Ariya *~* Oh my baby*~* part 3 out...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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HEYYA PEOPLE...
I'm back again to eat ur heads off with another story...
BUT this time not alone...
My partner in crime Stuti [ angelariya] is with me...
There's the concept...
plzz do give ur reviews cozz it will help us to decide to continue it or not start it...


Ariya~*~Oh my baby~*


prolgue

a girl come
from office & found a baby crying on the doorstep of her house, she
was confused y someone will leave this small & cute baby in front of
someone's door , she bend down & took the baby in her arms &
feel that the baby belongs to her, she was feeling tht she knw the baby
very welly. she took the baby & the basket inside & found a note
which shocked her to the wits
.

dear, riya

mein ja rhi hu , mujhe nhi pata kaha kyu pr mein iss duniya se bohot dur
jana chahti hu , yaha mera dam ghut rha hai , har jagah beman log dikh
rhe hai , har jagah nafrat , har jagah kisi ka fayda uthana , kisi ki
massomiyat ka istamal krna yehi dikh rha hai , kisi pr bharosa krkr lgta
hai galti krdi , pta hai mere pati ne mujhe chod diya aur maa baba bhi
mujhe apna nese mana kr rhe hai , tumne bohot sahi kiya unki baat ne
maankr apni zindagi k faisle khud lekr pta hai voh mujhe aur iss nanhi
jaan ko chodkr chale gaye dar dar ki thokre khane ko, mujhse yeh aur
saha nhi ja rha isslye mein ja rhi hu tum sab se bohot dur pr mere liye
meri pari ka khayal rkhna , aur mujhse wada kro ki tum usse kbhi uski
maaki kami mehsoos hone nhi dogi , aur isse har musibat se bachogi aur
maa-baba k paas isse lekr kbhi mat jana mein unki koi madat lena nhi
chahti promise mr riya.
                                                                                                                tumhari didi
                                                                                                                        ankita

herlife has taken a sudden change with this new responsibility on her, now
wht will life holds for her in future wht happen when a girl who don't
believe in love & don't trust people easily is send to an unknown
place with this new soul wht will happen with her there, will the girl
ever be able to come out of her fear & trust someone & see love
not hurt always. will she able to fulfill her promise & protect the
baby from all the problems & take care of her. join the girl in this
new journey of life wth this infant baby...


Here's the prolgue...
Everyone do reply back 4 us to decide to start it or not...
Thnkss 4 ur precious time...

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Character Sketch..


riya mukharjee


Opposite the serial
Bold, strong lady...
Has an elder sister Ankita
abt to join ETF
Research specialist
does not believe in love.
.actually scared to fall in love
and doesn't trust people easily
has only few but close frnds
shree is her bff
Her duty stays first for her before the arrival of the small angel in her life...


Arjun Suryankanth Rawte..


Total opposite the show...
No past .. 
No brutal murder of wife ...
Nothing
he's an Acp 
second in command of ETF..
BFF of Sam [Brother like relationship]
loves life
Flirts type
enjoys life
Friendly nature
but strict at work
and cares for all
no aware tht he's life is gonna change.


Sameer Damsingh Rathore


Cheif of ETF
he's an ACP
Bff of arjun [Brother like relationship]
loves ayesha but doesnot tell her
Strict boss
but cares 4 everyone
loves his team as his family


Ayesha Kapoor


Encounter specialist
loves sam but does not tell me...
friendly nature
cares 4 everyone

Shreekanth Sen



nickname''shree''
Tech expert
always fighting with liza 
has a small crush on liza doesnot tell her...
friendly nature
BFF of Chotu & riya



Liza D'Cruz


forensic specialist
always fighting with shree
friendly nature
has crush on shree but does not tell him...


Chandrakanth Patil


Nickname''CHOTU''
commandor of ETF
in love with his 11:30 wali..
strict looks but child like behaviour
BFF of shree
treats ETF girls as his younger sisters..
loves food



Ankita Mukharjee


elder sister of riya
loves her a lot
was away frm her
changes riya's life completely
but missing now leaving her daughter with riya


Angel


few months old
daughter of Ankita
Ankita didnt get time to name her so Riya calls her angel
The one who changes Riya's life


and there's no sakshi here...

So here's the character sketch...


Edited by SanaHolic - 8 years ago
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INDEX


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Posted: 8 years ago
#4
Interesting start
loved the prologue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome
loveit
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#6
Wow
Awesome concept
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Awesome concept...
Continue soon

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#8
awesome concept
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
Interesting..
Emotional prologue..
Please continue sooonish.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice prologue
Cont soon