Originally posted by: aash2302
This story has to be the most amazinglyrics written story ever. Even the writers couldn't come up with such a storyline. Amazing work.
It was emotionally tiring to write it I understand but it was worth the wait .Keep up the good workLoveAashritha
Originally posted by: aarushappu
Wow... what an update!!!!!!
It was too too good. The way you portrayed the scenes, I could imagine it playing out in my head. Cannot explain the feeling that I've got while reading it.Feel like reading it again and again... Seriously, a masterpiece guysπNo wonder you guys took time... it was worth the wait...you are doing great...Keep it up.
Originally posted by: RaizadaPriya
haaassh Ananya is saved
godd that was a breath taking updatei loved it where Ananya was remembering her fatherthat was really emotionalwell it was too goodso plz continue soonwill be waiting for the next
Originally posted by: -Prinky-
Awesome !!!!!!
The whole scenario...each & every details...so beautifully penned...It give me the feel like I was watching it in front of me...the tension...the terror...so visible...it was a flawless...amazing...piece of writing...gr8 job...πππThanks for pmcontinue soon...
Just simply amazing rocking updateππ ur updates are worth waiting πππ thanx for pm...
Originally posted by: -purnima-
*phew* what a relief...glad to see Ananya darling all safe & sound...& Hero not being literally knight in shining armour in filmy style but still glad to have him around when Ananya being brave & escaped...
Hum filmy dialogues zyaafa pasand karte hai... agar Kabir sach main beech main aa jata toh Ananya ke saath saath uska bhi the end ho jaata π
Poor girl ...can only imagine how traumatic & difficult situation wud have been for her...& she indeed had been luck to survive when many unlucky one just faced cruelsome fate at hands of terrorism...Ah... trust us, it had been so difficult to write, literally a storm was on us!
Inspite of all, it was brave of Ananya to be a vigilant reporter & responsible citizen...kudos to her...
That's Ananya for you π³
Coming to my hero Mr. Sharma, hope he is now breathing fine...poor him, only he knows how he kept himself calm & composed knowing "his Ananya" is in danger...& still had to be all professional... if it was for him he wud have just wished to barge in & save his damsel in distress ...
Hahaha... yeah poor Hero is still in a dilema *chuckles* Ab dil ki baatein asaan kaha hoti hai?
Lolz & wonder if its coincidence...here too soon Kabir wud b dealing with RG π ...God bless him π In RG bhaisaab ki bhi lag gayi π π π if even 1% Kabir's doubts turn true...what he is thinking turns accurate ... My Kabir not gonna spare π π dooba doobakar dhoega π πTrust me it's nothing but a coincidence... or maybe π Well be ready to be surprised!
All the best to my hero!!!
Originally posted by: Sokool27
Seriously it's awesome.
It was realistic situation.Brave girl of a brave leughtent. Liked this scenario of Ananya's father being a army man.In that memory of his you also gave good message" fight for life"..ππAnd Kaya are still unknown of their feelings for each other. ππI hope there'll be more of KaYa conversation or their working together on the minister's lead.Waiting for the next update.Thanks for the pm.
Originally posted by: Godly_Affection
Another awesome update dearβοΈ
loved it!Nehaaa... thank u so much <3You've portrayed the emotions perfectly, I could see all of it happening right in front of my eyes! πWell. action is my favt, you've shown it aptly! very well done!!ππΌPhew... bhai we're happy u loved the action bit!I really loved the way you've portrayed the relation of everyone, it seems like a small family! Specially Malvika, her positive side was nice!π³Haha... she ain't much significant...Ananya n her dad's fb was sweet! He gave her the strength she needed! "...Fight for life", very true!<3 Thanks...Kabir was giving a live telecast, ah.. it was so beautifully written!π He was shocked to see her helping the officers with the info, this girl is of totally different kind! I love this girl! π *not that way*π€£Hahahahahahahahahaha... lol!!!! Glad you loved it dear!Garewal, hmm, next part seems interesting!πDo continu soonThanks for pmsπLove you too...Love you loads,π€You know ππHaw! Do I know you π€£
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Originally posted by: ArthunaAlive
Guys Guys you are master Word Magicians !!!!!!!!!!! A v big wala Salute to your craft !!!!!!! πππ Absolutely emotionally thrilling update . ππΌ More Power To You !!!!!!!ππΌ
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