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Awesome update
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Originally posted by: aditi16

This beautiful banner is made by aleena (cute-aly)... I'm overwhelmed by this gesture of aleena...love u reπŸ‘
THIS STORY IS SOMEWHAT GREY SHADED...VIEWERS DISCRETION ADVISED...PLZ DON'T COME LATER TO BASH ME
THIS UPDATE IS DEDICATED TO ALEENA ...😳

An unpleasant meeting...

She ran out of princi's office...ran as fast as she could. Why wouldn't she afterall u don't encounter such horror everyday. Not looking anywhere she ran as tears are falling freely...tears of anger, helplessness n most importantly fear.

She was afraid of what happened..cuz she understood the depth of the incident, she was not naive.

While running she collided with someone...both fell down. Absolutely out of her senses..against her manners she stood up n ran again. But barely as she took a few steps when..

"Nandini"

She turned around to face her saviour...her bestie Mukti. Crushing into her friends embrace...holding her tight she breathed a sigh of relief...she wanted to cry freely out of her fear...wanted to speak about what happened few minuites ago, yet she couldn't ...as if someone stole her voice...

Mukti held her friend tightly in her embrace.

Mu: relax...relax...

As mukti was trying to calm Nandini , Navya and Alya came ...they are shocked seeing her condition...

Na: Nandu...(navya exclaims)

A: omg what happened to her?

Mu: guys use relax hone do..then lets talk...

As Nandini calmed down a bit, she spoke...

N: Guys I want to say u people something...its important..

A: yea Nandu say...

N: can we bunk this class...its urgent...

All 3 are alert cuz its not everyday, that Nandini Murthy request to bunk classes.

: yea sure..

The 4 move to their secret meeting place..

Nandini is sitting quietly..she didnot know where to start from...after waiting for several mins.

Na: Nandu are u okay???

N: no ...

Mu: kya hua hai ...bol na...

She narrates the whole incident...

A: but who was this man in princi's office?

N: our trusty MANIK MALHOTRA...

They are shocked...for several seconds they stood numb...they couldn't figure out that how their trusty can behave with a student like this...they tried to process this all in their minds.

A: par how does he even know u???

Mukti sighed in annoyance of alya's dumbness...

Mu: Alya he is the trusty...none of this is a problem for him...

Na: ye sab chodo...Nandu u just try to stay away from his sight...

Mu: yeah right ...n hum mein se koi ek hamesha tere saath rehenge...

N: par guys aise how long can we run...

Na: not long bus kuch hi din mein woh Mumbai wapas chala jayega...aur phir boards k baad hum bhi toh chale jayenge school se...toh woh tumhe bhool jayega..

Nandini was finally convinced that yes she can pass through this bad phase of her life... yet little did she know this is not a passing whimsy of a rich brat...but something much much more...satisfied with the plan to protect Nandini..the girls had their group hug...they moved to attend the next class.

Manik's cabin...

A call disturbs the monster of his Nandini filled thoughts..

M: hello...

(enters super hot Abhi Malhotra...the youngest Malhotra prince..)
Ab: bhai jo gupta contract tha woh...

M: speak abhi...

Ab: woh Harshad aur Mrs. Malhotra le gayi...

M: how can this happen...how...(he shouts..)

Ab: someone leaked the code...

M: u traced who leaked the code...

Ab: yea already done...

M: so u know what to do ...

Ab: yes bhai...out of the world for ditching manic malhotra...

M: exactly...no one gets away cheating me...evil smirk ...

Hangs up the call...

Classroom ...

T: Nandini plz help me in keeping the notebooks to 10B ..

Na: nandu tu ja hum tujhe follow kar rahe hai...

N: guys relax teacher k saath j rahi hoon...

A: no we are following..

As nandini and mam walks ahead the girls follow them ...

Peon: aap teeno ko princi ne bulaya...

Mu: ab princi hame kyu...

Peon: jaldi...urgent hai...

They unwillingly leaves...

T: arrange the books n go...

N: ok mam...

As she was arranging books,the lock sound of the door brought her out of her thoughts...turning around she met the most dreaded sight...Manik was standing in front of her...but instead of fear the only emotion she felt this time was anger.

N: u...again..

M: yes doll..we meet again...

N: unfortunately...

Her attitude irks Manik...but he tries to control his anger.

M: tell me what have u thought of my proposal... I like u...n what about ur little army where are they...shouldn't they be here protecting u from me...

She is shocked..

N: how...u..know that?

M: don't look shocked baby...I know everything about u...

N: yes they are with me to protect me from evil like u...

M: let them do their best...but know one thing that u can't escape me...

N:listen stay away from me...

As she tries to walk past him...he grabs her hand

N: just leave me or...

M: or what baby:

N: if u don't stop disturbing me...then u will get more of these...saying this she hits his face with her shoe

Manik is shocked..

