well soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
i have a feeling manik loves her deep down and can't live without her...but has a problem with rejection and loneliness...so when ver she pushes him away he finds ways to be close to her through anger...
maybe nandu also has feelings for manik...she felt different with the kiss...also in childhood she rejected manik only because he wouldn't play with the doll house...
can't wait to see what happens next...keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
take care dearπŸ˜›

plz make manik bahave nice to nadu..he is so rude...


mikti and abhi,,,hey i like it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
May she get well soon...

And chapter was damm amazing...
Actually I loved the characters so much...
Cont. Soon
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