HIS LITTLE BRIDE-a manan story part 11 pg 87 - Page 17

sakkhorsaha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

OMG! Manik and Navya brother and sister.

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Afiiiieee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Superb update dr loved it, ... 👏 👏 😳 😳
U penned it perfectly ... 😉
It was an shocking revelations ...
Waiting eagerly for the next update dr...
Thank u for the pm dr ... 🤗 [:D/]
Always stay blessed and happy... 🤗 👏

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unnatishukla241

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Ohh so this is the story behind all this

Hehehee manik malhotra is being rejected

I like it

Cont soon

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Jyoti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

This is really a big surprise.

He is a mangeter of nandni.

Her would be husband.

Navy a is his sister.

I found this chapter is very important and beautifully explained.

You story is very good

But try to post regular then you will see everyone will loved it.

I tou just loved it's each and every word.

Thanks for update.

Stay happy and healthy.

Update soon. ..can't wait to read more.

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anglechotti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Nw the suspense is revealed...

Nw I got to know why manik is attachted towards her...

This revealion give me a bit shock but nw this story is getting really really veryyy intresting day by day and I am enjoying it really...

Please please please continue soon Can't wait further it's just amazing . ..

This one is really very small update but I knew u will compensate with big one...

Believe me ur story is completely different from others and if u will continue it on time to time u will see the people getting mad for it...

I can bet you on that...

Love you a lottt for this amazing story of our own manan...

Keep smiling and rocking as always...

And yehhh ofcourse don't forget to give us an amazing update asap will be egaraly waiting . ..

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millie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Ooo...so manik knows nandu since c wsa child n they were meant to b married...nice...
N navya is manik's sis...OMG...

Yar updt itna chotu sa...nt fair...
Plz gv usa lamba wala updt nxt tim..n soon...plz..

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mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Awesome update

Manik knows nandini since her childhood and navya is his sister and manik and nandini were gonna get married

Update the next part soon

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Kuushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Important revelations..this chapter gave some insight to the back story which was necessary as manik seeing nandini and chasing her seemed weird... I mean when the principal didn't want nandini near him as he knew abt malhothra men this was mentioned in earlier chapter and that led me to think he behaved like this with other girls too and he was a pervert..I was little hesitant about the story but glad I read this chapter as it gave the reason behind his chase and it kind of elevated his character..I understand he is still monster though and few chapters will be dark and manan age gap is still hard to come to terms with but I like the way the story is progressing and will be an avid reader from now..so navya is his sister cool Guess he will meet her when she joins college or after completing studies..looking forward to read more of the story..please continue soon with a long update and pm me if possible :)

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srija-n

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Wow ...
Manik's baby !! Amazing ...
He felt bad ...
Nandini and manik .. both knew each other ...
Awsm update ...
Bt too short na yr ...
Waiting fr next update... plz update soon ... :-)

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vaishnavi911

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

amazing update

try to make longer update

coz i love your story

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