N: if u don't stop these sick games of urs I'll make sure u get this again infront of the whole school...she smirks at his expression...

his face red in anger...he can't believe this girl have hit him with a shoe...

he drags her to the nearby wall and pins her there...as she look into his eyes..she flinched ... his eyes red...a darker shade of red...he bends his head removes the collar of her shirt with his one hand...she is struggling n hitting him but is nothing compared to his strength...he bends his head a bit more n says closer to her ear..."sssh quiet"...the cold voice gave a shiver down her spine...

bending a bit more he gives a hard bit at the junction of her neck...she shrieks...her eyes tears up...as he looks up he sees her trying to suppress her sobs...holding her face in between his hands he rubs her tears from her cheeks...

M: sssh..stop crying...this was ur punishment for hitting me...this was the first n last time u behaved this way with me...ok..

Giving a chaste kiss on her cheek n a light peck on the bite he goes out of the room.

Nandini slides down on the floor n breaks down

Precap : SLAP...

Malhotra family...some truths...

Nyonika's daughter...who is she???

Girls comes to Mumbai

P.S.this is the first time I've written something rough(Manan meeting)...I don't know if it was upto ur expectations...I'm a softie at heart n cant even watch angst scenes, I don't know how I wrote itπŸ˜† ADITI:)






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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting..
I really liked it..
Nd i must say for the first time its awesome...
I like grey stories..as they have some real fun.
Loved it
Cont soon
Love mini
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Hey plz update next part. It is nice n different story from others. Very interesting.
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manik he knows all her moves secret 4 n their meeting place
group hug of girls πŸ‘ interesting ..nandu hit her with shoes
the way he reacted n precap slap ...continue soon ty for pm
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awsome update..continue soon..waiting for the next chapter...
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A LEAF OUT OF HIS BOOK:

She was 3 when i met her for the first time. Dark brown eyes, shoulder length hair, button nose. In a cute pink frock she looked like a Barbie. 14 year old me was fascinated with her. I just wanted to talk to her as I saw her telling something to mom explaining them with her hands. Her eyes were shining like stars. As i went towards her to speak to her, she looked at me with her big eyes...

M: hi I'm Manik

She looked at me once n then at my hand that i held towards her... looked towards her mother n walked away. My friendship was REJECTED.

She was my sister's best friend and would come often to my house. Our families too were close friends n business partners.

Years passed...she was 9 now. A beautiful girl of her age. The two girls are even more close now. They are always together. Whenever she comes home mom pushes me to party n clubs. I wonder why?

Few months after her 9th birthday, we were at a dinner at her place. When through conversations otherwise the topic of marriage came up.

Dad: me n Venkat have taken a decision.

We all became alert.

Venkat: well to secure the future of both our kid we have decided that after Nandini finishes her school we will get Manik n Nandini married.

M: dad uncle what are u ppl saying ? she is a kid.

D: relax manic we are not getting u two married now. She will grow up complete her education n then we will get u ppl married.

V: yes Manik ur dad is right its a contract.

No one other than dad n uncle were speaking. Mom n aunty were sitting numb n somewhat pale. I didnot understand why?

D: n whoever amongst both the parties breaches the contract will have to pay 300 crores to the other party.

It was a funny idea of marrying this kid. But somewhere i felt happy about it . i knew i interrupted my thoughts.

"no i wont marry him. He is so ewwwew. He wont play doll house with me. I don't like him." I felt hurt at her rejection. Along with that came anger n possessiveness. How can she say she wont be mine? She has to be mine i will make sure of it.

As days passed by she became my favourite pastime. I used to observe her from far away. 10 yrs old Nandini Murthy was a lonely child. Her parents fought constantly, that have somehow affected her growing years. She only spoke to my sister, her supposed bff. By now they were always together. Spending all their waking hours in each others house.

Dad passed away n overnight the Murthy's shifted somewhere. My doll was no more in front of me. Nyonika left. She hated me, even more now. Court gave my sister to Nyonika. She was sent to hostel. Where? I dint know.

I took up business. But the only thought that was in my mind 24 hrs. I missed my baby, my little to-be bride terribly. It was one fine day when my detective informed that Nandini was studying in my shimla school. My sister too was found. Both bffs were together. I felt at the top of the world. I immediately started off to space.

Today when i stood infront of her i felt that she would recognise me. My doll, my baby. As i held her hand she pushed me away. When i went to that room to speak to her she hit me as an expression of rejection. I couldn't take this rejection today . hence i behaved like this with her. Though seeing her in pain i feel bad but she too needs to understand that SHE IS MINE. She cant reject me now.

As I'm travelling back to Mumbai its just a break so that my littlt bride to be can enjoy her last days as a spinster cuz next time i will be back to take my wife.

Next time both NAVYA n NANDINI will be back with me to their original place. This time no Nyonika or Harshad can stop me.

Ok so there is a big revelation. Im really sorry for being this late. Pakka next time se proper update..ekdum time pe.

I think the chapter is boring. But this part was nessacery at this point of the story. Since some of u ppl think the subject is harassing n taboo. This part doesn't change anything of manik's behaviour. He would still be a monster.

Plz like n comment.

IF ANYONE EVER FINDS MY STORY ANYWHERE OTHER THAN IF PLZ TELL ME IMMEDIATELY. I'VE NOT PERMITTED ANYONE TO COPY MY WORK.

ADITIJ

Edited by aditi16 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: paarsaa

its so small
give bigger one

kal phir update milega...tu comment toh thoda lamba de😲
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