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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Kutties... πŸ˜ƒ

New FF... 😳

I couldn't stop writing it πŸ€“

I had started SYWPOM with this theme but something felt amiss in the story πŸ˜•
I've completed it with two more chapters. (Yet to post πŸ˜† )

So thought of plotting differently.

Trust me it's going to be superb πŸ˜‰

Look I'm so excited

Once again thanks Janani 😳



CHARACTER SKETCH


Raman Kumar Bhalla (Age 35) same as in the serial, is a business man. He hates marriage.

Ishita Iyer (Age 31) is a dentist (I know again same πŸ˜† ).

Romi Bhalla two years younger to RKB. He is a widower with a six year old daughter, Ruhi Bhalla. (Wife, take Sarika. Not relevant πŸ€”)

MY POV

Setting is the old Mayur Vihar. Bhallas and Iyers rival-neighbours. The mother's little kitty fights are taken seriously by Raman and Ishita. And they kept on fighting without even knowing the reason why their mothers are fighting. πŸ˜†

The story has no twists and turns as of now πŸ˜‰ (Telling you beforehand 🀣 )
I'm stick to plan A with some plan A1...A2...A3 😈

It's all about Raman and Ishita 's relationship.
How they falls in love and...
I won't tell you πŸ˜›


What you think of it... 😳

COMMENT ONNN... πŸ˜ƒ

Gaya3


INDEX

Chapter-1 Tere Dil Mein Kya Hai ?

Chapter-2 Aaja Zara Pyar Karle

Chapter-3 Tanha Tanha

Chapter-4 Adoora Tum Bin Har Jaha

Chapter-5 Rehna Hai Bas Yahan

Chapter-6 Kyun Doori Hai Ab Darmiyan

TEASER-1

Chapter-7 Que Sera Sera

Chapter-8 Yeh Hai Mohabbatein

Chapter-9 Itna Bhi Nah Karo Mujhse Pyar

Chapter-10 Tere Liye...

TEASER-2

Chapter-11 Junoon...

Chapter-12 Hum Donon Ke Milan

Chapter-13 Chup Chup Ke

Chapter-14 Adhoori Khwaahishein

Chapter-15 Saat Phere...

Chapter-16 Tu Jo Hai...

TEASER-3

Chapter-17 Mohabbat Ki Harkat

Chapter-18

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..abha.. thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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res...
Nice concept yar...baki kuch tha hi nhi isme...too much burden...

btw whats this I had started SYWPOM with this theme but something felt amiss in the story πŸ˜•
I've completed it with two more chapters. (Yet to post πŸ˜† )

seriously...see i will bring gang there🀣

dont mind just joking...
Edited by --abha-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --abha--

res...

btw whats thisI had started SYWPOM with this theme but something felt amiss in the storyπŸ˜•
I've completed it with two more chapters. (Yet to postπŸ˜†)

seriously...see i will bring gang there🀣


Kyuuunnn??? 😲
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thanks 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Gaya3sb


Kyuuunnn??? 😲


updated above...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
 
kyunki u have completed it...but not posted...
but why u complete it...i love that bold ishu...
Edited by --abha-- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey twist queen ready with another story am really excited and looking forward to it... I think we will be able to see lots of ishra nok jhoks continue soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sri1091

Hey twist queen ready with another story am really excited and looking forward to it... I think we will be able to see lots of ishra nok jhoks continue soon...


Yipeee... πŸ˜ƒ
Sure 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --abha--


updated above...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

kyunki u have completed it...but not posted...
but why u complete it...i love that bold ishu...


I'll post it tonight... 😳
And and...
You may feel it an abrupt ending...
And may feel it is not over πŸ˜†
But I lost interest in it πŸ˜† πŸ˜‰
I couldn't workout the theme there.
I want a pleasant platform 😊
So started this one πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Gaya..
im back to spam here also..
superb stupid brain of urs decided no twists at last.. yiyyy
okay.. am super excited now
post post post post
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sush_rddt

Gaya..

im back to spam here also..
superb stupid brain of urs decided no twists at last.. yiyyy
okay.. am super excited now
post post post post


Not here da kutta 😳
Thanks for liking it Sush 😊