HIS LITTLE BRIDE-a manan story part 11 pg 87 - Page 15

piyu008

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

hey I know its gray..but still looking at their age difference and she being a school kid n him trusty ..this all seems a pure harassment..

I have seen such many cases in real that's why m saying this!!

well coming to the writing..you are amazing ..

nice update..

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ruchi116

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Nice update I'm waiting for manan marriage n their hot romance. I like this grey shaded manik its good to read their romance . pls make it a bit more romantic

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86MISHA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Amazing

Awesome

Something new

Something different

Eagerly waiting for the next

Update soon...

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Fatima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

I'm liking it...liking the wildness of Mr malhotra...bug poor nandini...update soon plz

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anya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

awesome update!!!

u wrote something different...

which no one can expect...

bt its nice...

loved it...

ur point of view is different...

cont soon...

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jashanpreet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Amazingly elwritten episode...
I am impressed...
So overwhelmed...
Loved in every sense...though Manik is really bad...
But I trust that he will be changed one day
Update soon...and continue soon

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music_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

Nice n intense update. 😳It's vry different. I like the way girls protect nandini.👏 So manik knows everything about her. He called them army.😆 But u make it different by great shoe beating by nandini to manik. It's Awesome. Nobody can think like Tht. So it's increased expectations from your story. It's a challenge for both of them now. I really loved it n will wait for your next update.

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