Incomplete - A Warrior High Fan Fiction
Episode 17 : Fire and Flames
As Vidurshi goes inside the room, Lucky lights a match stick and puts on one of the lamp near her. He then goes away.
Ishaan who is standing near a corridor from where the store room is seen. Parth comes there for some reason.
I (comes in his way) - Tum yahan nahi jaa sakte ho.
P - Kyun nahi?
I - Kyun ki yahan ka volunteer main hoon aur main kehta hun tum yahan se nahi ja sakte...
Parth stares at him while Ishaan firmly stands there without letting Parth that side.
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Rohan is standing on the field waiting for Lucky to give a signal. Suddenly he hears a voice "Rohan?" He turns behind and is shocked to see siyali.
Ro - Siyali (shocked) Tum yahan ho to wahan...?
Si - What?? Anyways Ma'am tumhe bula rahe hain shayad unhe tumse Koi kaam hai.
Siyali walks away. Rohan sees Lucky walking towards him with a packet of chips.
Ro - Lucky (drags him to side) Tu yahan kya kar raha hai?
L - Tuu yahan kyaa kar raha hai? Maine toh Siyali ko store room mein bandh kardiya. Tumhe toh jaana chahiye tha na. Bachane ke liye.
Rohan gives a sarcastic smile, holds Lucky's head and turns it towards Siyali. Lucky opens his mouth.
L - Siyali yahan hai toh,.. (Looks at Rohan) Store room mein kaun hai?? (Scared look)
They hear a voice 'Aaa'
Ro (scared) - Awaaz toh store room se aa rahi hai. (Looks at lucky) Tumne kya kiya?
L - Wohhh (guilty look) Aag laga di wahan.
Ro (shocked) - Kya? Lucky jaake fire extinguisher leke aao.
They both run.
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Lucky runs to Ishaan who is still having a disagreement with Parth.
L (fast and scared) - Ishaan! Store room mein... Bohat badi aag lagi hui hai... Fire extinguisher.
I - Wat? Aur Rohan?
L - Woh madath maangne ke liye gaya hai.
I - Okay. Let's go.
Parth hears this and goes towards the store room.
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Vidurshi is stuck inside the fire. She runs front and back trying to reach the door. She couldn't as she is surrounded by fire.
Suddenly she hears a voice from the window "Vidurshi! Vidurshi" The boy keeps his hand on the window bar. Vidurshi holds his hand
"Please help me. (Panics) Bacha'o. Please"
She couldn't see properly as the smoke was thick. She couldn't breathe either and starts coughing. The voice says "Daro math. Main aa raha hoon. Ya? I'm coming for you"
She moves to the middle of the room coughing. Everything starts becoming blur. She sees someone coming near her. A blur image of the person saving her. And she faints on him.
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Male teachers and guards are seen trying to stop the fire. Vidurshi is lying inside the corridor next to Parth as a nurse attends to her.
Nurse - Please bring her to the sick room.
Parth picks her up and goes behind the nurse. All the other students stand around. Niti, Angela and Utkarsh are worried for Vidurshi.
Si - Yeh aag lagi kaise?
K - May be koi ek lamp buja nahi hoga and it would have created this.
Rohan looks at Lucky angrily and drags him away from the others.
Ro - Ek kaam theek se nahi kar sakta hai kya?
I - Rohan! Chodo na. Uski kya galti hai? Aag lag gayi toh, yeh kya karega?
Rohan stares at Lucky who is giving a sheepish look. He hits him on his head.
Ro (sarcastic and irritated) - Yeh kya karega? Bolo Lucky. Ishaan pooch raha hai! The fire wasn't an accident. Isne lagayi.
I - Pagal hogaya kya? (Looks at Rohan) Ab kya?
L (scared) - Phas jaa'engey
Ro (angry) - Idea toh tera tha na?
L - Haan. Filmon mein yahi hota hai. Om shanti Om nahi dekha kya?
Ro (tries to strangle Lucky) - Tujhe toh.
I - Rohan, I think we should go back. Log suspicious ho jaa'engey.
They go back near the store room.
FireFighter (to Anwesha ma'am and Urmila ma'am) - Aap bohat lucky hain. Thoda zyaada lag jaata toh, poora school jal gaya hota.
L (whispers in a funny way) - Iss ladki ko girane ke chakkar mein poori school ko jalane waala tha.
I (stares) - Apna muh bandh rakh.
Sid moves towards Vidyut who is standing near the store room. Vidyut takes a burnt match stick from inside which suggested that the fire was started deliberately and not a accident. Vidyut is shocked, takes the match stick in his hand and leaves the spot to stay near his sister. Sid still standing there hears the conversations going on around
N - Lamp lekar toh tum jaane wali thi na Siyali?
A - Oh my god. Vi ki jagah tum ho sakti thi. Hope Vi is fine.
Siyali looks at Sid who looks back at her and thanks god that her shawl had gotten stuck in the nail. As siyali turns away, sid starting wondering. Seeing the match stick it was confirmed that the fire wasn't an accident. Now the question was if it was set up for Siyali or Vidurshi.
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Next day morning, The trio, Parth and Angela visit Vidurshi in the clinic. They see her coming out with Vidyut.
U - Tum theek ho?
Vi (playfully) - Utkarsh, main theek kaise ho sakti hun.? Main toh seedhe aag se bahar aayi hoon.
They all laugh. Parth takes vidurshi' hand
P - Tum kaisa ho?
Vi - Haat thoda jal gaya. Par ab theek hai. Otherwise I'm fine.
Vidyut gets angry seeing parth holding Vidurshi's hand. He pulls Vidurshi towards him.
Vd - Meri behan se door raho. Samjhe
All others stare at Vidyut seeing him behave rudely towards Parth.
A - Are you mad? Ussne tumhari behan ki jaan bachayi.
Vd - Jaan bachane ke liye thanks. Is bahane ko lekar uske qareeb aane ki koshish bi math karna.
Vi - Bhaiya...
Vd - Chup raho Vi.
P - Dekho main teri behen ke qareeb aane ki koshish nahi kar raha hoon.
Vd - Ya whatever. I don't want a guy like you to even be near my sister. Jo apne teacher ko bhi galat nazar se dekhta hai.
Parth gets really angry and comes to fight with Vidyut.
Vd - Kyun? Sach bolne se gussa aa raha hai?
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Precap :
The trio along with Simmi, Angela and Parth are seen talking.
U - Sid ne Parth ke drink mein sharab mila diya.
A (shocked) - Sid ne aisa kiya?
Si (lost in thoughts) - Sid ne nahi kiya.
Everyone stares at Siyali who is lost in thoughts
P.s. no sidyali scene. Will be in next episode!
Just wanted to know if you guys liked so far?
And if ur comfortable with new characters! As i told You before all of them were introduced for a reason.
Rohan was introduced as a villian in Sidyali story. And when there is a main villian he needs jis friends to help him in being evil and that is where Ishaan, Lucky and Trishna came in.
When theres a bad character, you need a good one to balance the story. And that is where Vidurshi came. And for her support her brother Vidyut.
Leaving others, Rohan and Vidurshi plays an important role in the life of all other charecters. One in a bad way and the other one in a good way to equalise things.
This was my idea.
I've already formulated the gist of the story in my head.
But if you guys don't find them good, then i need to minimise their role to a much lower extent.
And so far the reason they're given more space in episodes are just for the readers to understand their character.
Just wanted to know your feedback on how much u like it or if you don't like it 🥱
Edited by Aisha-Haja - 9 years ago
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