dhamakedar meeting hui hai
one more misunderstandingnd abt rosy..ok i will wait😊
Whow!!!
This was MIND-BLOWING!!!Fab one Keechu...Loved it...👏U gotta Write more n More...wuld love to read more of it..can't wait👍🏼
Originally posted by: Lovestory55
And thats an entry!!! AMAZING! U need to update soon because man that was awesome!!!!!
Originally posted by: vrushan_deeksha
loved the update...
Ur an awesome writer..
Will be waiting for Ur updates
plz continue both the ff's. plz...
Omg..it was a powerpacked update!!
Absolutely loved itI really want to know whats happening exactlyWhy they both hate each otherUpdate soonish!!!Nd do reveal stuff😊
Originally posted by: existentialism
Ooohhh... A meet after a long wait and this is what happens!!! Nice update. Too many questions running in my mind and I need answers. And for answers I need updates. So please update soon.
Originally posted by: Spark.Shreya
That was a totally unpredictable update!..This is one gripping story and I'm looking forward to see how its going to turn out ..Waiting for next part!..Very well written!...Many questions have to be answered ...the most awaited being why did sharon slap him after reciprocating the kiss!..
Update soon...waiting for next !
Originally posted by: mythreyii
Hey keechu
First of all thank u for the superb fast and awesome update
Loved every bit of it
So now they are at France and theymet at a wrong ttime
Swaron kissed... But not at the right time and place...
Jealous swayum bus always fun but the update was so good
Wishd swayum had seen d guy forcing shar and beat him
Anyways waiting what exactly happened between them
Jus update next one soon like this
Now I want fast update
Great work dude loving both ur ff
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