HIS LITTLE BRIDE-a manan story part 11 pg 87 - Page 21

Created

Last reply

Replies

579

Views

225k

Users

192

Likes

1.9k

Frequent Posters

Thatgirl16 thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago

PEEKING INTO HER HEART:

I hate weekends. I just hate them, cuz i have to come home. Its compulsory for my family. Uff this parents i tell u!! Though they sit n fight yet they want me at home. And when not fighting they r into each other like romeo Juliet n never attentive towards me.

But what is keeping me alert that this weekend its something different. I can just smell it in the air. Like its something serious...something bad. Mom unlike her usual self is spending the whole day with me. Dad is suddenly over-affectionate towards me. They even took me shopping. Like both of them together, n they dint even fight. Though I'm happy i wonder if they have finally gone mad. Hehe my sense of humour lol.

Anyways back at school everything is sorted. Im back to my happy phase. That monster human went away. I hope he never returns ever again. He went away 2 days back. N to celebrate that happiness I n alya had tried to have bottle of beer. But navya caught us n we were given a lecture on legal age of lcohol in India...uff this girl. Im happy at present n we all have sorted our careers. Guess what..we all will be in the same industry. Im szo happy for us. Bus boards in 2 months n we will be to my dream city Mumbai. My parents are sceptical about this Mumbai thing... but i know ill manage them.

So all in all im happy exited n at peace(the most important thing that i lost because of that monster giraffe)

Edited by aditi16 - 9 years ago
Thatgirl16 thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago

MEANWHILE IN THE BIG BAD WORLD:

Creations , Mumbai :

(Enters the most loved cabiraaa)

C : Manik work done. Abhi is back.

A: hey bhai...as u have said i personally went there to supervice the whole process. Took every info about this Murthy family n even made sure to drop the confidential file to them

M: good job abhi, cabir.

A: but bhai who are these muthy ppl. I don't remember their name in any business venture. Moreover what was the hurry that u made me take private jet to manali immediately after ur return from there?

M: relax abhi u will get to know everything on time. Now go home and take rest.

Abhi takes the cue n leaves.

C: what are u doing manik ? why?

M: its a contract and it has to be fulfilled. Ther is no way out of it.

C: aur tu ye bhi janta hai ki agar tu chahe toh ye nab hi ho sakta hai. Do u realise she is a kid.

M: but i want it. She is my right , my hak i wont just let her reject me once again. She cant just step on me n walk away, like everyone else. She has to be mine.

C: u will destroy her , plz let her go, free her.

M: discussion over cabir. He turns towards the glass wall at overlooks the whole city from his 28th floor office.

C: ok i'll leave...but remember that u will regret it...

M(thoughts) no cabir i wont.I'll keep her happy. I'll put the whole world at her feet for her happiness. I'll do everythin for my doll my little bride to be.

Nyonika - Harshad convo...,.

Ny: he is upto something..

H: what do u mean?

Ny: he reached her...he knows where she is.

H: but how is it possible? U know they did not have any link attached that can take him to her...to them. We covered it all pretty good. U might just be wrong.

Ny: no i'm not...i heard it myself ...he was aking principal about her. If he finds her , he will find our daughter too...(crying)

H: relax...we will track down the principal. I'll do something.

Ny: yes plz do something harshad. Should we go to manali?

H: no nyonika i cant take u to manali...that place can just hurt u n nothing else.

precap: they meet again...

Ok finally updated. The only advice I'll give my reader is. Don't conclude anything from this chapter. Most characters are grey in shade. No one is outright evil. Nandini is a young girl she too like us is adventurous crazy but have a heart of gold. She too will make her share of mistakes with time.

ABOUT NANDINI'S BACKGROUND: as a writer I'm just going to pass on a msg. Yes disturbed family background does make a person different. With time u will see all of these shades in Nandini too. Plz inform if u don't like me adding Nandini's disturbed background.

Lastly plz shower ur love n blessings on me in form of likes n comments...

Aditi J

Edited by aditi16 - 9 years ago
anglechotti thumbnail
Anniversary 8 Thumbnail Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
First one to like and comment because I m eagerly waiting for this update and y did it amazingly...
Story is getting veryyy veryyy intresting day by day...
I m waiting for the day when nandini will get to know about darkest secret of her life...
An hw will she react...
Please please please continue soon Can't wait further it's impossible for me to wait...
Love you a lottt for giving us such an amazing manan story...
Continue soon asap...
Keep smiling and rocking as always...
kimnana thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
wow lovely childhood sweetheart ...manik will never take no for an answer
he will meet her soon ...waiting for next update
ty for pm
shonUle thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update. Chhotasa tha but nice tha...
kimnana thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
wow lovely childhood sweetheart ...manik will never take no for an answer
he will meet her soon ...waiting for next update
ty for pm
he will not be stopped by anyone ...now nandani's reaction when she will meet him
[/
kitkat5756 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 2 Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Aditi thanks for the pm and lovely update sweetheart... The update were really nice..love all the characters in ur story ... Don't wrry loving the flow of the story... Hope gradually witH lots of twists anD turns the brighter side of the story starts..we are loving nandu's disturbed background that's y she is different...continue soon ..sryy for chotu da comment ..next time inshallah will try to give big Wala comment ...love u meri jaan ...tc...with lots of love and hugs
millie17 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chp...manik is helm bent to make nandini his own...
Poor nandu... c really is a kid...although manik loves hr or should I say infatuated twrds hr...still d world of both of them.r too diff...
It wl b a hard task fr u to show hw both cms together n falks in lv...so gud luck in advns gl...

Yar I hv 1 request...plz plz plz try to gv us lamba wala updt... dis 1 ws 2 short..natlab bahut he chotu sa tha...plz uptd lamba wala chp nxt tim if u cn...

Thnx fr d pm...
Continue soon..
Thatgirl16 thumbnail
Anniversary 12 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 9 years ago
a little bit... I want to start by saying...guys I love u all... ur comments makes my day. I understand about the length of the update...but each part unravels some story...n gives way to a new mystery... i genuinely tried increasing the length but that makes it boring n gives away some thing that is not meant for the particular part... I hope u all will understand ...I will update regularly though...
aditi
Nandini_goyal thumbnail
Anniversary 13 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
Hey!
I hope you attended to your course work first. :)

The part was pretty good... first Manik's POV, then Nandini's.. I wonder why her parents were so attentive towards her, and that too all of a sudden.

Nyonika and Harshad are worried too...

every update you leave me with a plethora of questions.

In hope of finding answers to all the questions soon
tc
:)
Top