SwaRon FF : Conspiracy By Fate (Chapter 17 updated!!!) - Page 20

paro1311

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Posted: 8 years ago

#191

Ha! Finally an update and wat an update! Was stalking this space since morning:)

So let me just process this... Swayam and Sharon just went all the way with Rey right thr. Tat sounds so messed up but at the same time so real. Swayam's thought process was so awesome. This is how things happen in real life nd not what goes on in TV shows. I'm so impressed that u put up this update:) I love u gal for making Swayam's so believable. Next update is hopefully soon as u've just left it at such an interesting point

Once again; brilliant chapter, all 3 parts:)

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Aneesha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#192

This was nothing vulgar and hence, there is nothing for you to feel embarrassed about. But Rey being there the whole time snoring away to glory... that was 😲. Swayam is right on his part to feel disgusted with himself. As usual, you penned down the whole update beautifully. The longing, somewhere the attraction they hold for each other, really nice. Can't wait to know what is in store for them. & my, what is Rey gonna do when/if he finds out about this?? You have kept me on the edge. Next Friday, come fast.

Thanks for the pm.

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prajana

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Posted: 8 years ago

#193

All the three parts were simply amazing

Soo emotional

Both of them just opened up to each other

I dont want much awkwardness between them after all this

Although swayam is bound to feel guilty..hope he soon realizes that sharon does not have feeling for rey

update soon😊

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Neet

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Posted: 8 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: srstrulez

I am sorry... I couldn't help but laugh at the comment. Man the Caps lock and stuff... Don't get me wrong, I absolutely love your comment but what I love more is your shock! Now I am feeling something resembling happy as well as embarrassed... :P

hahah! I am glad i could be entertaining! But sly what got to me was that Rey slept through it! That was just something i am still trying to process though ahaha! But still glad that you found it funny!

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Labiba islam

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Posted: 8 years ago

#195

Don't worry it was an awesome part

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Ananya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#196

i just read last 4 chaps in 1 go. i m loving dis ff more cos of its unconventional swaron. love u srishti for writing dis ff... ur every ff is diff... keep writing girl... & last chap ws hot. 😳 😛 well penned... keep writing girl... 🤗

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Neeraj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#197

beautiful piece of writing😉

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Neeraj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#198

well penned... keep writing girl... 🤗

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Neeraj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#199

Nice update...

do continue soon...😊

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mythreyii

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Posted: 8 years ago

#200

No idea how I missed all parts of ch13

Well all the updates were beautiful

Swaron in every part made it all the more special

The way swayum could easily put his past in front of her and how sharon wanted to tell and did tell him major part of her life was something we had been waiting to happen

A great work all the three updates was amazing girl

The kiss that they shared is going to do what is more in tour hands so awaiting what is in store for us

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